IF-II2 - Contest 4 - Page 5

Originally posted by: srk_lover

HEY MODS!!!!!! is it ok if it exceeds 2 pages??????

plssssssssss...we tried our level best to cut out things, and we did too....but we can't cut out anymore 😭

itz soooooo hard, every line in the fanfic is important

our fanfic (without the characters list and background) is about 3 and a quarter of a page...before it was 5....we did everything we can to make it shorter...we even changed meenal's name😳😳

so now itz basically ONLY 1 and a quarter pages more

is that ok?????? we're trying our best..but everyone is giving up becuz nothing more can be taken out

😒 plzzzzzzzzzzz 😔

aarey fine megha.. just chill chill.. n keep smiling..😃

thxxx sooooo sooooooo much sakshi...our house(Amey's house) tried our best but we really could not cut down the pages....thx...u r so nice 😛

thank you sakshi this is a good news.... 😊

Originally posted by: sapnokirani24

sakshi ur sooo kind! 😃

Thanks Pooja😊

hey frnds.. u rem.. t'day its last day .. post ur fan-fiction asap.

yes yes ...we will post!!! i think we're done...

thanks sooooooo much sakshi..ur the best

i knew u guyz loved me 😆

ok we're done!!!!! and we managed to cut another page off and make it 2 and a quarter of pages!!!!!!

aren't u guyz proud of us!!! we listen to u soooooo much!!!! 👏

ok...so where do we submit our entry??? do i submit it in my very first post on this thread???

hEY FOR OUR FAN FIC V R ONLY USING ME AND letz_rock CUZ THE OTHER MEMBERS DONT HELP.BYE

Panna house fan fic

By:- lovly_angel and yashika

theme:- 1) Picnic – In this you have to include all members of the house and hero should be your House contestant.

It all started when I e-mailed to panna and he replied back to me😊. He was really pleased to read my message and I requested him that I want to meet him with my friends yashika ,kriti, madhu and prakriti😳😳. He said that he was really busy and had no time.😭😭😭

Days went by.....😕😕😕

And he Finally mailed us back saying to meet in Mauritius 😃😃😃as he loved the beaches and had never gone to Mauritius before. We all friends met at the airport of Mauritius but our eyes were still looking to see that face that we always see in our dreams.

We all were really excited to meet him. To impress panna we all got gifts for him😉😉. Some of the gifts we bought were flowers, watch, perfume and digital camera and best gift that we hided was a collage of his pictures that we made one day before meeting him. 😛😛

As we were talking about the stuff we will do in our three day trip we heard the announcement of the air India flight landing from Mumbai. Our excitement was on the extreme point now. Suddenly yashika pointed out to for panna and we all were shocked😲 he was so damn cute and was wearing a blue jeans and white sweater on it. He was looking awesome in it😉😉😉. But as he didn't knew who we were so he passed away and didn't look at us. And we were so deep into him🥱 that we forgot to introduce ourselves to him.

When we came to our senses we saw that he was gone😕😕😕. Then kriti suggested that he must have gone to the hotel. We went to our hotel and found him sitting in the lounge waiting for us. We banged into him 😆for autographs and he hugged us and gave us his autograph😳😳. As we all were too tired from our journey so we decided to take rest and meet at evening beside the pool side of the hotel. At 7.00 pm we all met and decided to eat in the best restaurant of Mauritius.😊😊

After having our dinner we went for some shopping in the local market and i bought a shirt for panna😃 which he loved it. Then we went back to our hotel and slept. The next day we all met in the hotel restaurant for breakfast and to my surprise😲😲 panna was wearing the shirt I gifted to him yesterday evening and he was looking so dashing and cool in it. 😉😉

After we had our breakfast we went directly to the beach and the beach was so beautiful 😊and clean it was looking like a human made that beach but it was nature's wonders👏👏👏. We had fun in water relaxed on sand and made sand castles. Prakriti made a beautiful castle for panna and panna in return gave her a wonderful sign on that castle😳😳. It was almost 5 in the evening and we decided to go back to our hotel.

