'Paradox'- A SaAz drabble - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Wow that was amazing!! I loved it. Keep writing 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Aha I see what you did there sis!
😉😆

It sounds very familiar you know haha
And you know what I AM TALKING ABOUT. lol!

See My pushing you to write that time has benefited all of us is so many ways that you are now writing for Saaz!
Woppiieee. Hahah. See I knew this was gonna happen so Like...I planned it..haha Skills brahh!
hehe pat on the back for me hah
(JK 😛😆)

But coming to the the drabble. As always you are the epitome of perfection my behna!
I swear it's like whenever you write the word come alive in front of my eyes.

Sahir's feelings...and the way he described Arzoo in every single line..I like..died a little!
hehe. I swear I love Sahir.

The way he called her beautiful has like stuck with me...forever now...dayuumm...I swear 4Lions always makes me fall for them..again and again..and it's always the khadoos...bosses...and the beautifulbaaz heroines!
huh...my current addiction...Saaz! I love you sis for writing about them.
Please do continue writing...pleaseee!

I cannot wait..to get back to my usual style of commenting..you know long essays! haha 😉😆
You have to write something longer than a drabble this time!
pleaseee!

apni behna ki baat nahi manegi??? *puppy face*

Love you like sishssttterrr! <3
Until laters!
🤗
Edited by Live-life - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: ecrivain



Wow this was truly beautiful amri ..good job deaf 👏


Thanks Ecri😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Scribble_Tweety

Wow dear that was soo great!! Child-woman really! and the way he is observing her 😳


Thanks a lot for commenting! I think he's amused by the mixture of worldly wisdom and childishness that she presents😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

This was so beautiful and almost poetic.. :)


Thank you. That's a huge compliment!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: TaanuDeewani

Wow that was amazing!! I loved it. Keep writing 👏


Thanks a lot for commenting! Will do!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: ashi_mania

Very beautifully written...loved it 👏


Aww, thanks a lot!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Live-life

Aha I see what you did there sis!

😉😆

It sounds very familiar you know haha
And you know what I AM TALKING ABOUT. lol!

See My pushing you to write that time has benefited all of us is so many ways that you are now writing for Saaz!
Woppiieee. Hahah. See I knew this was gonna happen so Like...I planned it..haha Skills brahh!
hehe pat on the back for me hah
(JK 😛😆)

But coming to the the drabble. As always you are the epitome of perfection my behna!
I swear it's like whenever you write the word come alive in front of my eyes.

Sahir's feelings...and the way he described Arzoo in every single line..I like..died a little!
hehe. I swear I love Sahir.

The way he called her beautiful has like stuck with me...forever now...dayuumm...I swear 4Lions always makes me fall for them..again and again..and it's always the khadoos...bosses...and the beautifulbaaz heroines!
huh...my current addiction...Saaz! I love you sis for writing about them.
Please do continue writing...pleaseee!

I cannot wait..to get back to my usual style of commenting..you know long essays! haha 😉😆
You have to write something longer than a drabble this time!
pleaseee!

apni behna ki baat nahi manegi??? *puppy face*

Love you like sishssttterrr! <3
Until laters!
🤗


Haha. So sweet of you to comment here, considering that you've already read this one😉


Abb apne khwaish kar li hai toh mein aapki baat kaise maan nahi sakti?😃 Will post more on Sunday, an exclusive SaAz OS!😳


Thanks a lot again, sweetheart!

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