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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: --Ari--

yea...kuch to kare...to stop ourselves from murdering the cv;'s 🤢 theres goanna be a deadly fog in the show now. this just keeps getting better and better 😡



I know 🤢 and the ACP is going to save Arzoo...don't forget that 🤢

waise I posted my chapter too. Read when you are free. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suvika.



I know 🤢 and the ACP is going to save Arzoo...don't forget that 🤢

waise I posted my chapter too. Read when you are free. 😳


i read it the moment i saw it 😆 i've been stalking your thread since yesterday 😆

lovely as always.

will comment once m done with mine...warna i'll get both mised up 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Hayee! How did I miss this 😲
lovely update Ari 😊. I absolutely loved the beginning. Loved the end too but just feeling sad that Sahir has to suffer 😭... even if it is for a short while. I want only good things happening 😆
But what I really like about this FF is that in this Arzoo is the one taking care of Sahir
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hayee! How did I miss this 😲

lovely update Ari 😊. I absolutely loved the beginning. Loved the end too but just feeling sad that Sahir has to suffer 😭... even if it is for a short while. I want only good things happening 😆
But what I really like about this FF is that in this Arzoo is the one taking care of Sahir


well what else can u expect from a sadist 😉😆

sahir deserves lots of good things...but smetimes good things happen in bad ways 😉

and aarzoo being caring is my dream...it is what she was supposed to be...how i wish we get to see this in the show some day 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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DISCLAIMER:

Longest author note of the decade 🤣

Heylo *waves* so i've been trying to write this chapter since 10 in the morning. and its almost 4 in the night now 😕 I blame this forum...sahir azeem choudhary...and most importantly HARSHAD CHOPDA for this 😡 Cant a girl write in peace without being distracted for one hour 🤬 Suvi for one knows very well how much i have been struggling to write this..every message i cribbing ki story complete karni hai 🤣


Anyways coming back to the note so this is an exceptionally long part the longest till now so this long A/N 😆 This was actually supposed to be a very very sadistic heart breaking chapter but seeing the condition of the forum and show i decided to quit my sadism and go the happy route for a while especially since hearing HC has made me so so happy 😆 ❤️ So you can all thank your lucky stars 😛


I want to dedicate this chapter to the man of the hour HARSHAD CHOPDA. Who has totally stolen my heart with this iv of his ❤️ Such an adorable amazing human being. May he be blessed with all the happiness and success he deserves 😃 Dil khush ho gaya aaj 😳


P.s i am loving this ss more now after hearing HC's fav song and dedication ❤️ "Jo tu mera humdard hai...suhana har dard hai" ❤️ I love this guy so so much ❤️

Now to the story before i get any further distracted. I hope you guys survived the long A/N and the chapter is consistent and good. If you liked it do let me know through your comments they motivate me to write faster and better 😉


CHAPTER 4

Aarzoo quickly composed herself as sahir left the room. She removed the files she had hidden under her bed once sahir was out of the room. Zaki had sent the details of all the saiyyara dealings and investors lists hidden in the breakfast trolley.

Aarzoo had hidden the files so that sahirs didn't spot them. She started reading them and trying to understand what exactly had happened till now and what needed to be done. Once she was done she called up zaki for some more insights and clarifications. He explained everything she asked for in detail while she heard it all silently trying her level best to absorb everything. Aarzoo was just about to hang up the phone as zaki finished his monologue, but he spoke up stopping her.

"Jahan-aaa...i mean...bha...bhi ye sab karna zaruri nahi hai. Ye wada sirf sahir bhai ka obsession hai. It doesn't need to be fulfilled."

"Zaki itne saal sahir ke saath rehke bhi its sad ke unke ghar walo ko unka dukh nahi dikhta. Ye sirf ek obsession ya wada nahi hai. Ye wo akhri kari hai jo sahir ko apne ateet se jod rahi hai. Wo apne ateet ka dard is wade mei lekar ghum rahe hai.The only way he knows to defeat his past and get over it is by fulfilling this promise and if he doesn't have the clarity or strength to do it. I will be his strength, is wade ko pura karne mei hum sahir ki humsafar banenge. Chahe aap humara saath de ya na de."

"Nahi nahi...mai aapka saath dunga. Maine aapse pyaar aur dosti dono zindagi bhar ke liye ki hai. Mai humesha aapke saath khada hun whenever you need me."

