voice of audience lost - reason for low trps

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am posting this on behalf of my mom...she has complex about her written english...I have been coralled to help her post this

Her main thesis is that Rishi was the voice of audience in Indira's life...
...he spoke on our behalf when we wanted to tell Indira to leave the her garb of Hitler...
...when he told her that she wears it as a security blanket to hide from hurt, life etc, it was us through him...
...when he encouraged her to encourage Munna and Sunaina to become more responsible, it was us through him...
...when he came to her aid when Ishaan was missing, or Inder needed care, or when she was falsely arrested etc, it was also us through him...
...when he encouraged HBitler to be Indira, it was us through him...
...when she fell in love and he with her, we the audience also fell in love with them
...Oh what joy it was when she laughed...even though the track was all rushed


But the audience lost connection with both Rishi and through Rishi, lost connection to speak to Indira when Rishi was kidnapped and the new, hapless, lazy, drunkard rishi emerged.

The gentling effect he had on Indira...and through him the audience had on Indira was lost. We had bitter, shrew, uni-dimensional Indira.

This turn in the serial was the death knell for audience's connection with the story...an unwarranted self-inflicted wound by the creators of the serial


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Posted: 13 years ago
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My mom also feels that the serial is not giving a true picture of a strong woman who fights the odds and creates a space for herself in the male dominated world.

My mom says she has shared her story here...I will not repeat it...will say this that she has overcome horrendous problems to create a good future for her children...I hope one day to write her story

she thinks writers have presented a caricature of a strong woman...they had a tremendous opportunity to show a nuanced story of a girl with admirable traits...who rolls with the punches...learns and grows.

Indira is responsible, tenacious, honest girl with huge strengths...but she has lost perspective,forgot how to respect others and gain respect...she is still Bubbly, not Indira...a mature woman.

The thing that she gets so frustrated and worked about is abuse...how Indira has fallen so deep in the abuse pit that it has become a part of her personality...Indira gets abused and in turn Indira is herself abusive to others...physical abuse and bitterness is not what makes a strong woman

My mother suffered tremendous abuse from her first husband...and she sees the same pattern of abuse in Indira and Sharmas...She gets really mad at Indira for not seeing that

For her this is Indira's biggest problem that will ruin her life...she feels that more Indira tolerates the abuse from Sharmas, more they will abuse and more Indira herself will become abusive
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome post. Totally agreed with all the points
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Posted: 13 years ago
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excellent post! ur mother has made a very valid point.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great post! I completely agree! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb post. Totally to the point. Keep writing. I agree to each of your points
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Eliza_D



For her this is Indira's biggest problem that will ruin her life...she feels that more Indira tolerates the abuse from Sharmas, more they will abuse and more Indira herself will become abusive


Perfectly said by your mother.👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@TM i cannot accept few of your points...

about connecting to HD... i always connected to it because Indira's problems are very realistic and sharma family jaise families exist...

i actually couldnot connect to HD on that day when INSHI rushed marriage and Indira's meaningless laughing suddenly, made me disconnected to HD

but now what they are showing the track from POV of Indira i am able to connect to it again... from starting HD went in the POV of Indira that is continuing...

i never expected INSHI to happen so fast... so for me INSHI has same importance what sharma's have in HD
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Eliza_D

My mom also feels that the serial is not giving a true picture of a strong woman who fights the odds and creates a space for herself in the male dominated world.


My mom says she has shared her story here...I will not repeat it...will say this that she has overcome horrendous problems to create a good future for her children...I hope one day to write her story

she thinks writers have presented a caricature of a strong woman...they had a tremendous opportunity to show a nuanced story of a girl with admirable traits...who rolls with the punches...learns and grows.

Indira is responsible, tenacious, honest girl with huge strengths...but she has lost perspective,forgot how to respect others and gain respect...she is still Bubbly, not Indira...a mature woman.

The thing that she gets so frustrated and worked about is abuse...how Indira has fallen so deep in the abuse pit that it has become a part of her personality...Indira gets abused and in turn Indira is herself abusive to others...physical abuse and bitterness is not what makes a strong woman

My mother suffered tremendous abuse from her first husband...and she sees the same pattern of abuse in Indira and Sharmas...She gets really mad at Indira for not seeing that

For her this is Indira's biggest problem that will ruin her life...she feels that more Indira tolerates the abuse from Sharmas, more they will abuse and more Indira herself will become abusive

I totally agree with you @ bold.
Eliza ji, you went through difficult times and came out triumphant, that is what I would call a strong woman.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Valid Points. Creative should aware of these things always b4 making certain changes.
Most of audiences are not able to connect properly with excitement which is there earlier.
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