AryLie ~ A kiss in the Rain ~ OS challenge - Page 2

Originally posted by: MrinalR

Are you shocked after reading the OS?

Yeah shravani is bit busy.

Nahi I didn't read yet. I'm just shocked at getting an entry 😂

Thanks 💞

Originally posted by: Param-Sundari

Nahi I didn't read yet. I'm just shocked at getting an entry 😂

Thanks 💞

Ok. I was like did I gave you a shock? Because Vaish said it's a shock for her

Originally posted by: MrinalR

Girl I am scared of that dhamki. 😔I can just imagine your prediction spree I am already going to have nightmare today. Btw I will not promise but it really just popped in my mind. Given a good sequence that arises in my khurapati mind that is capable enough for their actual kiss then I'll surely right one. But I am bad at descriptions. 😒

My predictions seemed to have induced terror in you🤣. Jo aur Malini didi se bhi zyada. Infact, Sting Operation se bhi zyada😆

In that case, I'm manifesting for some good sequences that inspire or rather force you to write another one.

Scene description se ham pyaasis ka koi matlab nahi hai. Just insert a kiss anywhere and hum khush ho jayenge😉😉🙈

Originally posted by: MrinalR

Ok. I was like did I gave you a shock? Because Vaish said it's a shock for her

Arey ending padke bhi shock hona hi hai. I will admit wasn't expecting that at all. I will not spoil it for Pooja anymore

Originally posted by: crazy_vaish

My predictions seemed to have induced terror in you🤣. Jo aur Malini didi se bhi zyada. Infact, Sting Operation se bhi zyada😆

In that case, I'm manifesting for some good sequences that inspire or rather force you to write another one.

Scene description se ham pyaasis ka koi matlab nahi hai. Just insert a kiss anywhere and hum khush ho jayenge😉😉🙈

Look at you? 5 years of separations have affected us too. It appears that we are more desperate than Arylie 🤣

Originally posted by: MrinalR

Look at you? 5 years of separations have affected us too. It appears that we are more desperate than Arylie 🤣

As much as I want Arylie kisses, the pregnancy track has scarred me for life. If you ask me, Arylie should fight even more. Ek doosre ko poori tarah se tod do. Then start picking up pieces.

I'm still waiting for the ultimate fight where they would cross all barriers in hurting each other. Of course nothing toxic or abusive.

But I want the angst to be upped even more . Abhi se they shouldn't start melting.

Lagi baat kisses ki, I wouldn't mind if they show fb's of kisses and even the SR that we never got to see yet. Hafte mein ek baar give a happy romantic fb and I'm sorted. Bas chote chote armaan hai mere 🏃🏽‍♂️🏃🏽‍♂️

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Originally posted by: crazy_vaish

As much as I want Arylie kisses, the pregnancy track has scarred me for life. If you ask me, Arylie should fight even more. Ek doosre ko poori tarah se tod do. Then start picking up pieces.

I'm still waiting for the ultimate fight where they would cross all barriers in hurting each other. Of course nothing toxic or abusive.

But I want the angst to be upped even more . Abhi se they shouldn't start melting.

Lagi baat kisses ki, I wouldn't mind if they show fb's of kisses and even the SR that we never got to see yet. Hafte mein ek baar give a happy romantic fb and I'm sorted. Bas chote chote armaan hai mere 🏃🏽‍♂️🏃🏽‍♂️

Yeah aaise hi chote chote arman hote hai hamare. I know how much the preg track has scarred you. Sometimes it feels like their eyes romance is better. At least we would not have fear of another preg track. 😉

It was a dream, it felt so real that your heart just broke.

5 years is a long time but the feelings of been one can never leave you.

Both wanted so much to be the shoulder that was cried on but it was a imagination that broke the soul and it was killing the very breath that both were breathing.

The screen is right in front of you how she puts Cheeni on her back turns around once she heard 50% and just walks away. The pain was so evident in her eyes that you just want to give her a hug also the surprise look on Aryan face?

Beautifully written🥳

Originally posted by: screen22

It was a dream, it felt so real that your heart just broke.

5 years is a long time but the feelings of been one can never leave you.

Both wanted so much to be the shoulder that was cried on but it was a imagination that broke the soul and it was killing the very breath that both were breathing.

The screen is right in front of you how she puts Cheeni on her back turns around once she heard 50% and just walks away. The pain was so evident in her eyes that you just want to give her a hug also the surprise look on Aryan face?

Beautifully written🥳

TBH I might be seeking a solace in this. Because the way they are going right now at times I feel the pain. Letting out in this way may help. When I wrote this the only thing that was running in my mind was the look.

Thanks for the appreciation😊