"Kash zaki aap humari jagah sahir ke saath khade hote, shayad hum teeno ko aaj yeh din na dekhna parte. Even now all you care about is your love, your friendship for once zaki us bhai ke bare mei sochiye jisne aapka saath zindagi bhar diya hai. Its high time aap unka saath de. Khuda hafiz."

Aarzoo was frustrated. Zaki was a good guy who had his heart in the right place "most" of the times. But he got on her nerves sometimes how could he be so blind towards sahir who had practically raised him. It infuriated her that he still talked this way to her when she was someone elses wife. How many times will she have to remind him that she is mrs.sahir azeem choudhary. She sighed wishing this game to end soon so that she could give all these mind games a rest and have a peaceful and happy life with her "humsafar" in sahirs care and protection where zaki's constant pestering wouldn't be able to get through to her.

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By the time it was night a lawyer had been called to do what aarzoo had asked for. He had sat between aarzoo and sahir. Pointing to them the dotted lines where they needed to sign.

After finishing his part of the job sahir went to stand by his favourite spot near the window staring outside into nothing-ness. He looked like a lifeless man searching for life. He had just went through the motions of the procedure required to transfer power of attorney of the entire property to aarzoo.

Aarzoo's eyes were fixated on sahir as the lawyer explained her what all the documents contained and about the fact that she would be the only one responsible for saiyyara now as its ceo.

He left the room unable to bear it any longer.

Making sure that sahir wasn't around she glanced through the documents and told the lawyer his first job.

"Hum chahte hai ke aap in property papers ko pre-date kare. Legally it should look like i have owned saiyyara and everything related to it for the past 6 months"

The lawyer was confused at first at the odd request but he obliged never the less and told her it would be done.

"And one more thing sahir should not know about this."

Giving her his assurance the lawyer exited the room.

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Aarzoo was walking around the room wondering how she would manage everything just then her eyes fell upon a design stacked way below in sahir's stack of files.

"Yeh to humara dream design hai. Jo lucknow mei kho gaya tha." She thought in a daze remembering the day she had lost it. She remembered the incident with the car just before she had lost the design.

"So wo akdu lambi gaadi wale aap the mr.sahir azeem choudhary" she thought laughing to herself "Kistmat ne humei akhir kitni baar milane ki koshish hai...If only we had understood it earlier"

She stopped her trail of thoughts and focused on the design.

"Shayad ye design isi din ke liye bana tha taki ye aapke kaam aa sake." She convinced herself.

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"Zaki suniye humari baat. Sahir is too emotionally attached to all this to think straight. So we have to do all this without him knowing. Yeh saiyyara ke saare investors ki list hai humne in sab ko contact kiya hai. They are ready to invest in saiyyara on the condition that saiyyara arranges the biggest and best fashion show of the year. If saiyyara proves it is worthy of the investment and that saiyyara mei paise lagane se wo paise dubenge nahi they will invest in it. 10 investors hai and each want 10 new and innovative designs."

"If it was possible sahir bhai would have done it. It is too short a time and too much needs to be done.100 new designs is impossible to achieve. "

"Sahir couldn't do it because he didn't have the designers at hand and also because he didn't want to pursue 10 different investors. He wanted one big investment to show his success as a businessman."

"Designers to ab bhi nahi hai."

"Designbaaz hum haina. Mrs.Sahir azeem choudhary. saare designs tayyar kar denge by tonight. Aur linda ko saari details de denge on how to get them stitched and designed. All you need to do is arrange the fashion show and make it successful"

"But bhai..."

"Sahir ko hum sambhal lenge. I will take him out of Mumbai for this week and will not let the news of any of this get to him."

"Once the fashion show is done and saiyyara gets all the investment that is needed to make it a 1000 crore company and finish off sahir's wada for good I want you to auction off all the dresses of the fashion show."

"But why? Your dream design..."

"Zaki humari baat kaatna band kijiye. You'll understand. You are going to auction off the dresses and with the amount collected you are going to get back the papers of Niyamat house and saiyyara from the bank. Ye dono sahir ki mehnat ki kamai hai i don't want him to loose them just for a deal or wada or anything else. In par sirf sahir ka haq hai."

"Aur jaha tak baat rahi humare dream design ki to wo sahir ki khushi se badhkar nahi hai"

"Please this is our only chance. Koi galti nahi honi chaiye. Do it for your sahir bhai who has done everything for you till now."

"Aap fikar mat kijiye. I wont disappoint you this time. I will stand for sahir bhai the way he has stood by me all this time."

Aarzoo looked at zaki's retreating form in relief finally sense was returning to zaki.

"Maybe by the end of all this sahir might have a brother too." She smiled with happiness at the mere thought of it.

