Request

Hi!

I am a fan of Harshad Chopra. I like this serial for his expressions.

I have recently started to write a story, it is not a fan fiction or anything. It is just a genuine story. I really need feedback on it. It is written in the forum Wattpad. I didn't know where to turn exactly but india forum have always been my flight.

Anyway, if you consider this as a spam and against the rules of the forum. I apologize and you can remove this post.

I am just in need of feedback.

This is the link: http://w.tt/1zFgLlh