IF-II2 - Contest 4 - Page 8

oh ho. dont fight .. everything is fine. 😃

sumesh bhai..i noe amey's is long(can u imagine, it was 5 pages b4, now itz onli a lil over 2)

but once u start reading ull get into it...u wont even realize wen it finishes 😆 😆 😆

ok guys chill.... wht ever stories has been posted are simply fantastic.. n m still wiating 4 meenal n karunya story. i think i will give them more time till tomm mor.. coz its 26 th still in other countries.

aarey after reading all stories.. i felt tht, everyone should get their love. Ppl should b united with the ones they loved. 😛 😃
seriously, u ppl will tought time to all judges now. 😉

I wanna be in the Sandeep house?? how do u play this game?? 😕

Originally posted by: ReXLoVeR

I wanna be in the Sandeep house?? how do u play this game?? 😕

the contest is nearly over...and sandeep's house was eliminated last week

hey neha house..ur story's cute

heheh lucky ryan!!! the prettiest gurl in collage is after uuuuu 😉 😉 😉

Characters:

Wizgal------- Itisha
Jizzy-------- Kamini
Saad_786------- Saad
Prettyguria
Fg_fan
Misspriya-------Priya
Amar Kapoor
&
Meenal Jain

Theme : PICNIC

Fan Fiction

ONE WHO DARES IT

Meenal desperately punched numbers on the phone. It was already 11 am and she did not want her excursion to the Jim Corbett Park with her friends to be further delayed. Meenal Jain a young, bubbly and vivacious college-going girl was mumbling to herself while waiting for the answer. Finally somebody picked it up from the receiverfs end.


Meenal said eKamini, where are you sweetie, we are so late we wont even be able to catch the tigers.f Kamini replied ejust relax, I will be off in 5 minutes, Itisha & Saad are going to meet us there only err , but Amar Kapoor called up to say that he would not be joining us.f.

Meenal gave a slight shudder. Amarfs name always sent a shiver down her spine. He was the heart-throb of the college, in fact almost every girl was mad about him, Meenal too was one of them, but she was never able to confess her secret love for him.

Meenal picked up her binoculars and her jacket and finally left for the park. When she reached there she saw that Kamini and Saad were already there chatting together. A little behind she saw Itisha hooked on her mobile. When they all saw Meenal, they waved her a big Hi and off they started with their trekking. Priya, Prettyguria and Fg_fan were still missing but they decided that if they waited for them they will get further delayed. Meenal suggested that they should call Priya through Itishafs mobile and inform her that they will be waiting for them inside the park. Meenal bought tickets and also informed the guard that they are expecting three more friends. .
They went inside the park and were flabbergasted to see the natural beauty. They also spotted few birds. They were enjoying themselves when suddenly Saad noticed that Kamini had her mouth wide open. She could barely manage to point her finger towards the trees. There were a group of 12-13 guys along with an inspector trying to shoot some deer. .

Itisha, who was the youngest and the most short tempered girl of all, rushed towards them. She asked them ewhat the hell do you think you are doing? Donft you know that hunting is illegal and you are an inspector.f But even before she could complete her sentence, one of the huge guys shoved her back. Another guy tried coming up to hit her. Meenal, who had the reputation for always being calm & composed, tried to control the situation. She pleaded elisten, what she is saying is true. And officer, you should be arresting them instead of joining them.f
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But the matter became so intense that Meenal failed to notice a figure slinking towards her. Quick as a flash he came behind her and gave her a hard push. She was down on the ground. She could faintly hear the cries of dismay of her friends, but then, Meenal just couldnft open her eyes and everything blacked out!.

It was a dark, cold place. Apparently, the guys had overpowered all the others and captivated them in some strange house. Saad was the first one to regain consciousness. He tried to wake-up Kamini who was the nearest to him. U r r m. Kamini gave a slight groan. God what happened? Meenal woke up too..

It took them some time to realize that they had been taken into captivity. Kamini could see two guys standing with a dog, outside the window. Quickly Meenal said we have to untie ourselves and move out of this place. They all untied the ropes from their hands.
eHow, how do we get out of heref Itisha whispered ethose guys are guarding the door; there is simply no way out.f The words were hardly out of her mouth when the man had opened the door. Saad came rushing from behind, but by then the other man had let the dog free. The dog jumped up on him. He tried to rise but the muscular animal was too strong for him..

The three girls looked, horrified by the sight. Suddenly courage returned to Meenal. She rushed around the corner of the house where she saw a hose coiled around on a hook near the foundation. After quickly unwinding it, she turned on the water full force, and then hurried back. Surprised and shocked, the guys started running away, but the war was not yet over. eKamini and Saad ran and get some help!f cried Meenal eItisha and I will go after the hunters.f.

Meanwhile, Itisha also tried to call up the police from her mobile. As the guy saw her reaching for her phone, he turned back. He put his one hand inside his coat. Suddenly it occurred to Meenal that he might be reaching for a secret weapon!.

But before he had a chance, Meenal grabbed his arm and yanked it upward. Ga-ga-gac.the man gurgled. The other tried coming up to save him, but before that the police jeep had come along with their three other friends---- Prettyguria, fg_fan and Priya. They told them when they reached the park; they saw that a group of guys were bashing them, so they informed the police..

eWell, now we have to ask them about their partners and have to get them all arrestedf Meenal said..

The police took the two guys into custody and forced them to tell about their friends. Two hours later, the commissioner came to meet them. He told them that they have arrested all the 12 guys and that the police officer has been suspended... He then congratulated them all and said eas u are aware that poaching is very rampant amongst the youngsters and it becomes really difficult to punish them when officers themselves are involved, but the kind of courage you all have shown specially Meenal by capturing the man with weapon, you have proved your bravery. You all are youth icons!f He also told them that he will send a special recommendation for all to their college principal and in the newspaper..

The next day in college, Meenal was sitting alone when somebody tapped her shoulder. eAmar !f Meenal exclaimed. Amar replied eYeah, itfs me. Actually, I just wanted to tell you what you did yesterday was very brave of you and we all are very proud of you. I also wanted to ask, if you are free this Saturday, we could go for dinner together.f Meenal couldnft believe her ears. Amar had asked her out!! It was such a warm, sunny day. Everyone was coming up to her and praising her. Meenal Jain loved everybody and everybody loved Meenal Jain..

-By Itisha(wizgurl)

meenal house great job 👏

i dont think u guys were allowed to add Amey even as amey kapoor cuz we asked the mods if we could add meenal as a fictional character and they didnt approve.

ok thanks i will change it