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"As-salam-alaikum aunty. Aap kaisi hai? Khairiat se lucknow pahuch gayi na?" sahir spoke with utmost respect and reverence to aarzoos mother.

"Walekum-as-salam beta. Yahan sab khairiat hai. Maine actually tumse ek request karne phone kiya tha. Please mana mat karna." Nausheen replied with a smile on her face at sahirs respect. Never had a man given them so much respect before.

"Ji boliye."

"Tumhari aur aarzoo ki shaadi mei hum zyada kuch kar nahi paaye beta. Koi rasmei bhi dhang se nahi hue. Mai bas soch rahi thi agar tum aur aarzoo kuch din ke liye lucknow aa jao. Thodi khatirdaari hum bhi kar lenge apni jamai ki."

At the mention of the word lucknow sahir was drawn back into the past. All his memories...his father...zeenat...he was in a daze. He couldn't bear a week in that place. He didn't mind adopting illegal means to get rid of the factory so that he could leave lucknow ASAP. But now he was being called there for a week? Sahir didn't know if he could take that. Not in his already weak state.

"Sahir...sahir...aap sun rahe haina?" she called out to him brining him out of his reverie.

He could say no. He could send aarzoo alone. But her ammi would get worried. And she would be dis-heartened. He didn't want to hurt nausheen. And aarzoo's sad face flashed before his eyes.

"Maybe this trip could give her the happiness i am not able to give her" he thought as he closed his eyes and strengthened himself for what he was about to do next.

"Ji aunty aap fikar mat kijiye. Mai aur aarzoo kal hi lucknow ke liye niklenge. We will be there by tomorrow afternoon. Khudahafiz."

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"Shukriya ammi sahir ko lucknow aane ke liye manane ke liye. Hum lucknow pahuchte hi aapko iktela kar denge. Khuda hafiz. " aarzoo chirped into the phone before putting it down.

Alvira who was standing nearby looked as if she had seen a ghost.

"Aarzoo beta sahir has a very bad relationship and experience with lucknow. Un ghav ko mat kuredo. Dard ke siva kuch nahi milega"

"Aunty kya iseeliye aap sabne itne saalo se unke dard ko undekha karke rakha hai? Maaf kijiye par dard chupane se aur badhta hai. Jab tak uska saamna nahi karte hum use hara nahi sakte. Hum sahir ki lucknow se dosti karaenge"

Alvira looked on with admiration. This girl was proving to be sahir's "humsafar" every step of the way. Maybe she would after all fill the void zeenat had created in his life.

"I hope tum jo karna chahti ho tum usmei kamiyaab ho jao beta" alvira blessed aarzoo.

"Aap fikar mat kijiye aunty. Mushkilo ka saamna karna aur unse jeetna humei sahir se hi seekha hai. Hum nahi harenge." Aarzoo said with utmost pride and confidence before going to her room to pack her bags for lucknow.

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Aarzoo silently followed sahir as he carried their luggage and loaded it into the car. She sat beside him wordlessly as he was pensive in his own thoughts. She didn't want to shake him out of them hoping he would work out his fears of the past before they landed in lucknow.

Aarzoo tried to take her luggage to carry it but sahir was quicker then her. He deposited the luggage and made his way towards the check in area with aarzoo following him.

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As aarzoo entered the flight with sahir at her side an idea struck her. Aarzoo scans the flight for their seats. Even though sahir had booked them in the vip part of the plane still there was only one window seat out of the two ans she knew what she had to do.

Rushing to get ahead of sahir aarzoo quickly occupies the window seat of the two.

"Aarzoo meri seat hai wo" he said a bit annoyed at her childishness finally coming out of his pensive mood.

Aarzoo was busy looking out of the window. He kept waiting for the reply which never came. With a jerk he sat beside her pulling on her hand to divert her attention to him. And she did just that.

"Tum mujhe ignore kari rahi ho" he asked irritated now.

"Nahi...Hum to khidki ke bahir dekh rahe the. Aapko ignore to ab karenge" saying this she turned her face away but not before giving him a smirk.

Sahir was stunned for a moment as to what had just happened. And then a memory flashed before him.


"Aap humei ignore kar rahe hai.?" An innocent looking aarzoo had asked.
"Ji nahi filhal to mai saman rakh raha hun. Iske baad aapko ignore karunga"

And then he suddenly forgot about all of his tensions and started laughing.

"Appi aap phirse kar denge humara chut gaya"

He remembered her words and the craziness that had led to their very first fight even before they knew each other.

