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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: komald718


It's a song... A heart breaking one at that... please do listen to it.❤️


Say Something

Nice song.. ❤️
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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

I was reading and for the effect I put the song in the background. As I was reading, I kid you not, I was holding my breath scared that she will make the same mistake again but then I also knew that she wouldn't but the fear was bad.


"She ran for him, ignoring all sounds of shock, all calls for her name, all expressions of disbelief, she ran to him."


This sentence did it for me. I let out the sigh happy and content. 👏


You have some serious mad talent. loved It!!!❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

This is one of my favorite songs, I never expected someone to write a fic based off this but the lyrics matches their situation and feelings so much!

It was lovely, was so happy that she finally listened to her heart and followed him, her place was never with the Tripathis but with him, her home is with him and his family.

Lovely story🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

wow this was so amazing and yet important thing to be in future for arylie... This part will come surely n who will take first step to each other it will be treat to see them... Amazing part totally loved it.. 😍😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

That song is one of my all time favourites.

How did you chose such perfect song for this moment. Every line in tune with your words. Every word intune with their characters.

This is so melancholically beautiful. Up till the last moment I was dreading what will happen to Aryan. Will Imlie take that flight or once again will be lost in that family dynamics? Finally Imlie followed him and it became a new begining.

I hope when the time comes, writers do this scene even half as beautifully as you did.

You write so beautifully, I can't even describe it.

Edited by Sheldon-Cooperr - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: komald718


I just realised, 20th story for Arylie.... cheers for me I guess

And make it to 100th ❤ and then more 100th

And more ...


We will still read them..keep reading them...


I love how you always come up with stories with the current plot or scenario. Tbh seriously was hoping for a brothel os of your version. Like how you write down the whole plot in your language. As i have always liked your version on the take more than the actual serial.


I loved it. There wasn't a single dialogue delivered between them yet they said a lot of things through eyes. They were screaming without making any noises.

The song say something I'm giving up on you

This song itself carries a lot of emotions, feelings. And you mixed this with arylie. What could get better than this! 💖

Keep writing on them. Main humesha wait karti rehti hun kab OS ayega teri, current track par or kisi bhi scenario par. The way you write down each emotions if feels so real...


Sending itta sara love ❤❤

Edited by mahiaana - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Girrrllll thank you for blessing us with THIS!

You picked the perfect songs and lyrics to weave into the story and their internal dialogues were everything. Just knowing they were speaking through their eyes and body language was uffff. What I wouldn’t give to see this on screen 🤍

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

"The chosen one AKT", this just made me laugh!

It's the best way to describe his character without further explanation 🤣!


This was such beautiful write up! I was at the edge of my seat waiting for who would make the first move to the other. Her wanting his attention and approval to him wanting her to walk away from what was to what can be is just beautifully written.


Her finally following him made me cheer for her (and for him)!


Thanks for the tag!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#19

Thank you for tagging me. I do love all your stories. This one is too is amazing. Them talking without words. What more can one ask for. And yes I feel like if we were to Malini PF the Ts will expect Imlie to come back but I hope she does not. Girl needs to move on.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Wonderfully written yet again :). And this is so apt right now ! I was just thinking , with all tje PF shenanigans going on.. what happens once it is done, what then , what next.. what does Imlie want.. given she’s the one who initiated the PF yet again.. what will Aryan do.. what does he want.. and u hv captured the sentiment beautifully..

Edited by novice1 - 3 years ago

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