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Posted: 13 years ago
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are kahani to abhi start hui hain na. aur last mein to inshi hi hain. don't worry
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Chapter : 2
Kuamr Food Company ki Main branch Delhi main hain. Jisko Rishi's Dadaji yani Mr. Dinanath Kumar sambhalte hain.

Aur dusri Branch Mumbai mein hain jisko Rishi & Indira sambhalte hain.

At Kumar Company :

Dadaji : Welcome, Mr. Rishi Kumar to our Company.

Rishi : Thanks dadaji. Oh sorry Thanks Boss.

Dadaji : (laughing) Nahin Beta tum mujhe dadaji hi bolo. Tumhare muh se ye boss achcha nahi lagta mujhe.

Rishi : Dadaji aap bhi na . Aapne hi to mujhe sikhaya hain na ki ghar aur office inme bahot bara difference hota hain aur wo humme maintain karna hi chahiye.

Dadaji : Are par mujhe tum Dadaji hi bulaoge. Bas aur kuch nahi.

Rishi : Achcha baba aap jit gaye aur main har gaya. Lekin meri bhi ek request kum order hain aap mujhe sirf Rishi hi bulayenge.

Dadaji : Ok ab tum mujhe order bhi dene lage kya?

Rishi : Haan fir wo haq hain mera jo koi chhin nahi sakta.

Both are laughing.

After some time :

Ek aadmi dadaji ke cabin main aata hain aur authority se bolta hain" Mr. Dinanath Kumar, mujhe aapse bahot zaruri bat karni hain".

Dadaji 1 second ke liye shocked ho jate hain. aur upar us adami ki taraf dekhte hain.

Dadaji : Abey tu. Main vahi soch raha tha ki mere office mein merihi cabin mein mujhse aaisebatein kaun kar raha hain.

Dr. Prakash Nayar ye dadaji ke bade achche dost hain,ya fir ye bhi bol sakte hain ki unke family friend hain.

Dr. Prakash : Are Dinanath tujhase aise authority ke sath aur kaun bat kar sakta hain mere siva. Achcha ek baat bata aaj tu bahot khush lag raha hain. Kya bat hain? Kuch khas hain kya aaj? Aaj to Rishi ka ya tera janamdin bhi nahi hain phir?

Dadaji : Are baba kitne sare sawal puchega? Ruko main batata hun.

Dr. Prakash : Toh jalldi bolo na.

Ussi waqt Rishi cabin mein aata hain.

Dadaji : (Dr. Prakash se) Main tujhe bolnehi wala tha mere khushi ka karan to utne mehi wo samne aagaya. Tere pichche dekh tu samaj jayega.

Dr. Prakash pichche mud kar Rishi ko dekhte hain. A handsome boy jo humesha apne hasi ke sath khushi batata hain. Jo logonko hasna sikhata hain.

Dr. Prakash : Are Rishi tum ? Yahan Delhi kab aaye beta? Aur mujhe phone tak nahin kiya tumne. Iss dadaji ko bhul gaya na Mumbai jane ke bad?

Rishi : Ye kaisi bat kar rahe hain aap doctor dadaji. Main aapko kaise bhul sakta hun?

Rishi Dr. Prakash ko bachpan se doctor dadaji kehekar hi bulata hain. Uski ye adat abhi tak nahi gayi.

Rishi : Aap to sirf dadaji ke nahi balki mere bhi dost hain. To main aapko kaise bhulunga? Aur jab main yahan nahi hota tab aaphi to dadaji ka khayal bhi rakhte ho aur unko akela bho mehsoos nahin hone dete.

Dr. Prakash: Chal ab maska mat mar. Aur jyada Emotional hone ki jarurat bhi nahi hain. Samjha kya?

Dadaji : Chal baith ab. Tum dono na jab mil jate ho to bhul hi jate ho ki main hun tumhare sath.

They are laughed.

Dadaji : Bata ab kya lega chai coffee ya kuch thanda?

Dr. Prakash: Are kuch nahin.

Rishi : Doctor dadaji aapko mere sath kuch to lena hi parega.

Dr . Prakash : Achcha thik hain. Coffee manga le.

