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Posted: 3 years ago
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Just a suggestion to FF / OS writers who r more talented then Gul writers ( such awful track dey wrote .... y kill them ....also cud hv gvn some happy / cute Arylie n family scenes .... taking care , thinkng of names their cute chorus banter to compensate the time lost 😡😡) , writers at d forum can if plz write on wat cud hv ben shown bt was not like him finding her aftr 9 mnths or after d accident Meethi callng him n may or may not b in come or cumng out of coma n as they showd only in pregnancy dream - them pamperng her ,etc.


Aru remembering SR but may b waitng for Imlie to speak up or smth ...... may be him remembering on his own n not make him dumb , idiot as they made him b4 n after leap ..... his core traits of being smart, calculative , Mr. lie detector, readface /mind especially Imlie's n others remain d same


If there r any ff's or os already written, plz can u give the link. Thank you. 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Imlie serial could have just got wrapped up today with Malini packed off to jail and maybe the sad last 2 episodes moved to Imlie Season 2 after break.

I think the writers are absolutely not creative and really do not understand how to create impactful scripts. Rather they wish a dhamakedar exit..

but it becomes too illogical (though logic too not needed), to show Malini now planting bombs. It doesn't make any sense... just forceful way to show all collapse.

They can always begin Imlie 2 with the photos of Aryan and Imlie and leave the suspense further.

See the Bahubali team how they played with Kattapa killing Bahubali and left it open ended. This quality of scripting is missing in Hindi industry. The script lacks continuity and looks too disjointed. They packed Doll + Neela today... again it looks too hastily done... even Cheeni.. .why should they show an ending with a misunderstood kid... that too for no rhyme or reason when she is the one who united Imlie + Aryan

Why the writers think of only Love Triangle for Imlie 2? why it cannot be a totally new fresh story line... the brand Imlie is not being used properly and they didn't bother to leverage on strengths of previous actors.

Maybe over creating contents at times make many writers or producers get too carried away by taking audience for granted. But times have changed and these days all want fresh content, fresh approach to theme.

Imlie 1 succeeded because the Bengali content was fresh, topical and it attracted instant success. 1 serial made on same line flopped.. However here the director+actors gave it a fresh feeling with racy story telling, It clicked. Let the producers take good time and provide fresh content... rather then just churning out a repeat Imlie with different actors.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: WriterReview

Imlie serial could have just got wrapped up today with Malini packed off to jail and maybe the sad last 2 episodes moved to Imlie Season 2 after break.

I think the writers are absolutely not creative and really do not understand how to create impactful scripts. Rather they wish a dhamakedar exit..

but it becomes too illogical (though logic too not needed), to show Malini now planting bombs. It doesn't make any sense... just forceful way to show all collapse.

They can always begin Imlie 2 with the photos of Aryan and Imlie and leave the suspense further.

See the Bahubali team how they played with Kattapa killing Bahubali and left it open ended. This quality of scripting is missing in Hindi industry. The script lacks continuity and looks too disjointed. They packed Doll + Neela today... again it looks too hastily done... even Cheeni.. .why should they show an ending with a misunderstood kid... that too for no rhyme or reason when she is the one who united Imlie + Aryan

Why the writers think of only Love Triangle for Imlie 2? why it cannot be a totally new fresh story line... the brand Imlie is not being used properly and they didn't bother to leverage on strengths of previous actors.

Maybe over creating contents at times make many writers or producers get too carried away by taking audience for granted. But times have changed and these days all want fresh content, fresh approach to theme.

Imlie 1 succeeded because the Bengali content was fresh, topical and it attracted instant success. 1 serial made on same line flopped.. However here the director+actors gave it a fresh feeling with racy story telling, It clicked. Let the producers take good time and provide fresh content... rather then just churning out a repeat Imlie with different actors.

so true. they should have ended in showing Malini in jail and new baby born. S2 must have shown that they died in accident or something. showing such a big bomb doesn't make sense

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