**A Promise** - By Arzoo to Sahir

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Posted: 10 years ago
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You said you can give me nothing...
Except a heart filled with despise;
But I was convinced that your words are untrue...
For I could read the love in your eyes.

I was determined to know your real self...
Despite the pain you have given;
You may choose to remain silent...
But I'll uncover the secrets you've hidden.

My world came crumbling down as I discovered...
Things about you that I hadn't known;
You had money, you had success...
But none whom you could call as your own.

I now understand how hard it must have been...
To undergo the pain that you have borne;
I give you today my heart felt promise...
From now onwards you're not alone.

I know one thing for sure...
That no one can take you away from me;
Our love will remain eternal...
As we were always meant to be.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Bohut khoob, dil choo liya..
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Thank u Soumi 🤗
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Originally posted by: aamnazuha

Bohut khoob, dil choo liya..


Thank u aamna...🤗 Khushi hui ki aapko pasand aaya...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice ! Beautiful !
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Originally posted by: pearly14

Very nice ! Beautiful !


Thank u so much Pearly...🤗 Just left my comment on your lovely poem...😊
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this is amazing! beyond words! u write really very well😃
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Originally posted by: dinki24

this is amazing! beyond words! u write really very well😃


Thank u so much dinki 🤗
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Thanks a lot, Nads 🤗
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just amazing!!! loved every line..⭐️

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