Rishi 3 coffee ki order deta hain.

Dadaji : Are Prakash tu bol raha tha na ki tujhe kuch jaruri baat karni hain.

Dr. Prakash : Are haan main to bhul hi gaya.

Wo ek bar Rishi ki taraf dekhte hain.

Rishi : Dadaji koi problrm nahin hain na. Agar aapko Dadaji se kuch personal battein karni ho to main chalu kya?

Dr. Prakash : Chup chap baith. Tere baare mein hi mein yahan baat karne aaya hun.

Rishi (surprisingly ) : Mere baare mein?

Dr. Prakash : Haan. Main dekh raha hun tumhe aue tere dadaji ko teri life ki koi fikar hi nahin hain.

Dadaji and Rishi Both are surprised.

Both together : Matlab?

Dr. Prakash : Matlab ye ki tujhe ab Bahurani ke baare mein soch na chahiye Rishi.

Dadaji : Lo. Yahi bat maine us se subah boli thi tab mujhe bola ki abhi time hain shadi ko.

Rishi : Dadaji aap dono na. Are mujhe abhi achchi tarah settle to hone dijiye na.

Both Dadaji : Abhi tak tu settle nahin hua hain kya Rishi?

Rishi : (in mind) Kaise batau dadaji aapko ek galat larki aayegi aur humare bich mein jhagra karwayegi. Aur agar aisi larki nahi bhi aayi to bhi main aapse dur jaunga na. Agar meri shaadi ho gayi to mujhpe ek aur responsibility aayegi aur main nahin chahta ki aap me aur mujhme duriyan badhe. Agar us larki ne aapko samajhne ki koshish nahin ki toh)

Dadaji : Rishi ... Rishi...

Rishi : Kya? Aap mujhe bula rahe ho kya?

Dr. Prakash : Kahan kho gaye beta? Kahin tune Mumbai mein koi larki dhundi toh nahin?

Rishi : Kya dadaji aap bhi ?

Tabhi Rishi ko Indira ka Call aata hain.

Rishi : Excuse me haan plz..

Both dadaji are giggled.

Rishi : Thank God Indira !!! Kya time pe phone kiya tumne!!!

Indira : Kyun kya hua?

Rishi : Are kuch nahin.

Indira : Bata bhi do ab Rishi.. Tum mujhse kuch nahin hupa sakte jante ho na ye baat tum. Phir bhi..

Rishi narated whole conversation between them..

Indira: (haskar ) Toh ab Rishi taiyar ho jao shadi ke liye.

Rishi : Kya yaar tum bhi na. Achcha tumne phone kyun kiya?

Indira : Are haan wo kuch kaam ki bat karni thi. Lekin ye to batao dadaji kaise hain ? Maine to unko dekha bhi nahin hain. Mujhe apne company ke owner ko ek bar to milwa do yar...

Rishi : Are tum to mujhse mili ho na. Chalo main tumhaari ye khwaish jaldi puri kar dunga. Don't worry.Chalo ab kam ki batein ho jaye kya?

Phir wo dono kuch kam ki batein karne mein busy ho jate hain.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 3

Rishi kuch din tak KM me reh kar wapas mumbai aane ke liye nikalta hain.

Dadaji : Ja rahe ho beta? Ab wapas kab aaoge?

Rishi : Jaldi aayunga dadaji. (wo dadaji ke aankho mein pani dekhta hain) Aur ye kya aap ro kyun rahe ho? (& dramatically) Aap bhul gaye hain shayad aap RK ke dadaji ho jo kabhi rote nahi hain balki haste rehte hain.

Dadaji :(haskar) Nautanki kahika!!!

Rishi : That's my dadaji!!!!

Rishi flyte se mumbai aakar Indira ko call karta hain. Due to Sunday Indira ghar pe hi thi.

Rishi : Kahan ho Indira?

Indira : Aaj Sunday hain na isiliye ghar pe hi hun. Tum aagaye kya mumbai?

Rishi : Haan. 3 ghante huye. Flyte se aaya isiliye itna fresh mood me hu.

Indira : Achha!!!

