Dreams In Doldrums ???

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Dreams In Doldrums ???

Every girl grows up dreaming of her knight in shining armor, the fairy tale prince who would sweep her off her feet and take her to a land where a "happily ever after" exists ! When in love, it is a thing of joy to be able to tell your loved one just how much he means to you, and what better way to do it than swaying with him while expressing love for him,with utmost sincerity and passion !!

'Bunty ..I loved you first: but afterwards your love... my love was stable ,and yours was more strong...I was your girl friend ... now I am your wife , .. from now onward want to be your better half dear ...one together !'---

She entered in to the room with overflowing feelings ... as if the butterflies announcing their dreams ... as if the midnight's twinkling star defining it's smile ...as if the moving breeze swaying with a sweet fragrance...as if the moonlight itself embracing the reflections of it's own from the sea ...! She swayed there, into the heaven's gate, in to a paradise of their own ...to be in his presence ...in his embrace ...to be owned by him ,to be a part of him ...the romantic odyssey of a charming man and his maiden!!!A quiver here and a gush there ...ecstasy and desire everywhere --

Her eyes were telling him ..."let us unite now ..let my future be radiant and shine ...with sweet hopes of thee and mine ...many thoughts started to fly" ... desire in her eyes , hours in the time ,bees in his heart , yes .. many things started to fly ..."My heart began to beat faster and faster .My grip tightened . ...my body tensed! I shut my eyes as tightly as I could. It seemed as if my words were caught in my throat, making me choke on each and every word which I wanted to tell ! Bunty ..are you listening ?''--but a sudden silence here and there !Was God so economical ?Why scantly distribute love ?
''I opened my eyes to see you staring straight back at me...with one breath, the words slid off my tongue like a sweet, sweet symphony... "I love you" !! Can't you see the longing pain in my eyes?!
You promised to never hurt me...that promise is long broken ...You don't seem to notice my broken smile! It's been like that for a while!''
The lies you told ...the masks you wear, it's all for me ? I am unaware !
The broken pieces of my heart are just barley holding, your eyes ...your smile keeps it all from showing. The words that come from your mouth that you softly whisper in my ear, saying "I love you" is all I needed to hear , since long ...since long !
Hold me in your arms against the cold, my heart will mend as long as you hold !
One word would bring all the fears back, the clouds roll in and thunder claps! Watching you walk away, I swear I could die, imagining as if, you are walking away saying that one word I dread to hear 'bye' to love !"

Then ..then suddenly he disappeared ...preventing a flower from blooming ...stopping a feeling to smile..the budding leaves are parting from their branches to embrace the mother earth ..just like in Fall !

She was unable to stay, unwilling to leave... difficult to face, too much to grieve...was misunderstood, was taken for granted ...left behind ... to get washed away with a son's sin ??!!
Left there by him in pain, she started questioning herself ...'made the wrong choices? The heart got broken, leaving behind sharp, piercing shards ...Oh my god! ...those are the pieces of my heart ...yes ...my heart!!'

She was in her thoughts ...Her dreams got washed away by a sea of tears, "didn't know this was in store... Bunty ... I thought you were different, thought you understood ...will do the things that a pure heart should !---But were you true, were you just mine?Was I the only thing on your mind all this time? Was I right in trusting you with so much confidence?Or am I to be blamed for a situation so bad as this?"
"It was just another story, another guy and girl...but unlike other stories, it was too complicated to even try and unfurl...but who knew you can do this, ...life goes on, it never ends !! So I will be right here, ...nearer to you ... watching its trends trying to be happy, smiling to everyone I meet...face the cold, happily face the heat...when the stars come out twinkling, I'll be thinking of you ,when the sun sweeps the sky clean, yes I'll be thinking of you ,when the wind caresses my skin, you will be the one on my mind !! When the rain drop touches my lips , yes ...you will be the one on my mind!
You came in to my life and showed me a new self within me...
You made me see the things that I could never see !You are constantly present in my every thought ! Your eyes were a trap for me, Bunty I am caught ...caught between my self-pride and your indifference ! ...with sweet hopes of thee and mine together, in suspended animation !--

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you Ritu !🤗
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Sita ,always like your titles ! There is always a swing in your words.You described the young girl's devastating feelings in an awesome way .Like her amazing acting talent . I feel she has all qualities of a very good actress .
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Originally posted by: Avyakta

Sita ,always like your titles ! There is always a swing in your words.You described the young girl's devastating feelings in an awesome way .Like her amazing acting talent . I feel she has all qualities of a very good actress .

Thank you Avyakta for liking my writing and ...yes she is a great actress !😊
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Seetha, very sensitive and heart-rending account of the dilemma of a young woman in love and very beautifully depicted by you👍🏼
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fantastic... 😃
like your unique style... ⭐️ thanks Seetha 🤗



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Originally posted by: vibraj

Seetha, very sensitive and heart-rending account of the dilemma of a young woman in love and very beautifully depicted by you👍🏼

Thank you VIbha for liking my description of an young girl's agony 🤗 ! Bunty is by deceiving Sagarika , he is deluding himself ! Yet to realize the future impact !
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Originally posted by: LiliWorld

fantastic... 😃

like your unique style... ⭐️ thanks Seetha 🤗



Thanks Lils 🤗!
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It was an amazing read 🤗...its true that every girl dreams about her prince charming and with this belief she enters into wedlock that all her desires that she cherished so far will be fulfilled by dream man but once she enters into matrimony , most of dreams fades into oblivion and it seems like a bubble burst... but again can we stop dreaming.?.. No, we cant that's the beauty of a woman..
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Originally posted by: seetha74

Thank you VIbha for liking my description of an young girl's agony 🤗 ! Bunty is by deceiving Sagarika , he is deluding himself ! Yet to realize the future impact !



Agree, hell knows no fury as a woman scorned😆, so Bunty should be ready to face the music, not the seduction one but of a different type🤢

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