'Paradox'- A SaAz drabble

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Okay, so here's a drabble for you all on the happy occasion of completing 50 episodes. I have to confess, it's been refashioned from an older drabble I had written on another couple, but it seemed to be apt for SaAz😃 So I couldn't resist sharing it here.



This drabble is just an insight into why Sahir finds Aarzoo so fascinating, and what he thinks about her. Just something light to cheer you guys up as we gear up for the depressing Sahir's MU and bechari Aarzoo plot line😆

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Paradox


(A SaAz Drabble)

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From the cocooned comfort of his glass cabin, he cast a covert glance at the slender figure sitting at her desk, and wondered at how much of a paradox she was.




A woman with a mighty heart, encased in a deceptively fragile body. How else could one explain the sheer strength that she carried, which made her determined to succeed in spite of the rejection she had faced?



The soul of the artist resided in her; she was as dreamy and idealistic as he was. But this did not mean that she was unaware of practical matters, she had grown up before her time after all. She was pragmatic, more so under his guidance.


Possessed of a sharp intelligence. Yet, naive and pure gullible, unable to gauge the secret motives and the ways of the outside world.


Her steely ambitiousness; determined to succeed in her artistic calling at any cost. But belying that attitude by letting her heart rule over her head every time.


Dressed in the swathes of her flowy salwar kameez, a large dupatta engulfing her figure, she seemed devoid of any overt female charms or womanly wiles. But to him, she seemed temptation personified... Because...she was beautiful. Not just pretty, beautiful. And what made it more enchanting was that she seemed to be utterly unaware of it.



It made him livid sometimes. Because unlike her, he knew. That she was an enticing, red-blooded woman, and that no man who came within a mile of her could help but recognize it and be charmed.





Aarzoo. The name itself suggested many things to him. Desire. Passion. Want. And maybe... a dream?


Oblivious to his scrutiny all this while, she was engaged in checking the quality and colour of the newly-arrived fabrics




He dragged his eyes off her, urging his mind to stop pondering on this child-woman's contradictions. Yes...she was just another girl, the daughter of his mother's friend, his brain anxiously affirmed to him- though his heart seemed to be whispering something else entirely.


Sighing, he returned to the task at hand, all the while reprimanding himself...



"Mind on the game, Sahir...mind on the game."

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Please tell me what you thought of it! 😊

Edited by -Amri- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written dear...👏👏
This scene flashed in my mind as i was reading...😊


He is so intrigued by her...whereas she is blissfully unaware of his feelings...😳
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Originally posted by: tweetie19

Beautifully written dear...👏👏

This scene flashed in my mind as i was reading...😊


He is so intrigued by her...whereas she is blissfully unaware of his feelings...😳



Ahh...lovely. Just the scene I was thinking about too!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! Very nice indeed :). Now please write one for Arzoo's fascination for Sahir too :).
And i don't know if you intended it but there was a nice rhythm to most of the paras. Almost verse like effect.
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@ Junoonian


Thank you. Yes, I did intend for it to be a little rhythmic because I felt that their intense feelings couldn't be depicted as prosaic :D


Aarzoo's feelings? An interesting thought. Will try to pen that one down ASAP.


Edited by -Amri- - 10 years ago
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Wow this was truly beautiful amri ..good job deaf 👏
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Wow dear that was soo great!! Child-woman really! and the way he is observing her 😳
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This was so beautiful and almost poetic.. :)
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Very beautifully written...loved it 👏

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