Rishi : Are maine isiliye call kiya ki office me sab thik thak to hain na?

Indira : Haa. Kyun?

Rishi : Aisehi.

Indira : Ab bata bhi to do Rishi. Tum jante ho na ki tum mujhse kuch chupa nahi sakte.

Rishi : Indira tum na. Kaise samajh sakti ho meri har bat?

Indira : Friend jo hu tumhari.

Rishi :Are kuch nahi wo mujhe aisa lag raha tha ya bolo ki negative intention aa rahi thi isiliye pucha. Waise Aaj rat ko kya kar rahi ho?

Indira : Are di aur jiju aaye hue hain na to unke sath hi time spend karungi. Tum kya kar rahe ho? Ek kam karo na Rishi tum bhi ghar pe aajao rat ko dinner ke liye.

Rishi : Are nahi yar. It is your family time na. To ...

Indira :(cuts his words& tauntingly) haa tum kyun aaoge? Tum hote kaun ho mere?

Rishi : Are gussa mat ho Indira. Thik hain me aata hu.

Indira : That's like a good boy!!!!

Rishi : Oh hello madam kuch to rihaz kijiye. Apne boss se aise bat karte hain kya?

Indira : Excuse me Mr. Rishi me abhi humare boss Mr. Rishi Kumarse nahi balki mera khas jigri dost Rishi se bat kar rahi hu. Aur usse aisi bat karne ka pura haq hain mujhe. Samjhe?

Rishi : Haa samaj gaya Hitler!!!



Indira kutumb ko Rishi ke aneke bare me bol deti hain.

Kutumb : Achha hua jo usse bulaya. Bechara ghar ke khane ko taras raha hoga. Itna bada khandan ka waris hain Rishi par attitude to aam logo ke jaisa hi hain. Lekin zindagi ne uske sath jo kiya na... bechare ke maa bap ko hi... khair chodo. Achha kiya tune Indira usko bulaya. Gaurav ko bhi achhi si company milegi. Rishi bhiGaurav se milega. Mandira ke shadi me kuch karan wo nahi aaya tha.

Indira : Haa ma. Jiju bhi akela nahi mehsus karenge. Lekin papa...

Kutumb : Tum unki fikar mat karo Indira. Me bol dungi ki maine hi tujhe bola tha Rishi ko bulane ke liye. Jao ab Mandira tujhe kabse bula rahi hain.

Indira : Thanks mom.. (Aur wo kutumb ko kiss karti hain.)

Kutumb : (man me) Rishi bahot achha ladka hain Indira ke liye. Wo dono bahot achhe dost bhi hain. Lekin meri beti pyar karti hain to uss Aditya se. Mujhe us ladke me koi kharabi nazar to nehi aati hain par pata nehi kyu mujhe bohot ajeeb lagta hai vo. Jab Indira ne mujhe us se pehli bar milwaya tha tabhi wo ladka mujhe pata nahi kyu utna achcha nehi laga tha.Indira ko maine kitni bar samjhane ki koshish ki hain lekin wo manti hi nahi hain. Wo kehti hain ki Maa ap chinta mat karo Adi aisa ladka nahi hain wo mujhe aur me us se bahot pyar karte hain. Thode din me aapko bhi Adi pasand aayega dekh lena.
Shayad aisa ho bhi jaye. Lekin me abhi bhi Rishi ko hi mere damadji ke rup me dekhna chahungi.
Aur wo bhagwanji se prarthana karti hain ki unki dono betiyonki zindagi me achhe se sukh bhare hi din dena. Aur wo kitchen me busy ho jati hain.

Edited by Dnyanu16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice dnyanu... Mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha is thread k bare ne... 😃
Jaldi likhna
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dhanoo 🤗nice update yaar thora jaldi diya kar
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
nice update!!! Hoping for quick updates 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice update dhanyanu 😊...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update dnyano.
Pls write nxt update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
arey wah meri qb bhi ff likhti hai😆
great writing n nice concept😳😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: _saumya_

Nice dnyanu... Mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha is thread k bare ne... 😃
Jaldi likhna


thanks. aur jaldi likhne ka jarur try karungi 😃

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