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Hi all.... this was my dare give by Srishti..... sorry its a bit long... but I wanted to describe things properly.... do get back with ur comments and feedback.. this is the first time I'm writing a fic kinda thing so forgive for any mistakes or if it's boring.....

U have to describe a situation where Tara and Adi are about to get married and Chandni is watching the whole incidence wearing the same saree that Adi gifted her ,Tara just came to know about Adi and Chandni's love and she(Tara) is coming to mandap in b/w she reveals the whole thing in front of everybody and tells Chandni 2 sit with Adi and both of them get married.Tara is going back 2 USA and Adi and Chandni had come to airport to see off her

And this is my 'story' ---

Finally Kamini succeeded in getting Tara and Adi hitched. Though Adi was very reluctant, his duties towards India Calling made him give in to his bhabi's unreasonable demands. After all, India Calling was the dream of his dear bhaiyya Vishesh.

Preparations were in full swing for the grand wedding. Adi was forlorn and had a lost look in his eyes.... Dadaji comes up from behind and says "Beta Adi.... maine to kaha tha tujhse ke shaadi ke liye mana karde aur Chandni se shaadi kar le… par tune meri baat nahin maani."

Adi- "Haan Grandpa, aap jo keh rahe the who theek tha par main India Calling ke taraf apni zimmedaari se moonh nahi morh sakta."

Dadaji – "Par puttar, teri zindagi ka kya?"

Adi – "Zindagi kaise bhi kat jayegi Grandpa. Lekin main Vishesh bhaiyya ko dukhi nahin kar sakta." With this Adi walks off from there and Grandpa is left staring after him….

Chandni and all other India Calling employees were naturally invited to the wedding. Though Amy tried to console her and tried to dissuade her from coming, Chandni wanted to put up a brave front and pretend to be strong, although she was hurting from the inside. She wears the same pink and blue saree that Adi had gifted her…. Just to make Adi remember his bewafaai and remind him that come what may… Chandni would always love him…. Both looking forlorn, Adi and Chandni make their way to the wedding hall… lost in each other's thoughts.

Meanwhile, Tara is also getting ready for the wedding. Wearing a red and golden ensemble, she is looking like a picture of beauty and elegance. With the finishing touches given, she is about to go and meet Kamini to ask if her dad and brother were going to come in time for the pheras. As she reaches Kamini's room, Tara hears voices coming from inside… a man and woman arguing about something. She listens closely and recognizes Dadaji and Kamini's voices.

Dadaji – "Bahu, ye tune theek nahin kiya. India Calling ke naam par tune Adi aur Chandni ke pyaar ki bali charhadi? Ye bilkul achcha nahin kiya."

Kamini – "Par Dadaji, maine jo kiya who ham sab ki bhalaai ke liye kiya, Chandni jaisi ladki hamare parivaar ke liye theek nahin hoti. Usme na to class hai na hi baat karne ki tameez. Silly middle-class girl. Us ki nazar sirf hamare paise par thi."

Dadaji – "Ye sach nahin hai bahu. Chandni waisi hai hi nahi. Woh bahut sansakari aur shareef ladki hai."

Kamini – "Agar who shareef hoti to shaadi se pehle Adi ke saath chakkar nahi chalaati."

Dadaji (angrily) – "Bahu…………"

And Kamini walks off in a huff from there. Outside, Tara Vadera is in deep shock. Chandni??? Adi was in love with Chandni and he never told her about it???? Tara was surprised…. "so Adi was doing all this just to save India Calling from being taken over by my dad…!!"

With a determined look on her face, Tara resolved to set things straight. "Ab koi Kamini vamini mujhe Adi aur Chandni ko milane se nahin rok sakti…"

The mandap was all ready, glittering and bright. The groom, Adi, looking dapper in his cream and gold sherwani with a red dupatta, was waiting for his bride. Chandni was right there in front of him, wearing the sari that he had gifted her. He tried hard not to look at her yet she came in his thoughts. Adi remembered all the moments spent with her and tears came to his eyes. He discreetly wiped them away and tried to harden his heart… India Calling was his bro's dream and he would not let it go away.

Tara was brought down to the mandap by Kamini, her joy barely concealed. Finally, India Calling would be in her control and Chandni would also be out of their lives… "Ise kehte hain ek teer se do nishaane…," she thought happily.

Tara cast one glance at Chandni and Adi and could see the sad looks that they were casting each other, thinking no one was watching them. Tara came and sat down. Chandni, though pretending to be strong could not take it any longer and turned away, trying to shut her ears off from the shehnai and the pandit's chantings. Suddenly, she heard Tara call her name. Stunned, she turned back and saw Tara standing and calling her to come to the mandap. Reluctant, she stood rooted to the spot.

Tara gently walked up to her and said, "Chandni, main sab kuch jaanti hoon. Mujhe sab pata chal gaya hai. Is main Adi ki koi galti nahin hai. Vo to sirf apni bhabi ki baat maan raha tha taake India Calling Vishesh ke haath se naa chala jaye aur mere papa use take over naa karle. Isi liye, vo tumhe bhi kuch bata nahi paya. Mujhe bhi ye sab kuch aaj pata chala aur ab, is mandap main shaadi zaroor hogi." Chandni looks stunned.

Tara smiles and says, "par meri nahin, tumhari aur Adi ki!" Adi and Chandni laugh out of relief and happiness. Grandpa comes to the forefront and says "Anth bhala to sab bhala. Main kehta tha na Adi, sab kuch theek ho jaayega, tere pyaar sachcha hai aur sachche pyar ke beech koi nahin aa sakta."

Chandni is now smiling out of joy and happiness. She sits in the mandap wearing the same clothes that were a reminder of her and Adi's true love. Kamini walks off angrily, saying that she would not like to be a part of a wedding which involves jhoot and dhoka. Everyone is surprised thinking "whatever she's saying…. Guess she's lost it!!" 😆😆

Tara decides to go by the early morning flight next day. The newly-wed couple come to the airport to see her off… both thank her profusely for saving their lives and bringing happiness to them. Tara brushes it off lightly and wishes them luck and a good life ahead. "Tum aur tumhari Ms. Parandi sada khush raho," she tells Adi and all three laugh together… story ends and Aditya Khanna and Mrs. Chandni Aditya Khanna live happily ever after.

For those wondering about Beeji and her lectures, she left long ago and went back to Jalandhar saying that she was fed up of Mumbai and its way of life. She took back her kasam from Chandni and said that she can marry Adi if that's what keeps her happy. Last heard, Beeji was in Haridwar, and planning to go to Vaishnodevi for Darshan and to pray for her grandchildren!!!! 😆 😆 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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damn good preety 👏 i hope sumthing liek this happens ..........it wud be a great fun to watch kammo's face 😆
and beeji ........ 😆 i hope she goes to ashram forever ................and devote her life to God 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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toooooo good........i hope this happens in india calling...kaash yeh story rang laye...
and that beeji ko bhejo ashram as shef said and kamini to mental ho jayegi yeh sab dekh kar becoz usko to jhatka lagega to use mental asylum bhej do
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 Awesome!!tum hi writer kyu nahi ban jati!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Well done Preeti!U have performed ur dare very well........congo
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG!!!!!!!!! Thanks a lot everyone...... I'm so happy that all of you liked it!!! I'm very happy today!!! 😃

And yes... even I hope that something like this happens in IC.... would love to watch Kamini kameeni's face...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ur a gr8 writer preeti....really fantastic job....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks Malvi.... glad u like it..... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great preeti..but if that happens then show will to an end. but grandchildren part is good... 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy nice preeti.it was very well written.Well dun 👏

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