We changed and met again the lobby for dinner😃. We had a delicious Chinese food today and after we came back from the dinner we had a short interview with panna where we asked him about his journey in indial idol and a few personal questions😳😳. Then the last day of our picnic came and we were really sad as we had to apart today from the evening flight. But panna gave us his wonderful message of "Keep smiling"😊 and we were cheerful again.😃

Today we decided to go to the malls for shopping. We decided to go the Mauritius mall and there we were able to find lot of stuff of all countries. Panna bought some gifts for his family and he bought us soem small presents too which he said to open on the airport. We all shopped and at 4 pm we went back to our hotels and packed our bags as the flight was of 8.00 pm. We left the hotel in the taxi and reached the airport at 6.30. We chatted awhile in the airport cafe and opened our gifts😊😊. As soon as I opened my gift which was a wonderful picture of us in a beautifully designed frame I heard......

A glass breaking sound😕😕😕 and thought that someone in the cafe broke the coffee jar but I was wrong🤢🤢 I broke my glass of water😭😭 and realized it was a dream 😕😕😕but ahh what a wonderful dream of having a picnic with panna..😃

Cheers
Panna House

😆Neha's Valentine Day Fan Fiction😆

2) Love – Valentine Day – In this, Main lead will be your House contestant and every member should play some role.

Neha is the prettiest girl in the college and the main character.

fameguruklul_fan: Ryan is Neha's cute boyfriend.

letz_rock: Hibba is Neha's psychic charming best friend.

It was 2 days before Valentines Day, Neha was going to make her move. She was asking the cutest guy ever, Ryan to go to the Valentines Day dance with her. There were so many boys who asked Neha out because she was the prettiest girl in College but she only wanted Ryan. In the same way, there were so many girls who wanted to be her friend but she would only stick to her best friend Hibba.

So as she was going to make her move, Hibba came and asked her where she was going. She didn't answer him because she was deeply in love staring at Ryan. Then all of a sudden she didn't know what to say. Hibba told her to say, "Hi handsome, you're so cute. Do you want to go to the Valentines Day dance with me?" She said okay and walked towards Ryan taking deep breaths.

On the way, Hibba had a vision because she was psychic. She had a vision that Ryan was going to say yes to Neha. Neha got so excited and she screamt in joy. But then she realised that Hibba's visions aren't always true. So she told Hibba to go away and leave them alone.

Finally, she reached Ryan. Then she said to him, "Hi handsome, you're so cute. Do you want to go to the Valentines Day dance with me?" Ryan was shocked to hear that. He then told her, "You too. I was going to ask you tonight on the phone because I think you're so pretty and adorable." "Thanks" she replied. He then said, "I will come to pick you up a 6." She said okay.

It was a day before 14^th February and they were in the same class, and Neha was so very happy while she was staring at him, not paying attention to the teacher.

Class was over and Hibba was telling Neha that she was going to wear a red tank top and a black skirt. Neha didn't tell Hibba what she was going to wear as she was still thinking about Ryan. For her it was like a dream come true because she used to like him when she was small because they were childhood friends since their families were close friends.

It was the big day, 14^th February morning, and everyone was excited about the dance. People were giving roses, gifts, teddy bears, etc… Neha and Ryan didn't give Ryan anything because both of them decided to give gifts in the dance.

Finally the evening came and it was the dance. Everyone was dressed up especially Neha. She wore a hot red dress with thin straps. She had diamond earrings, necklace, bracelet, and rings. She was the hottest girl in the dance and everyone stared at her.

Ryan was well dressed too. He wore a black suit, with a silver shirt and tie, and black formal pants. He was the cutest guy in the dance. Hibba was well dressed too but the only thing was that she didn't have a date so she wasn't noticed.

Neha and Ryan were dancing so cutely and Hibba was sad that she didn't have a date. But she was so lucky that she spotted a guy who was cute but not as much as Ryan. So she asked him and they danced too.

Back to the story…

There were some snacks given out. Then they had a contest and everyone had to participate. Who ever dances the best and kisses the best wins the Best Valentines Day couple. The contest began and everyone was dancing on the song Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam. Then it was kissing time. Everyone didn't kiss except for Ryan and Neha.

They had won the Best Valentines Day Couple! They were so happy and they won a free trip to the Bahamas. They had a choice to bring a friend with them. Ryan didn't have any friend to bring so they decided to bring Hibba with them. Everyone was jealous of them but they didn't care.

So they went to the Bahamas, had a good holiday, and lived happily ever after!😃

The End