Sahir's ramblings (Another attempt at poem)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Last post of the day. Attempted too many today.😕 Thanks for reading. Shabba Khair.
There was never any question of hesitation, I was saving my own life
I will do it again, everytime, and not just because you are my wife
I gave you tears, I gave you fears, I did my damnest to keep you near
I was weak, I was wrong, to lie and to hurt you all along
The wall is trembling teetering threatening to crumble down
I have no strength left any more to build it up from the ground
I wish I hope to wake up in your arms & for you not to be afar
Together we will build this life, as HUMSAFARS that we know we are

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Junoonian thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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MM!! So glad u posted this. beautiful poem... i was saving my own life... ufff... loved it.👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Again MM...so beautiful and poignant!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I loved what you have written, those words are so true
Great post 👏

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