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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Ok darling I'll keep guessing 😃

😭 i was gonna update now but my comp lost internet connection and just when i was posting it , the data was lost.
i will post tomrw...😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: dinazz


😭i was gonna update now but my comp lost internet connection and just when i was posting it , the data was lost.
i will post tomrw...😔

Ok dear kal hi post karna. Update ko kahi save karna chahiyeta na?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Ok dear kal hi post karna. Update ko kahi save karna chahiyeta na?

yes di , woh save karna bhool gayi .😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: dinazz


yes di , woh save karna bhool gayi .😔

Tu bhi na dinaz. Agli baar se update ko pehle apne system main save karna phir IF main post karna teek hain?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Tu bhi na dinaz. Agli baar se update ko pehle apne system main save karna phir IF main post karna teek hain?

yes di , agli baar post karne se pehle save karna nahi bhoolongi.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: dinazz

yes di , agli baar post karne se pehle save karna nahi bhoolongi.😃

Accha ab baatein bahut hogai update toh post kar
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Accha ab baatein bahut hogai update toh post kar


posting in a few minutes😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
here is the Second part .
Enjoy 😃

The doctor rushed in to check her.. he found her to be fine . Seeing the doctor rush in, ACP,Kashish,Kavi,Adi and a new Entry Param too came in .
"What happened doctor,is she fine?"
"Ms Abha ko sar pe chot lagne ki wajah se aur dil ke kareeb se goli chukar jane ki wajah se woh coma mein chali gayi hai.. kab wapas aayegi yeh hum nahi keh sakte hai , wapas aayegi bhi ya nahi,nahi pata.." he said in a grim voice and left the room..
Their eyes were filled with tears hearing the doctor, but the new entry was lost in Abha. He kept gazing at her as if she was the most beautiful creation of god..
The team tried to control their tear but the couldn't , they let tears stream down their face.
"lekin yeh sab hua kaise aur woh hospital main kaise?" asked a confused Param.
ACP pointed towards the door gesturing that they should go out before talking any further..
They went out and sat on the seats given in the corridor ..
"Hamari Abha sabse pyaari bacchi thi , kisi ko dard main nahi dekh sakti thi lekin jab baatein case pe aati thi toh she was a tough and a strong lady... akeli thi, uske parents ki uske bachpan mein death ho gayi thi, uske relatives ne usse apnane se inkaar kar diya aur hostel bhej diya aur sare kharche wahi karte thee,liken apne sath rakhna ,usse bojh mante thee. Ab jab usse pyar hua toh woh pyaar bhi usse chod ke chala gaya .Woh khud jhul rahi hai zindagi aur maut ke bich.."
hearing this Param felt a piece of his heart break ,then shatter into very small pieces as if it is being crushed under a bulldozer..
" woh meri best friend thi aur choti behen ki tarha thi . har choti badi baat ,secret share karte the ek dusre ke saath.." said Kashish
" usne toh meri jaan bhi bachai thi kahi baar .. meri laparwahi uspe bhaari padti thi phir bhi woh sab sambhal leti thi.. garv hai mujhe uspar " All looked at Kavi in shock and he looked down in shame and then up to them with tearful eyes. ACP put his hand on kavi's shoulder patting it in a gesture that he understands..
"yaar jante hoon woh toh cupid hai ! meri aur lara ki setting karvai thi usne ..." saying so he started crying hard and hysterically ,keeping his hands on his eyes so that the tears would stop but it was not helpful.. at an impulse Kavi hugged him, Adi's tears wetting kavi's shirt.. He mummbled while crying " Abha wa...wapas aa jao p...please"
He got up and ran away to find a place where he could find peace and solace while the others looked on to where Adi was going...
Param felt some unknown emotions for Abha ... respect,reverance,admiration... He was curious to know more about her and so he asked ..
"Phir.."
"phir .. ekdin woh aaya uski zindagi mein aur hamare team mein .."


DONE
How is it ??

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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Amazing update
Really good loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Laadifan12

Amazing update

Really good loved it

thank you dear 😃

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