I'M SORRY SIA-FF updated part 6 p11 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
raghav possesive i am loving it...its lovely...it woulb be vry helpful if there is an index...do cntinuee soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
please update

someone please drop a pm to her
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
guys im reading the responds ur giving me. And yes im working on the next part. The next update will be somewhere this week or early next week. Im trying really hard for this week.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
ya try giving it earlier waiting for the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
UPDATE?????!!!!!! 😕 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Sorry sorry sorry my laptop broke down im not posting written work for like three days. Im posting comments through my ipod touch. But hopefully ill get my laptop my tom n ill update tom or wed. Not sure about tom because thats my first day of school grade 9 thats y a little tensed.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Raghav and Juno were gonna have a physical fight but Siya stopped them and she walked away with Juno. Siya and Juno left. Alisha- baby what was that
Raghav- kuch nahi
Alisha- come on lets dance.
Raghav- ok
Alisha wrapps her arms around Raghav's neck and they start dancing. Alisha- Raghav tumhe ho kya gaya hai.
R- kuch nahi. Y r u asking that.
Alisha- mujhe lagta hai ke tum Siya aur Juno ke relation ko ley ke thode jealous ho.
R- aisa kuch nahi hai.
Ali- i think thats it. Tumhe kyun takleef hoti hai jab Siya Juno ke saath hoti hai tab.
R- i dont know... mujhe lagta hai ke mein sick hon i need to leave.
Ali- baby
R- tum chahati ho ke mein tumhe hostel drop kardon.
Ali- ya sure
Raghav dropps Alisha at the girls hostel. Raghav goes to the gym and starting punching the punching bag. He recalls Siya taking Juno's side and him feeling jealous.

Next evening...
Raghav took Alisha on a date to make up for last night. They enjoyed their date. They were walking on a street. Alisha hated walking but she just lied that she enjoyed walking to Raghav's sake. Then few spoiled teenagers are also on the same road. They look at Alisha with a bad intention. Raghav sees that and goes to them and slaps on of them. Alisha runs to Raghav- Raghav raghav kya hau hai tumhe. Bache hai Raghav. They're kids.
Raghav- bache hai ya right
Alisha- tum sab jao.
The teenagers leave. Alisha- Raghav kya hua hai tumhe. whats wrong with u.
Raghav- whats wrong with me whats wrong with u tumhe aise kapde pehene ki zarorat kya hai.
Alisha- excuse me mere dad ne mujhe aise kapde pehene se nahi rokha aur tum toh meri boyfriend ho... anyways can u just drop me to the hostel.
Raghav- han chalo.
Alisha smiles and kisses his cheek. While driving Raghav remembers Siya in her simple ordinary clothes. Nothing as revealing as Alisha's outfits. Raghav drops Alisha at the hostel and goes to his room.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Yayy!!! first one to comment😃
nice update sana😊
but a short one...
make a longer one next time 😊
continue soon😊
do pm me😊
Edited by nimmi-hhl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Sorry guys i always forget to pm. N the readon y its short because i had to update with my itouch my laptop broke down.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
vverryyy nicee!!!!!!!! do update soon the nxt part anddd make a longgg update dear!!!!!!!😊 raghav is surely jealous!!!!!!! and i like dat!!!!!!!

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