"Kya hua mrs.wife is baar kya aapko nahi dekhna flight attendant ka interesting display of art"

He shoved himself backwards to give her a view of the flight attendant who was demonstrating emergency procedures.

She made a face at him understanding he was teasing her. Turned her face towards the glass pretending to admire the road of the runaway and the sky above.

Sahir continued remembering that crazy flight from lucknow they both had taken.Their paths were star crossed right from that moment.

So much had changed from then to now. And the one thing he feared the most that in all the drama he might have lost that spunky full of life aarzoo. But this moment changed that fear, his heart welled with happiness thinking she still had the same childishness in her somewhere.

"Maybe all was not lost after all. " he thought as he continued smiling remembering her antics.

"Aap haste hue kitne ache lagte hai sahir. I wish ye muskaan ab aapke chehre se kabhi nahi mite. " thinking this aarzoo looked on with admiration in her eyes and awe etched in her expressions.

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As the plane took off aarzoo forgot her plan and her fear of heights and plane returned. She quickly started searching for the handle and grabbing at it as if it were the last parachute in a sinking plane. And the handle was adamant on not coming down.

Sahir sensing her fear calmly turned to her holding both her shoulers still in his strong arms. Their eyes connected and the connection was made. She immediately began to calm down under his soft gaze which had only love filled in it, Love that was meant exclusively for her.

"Aarzoo. Calm down, mai hun tumhare saath kuch nahi hoga tumhe"

She nodded slightly and shifted in her seat trying to make herself comfortable. She closed her eyes tilting her head onto the seat. She tried to forget everything about her surroundings holding on tightly to her only reality sitting beside her. Sahir azeem choudhary. Her humsafar.

Throughout the flight he kept holding her hand tightly letting her know that he was with her to protect her always and she had nothing to worry about until he was with her.

After a while when she had stopped shaking and muttering incomprehensible explecitives to the person who invented flights and was reasonably sane he slowly leaned in towards her ear and whispered.

"Mujhe yaad nahi tha i am sorry your fear of planes skipped my mind. Aate waqt hum train se aayenge. Promise"

She smiled in her head thinking how much he had changed from their first meet and how their relation had transformed. Sahir azeem choudhary she understood now that how much ever he tried to show his hard exterior and tough guy act was a softie who had only love to give to everyone around him. Limitless boundless unconditional love and he deserved the same in return.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Haye haye... Mogambo khush Hua... Rapchik update di Ari... Loved every line flight memories... His assurance... His pain arzoo understanding... Mind blowing...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Romanticfreak

Haye haye... Mogambo khush Hua... Rapchik update di Ari... Loved every line flight memories... His assurance... His pain arzoo understanding... Mind blowing...


what the heck is mogambo doing awake so late?

hangover harshad ki baton ka ? 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: --Ari--



what the heck is mogambo doing awake so late?

hangover harshad ki baton ka ?🤣



Hahaha since morning working on a business proposal re... For the next 24hrs I will be awake ...when it is getting over the head I peep in #mogambo caps on...

By the way ur dark knight name was mentioned and in the ending shakti - my name too wan mentioned lol hugs sista

Are Sony walon Ko kisi NE tweet kiya what the plot till now hum toh katha kamamsh suns di lol delhle twitter PE... Desi champagne ke sath baiti hu aur tumhare SS padrahi thi lolol
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Hahaha since morning working on a business proposal re... For the next 24hrs I will be awake ...when it is getting over the head I peep in #mogambo caps on... aww poor baby 😆 night outs are the best..all the best with that 😛

By the way ur dark knight name was mentioned and in the ending shakti - my name too wan mentioned lol hugs sista i know i've been jumping with joy whole freaking night ❤️ he answered my question...its like he spoke to me 😆 such a cutie pie ❤️ u could just eat him up 😆

Are Sony walon Ko kisi NE tweet kiya what the plot till now hum toh katha kamamsh suns di lol delhle twitter PE... Desi champagne ke sath baiti hu aur tumhare SS padrahi thi lololat this point..doesnt matter...hc ka iv..kal saaz scene...and sahir ka hair is back...aaj sukoon se soyenge..and sabko sukoon se sone denge...aaj sabke 7 khoon maaf...kal do din ki milake charas boyenge sony ki 🤣

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Posted: 10 years ago
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ROFL agar kal min 10min saaz nahi mile na Allah knows Ari twitter PE writers ke charsbodhenge... Lol pakaarae 2din se kurti ki somersaults se

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