Wings of Imagination II

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Posted: 13 years ago
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First of all,thank you all for your replies and appreciation.Now I'll try to take the story to the next scene.

(Morning hours:7A.M.-in the hospital)
The rays of the sun peeps in from the curtain and falls into Indira's eyes.As she opens them,she finds Rishi near her,deep in sleep holding her hand.Indira looks in disbelief in his face,because till yesterday she wasn't even sure if she would ever see Rishi again,and now her love is near her.She raises her right hand to brush into Rishi's hair,when someone knocks at the door.
Indira:slowly taps Rishi at his arm and says,'Rishi wothiyein,koien darwazepar hain.'

Rishi:Opens his eyes and gives a smile at Indira.'Good morning!mere Indiraji.'He then opens the door to find the nurse waiting,who tells him that she needs to check the BP.

The nurse takes note of the BP and leaves telling that,the doctor will be coming for his rounds.Rishi closes the door after the nurse and goes to Indira,who tells Rishi to call someone as she wants to go to the wash room.Rishi around to her side and gives out his hand to her.Indira looks at the hand,and then looks at Rishi,her eyes asking,'what?' Rishi answers her questioning eyes,saying;"Kiya hoya?Aayein Mein Aapkoin Bathroom Tak Leinke Jatain Hoin.Apne Paatise Sharmarahe Hain!"

Indira:She is overwhelmed with gratitude;she takes his hand and goes near the bathroom and says,"Rishi Aap Mere Aadatein Bigardna Chahe Tein Hain Kiya?Soup Pelake Deyna,Abhi Bathroom Tak Laana," tears twinkling in her eyes as she speaks.

Rishi:"Thoda Toin Begardne Dejiyein,Baadmein Suad Samaat Wosul Karloinga Ekelemein,Ekbaar Khar Pohoich Jayein."

As Rishi waits for Indira,the doctor comes in and looks into the reports.Indira comes out and he takes a look at the stitch,and tells Rishi that she can go home;but she would be needing dressing until the wound heels completely.The doctor leaves,and Rishi helps Indira sit on the bed.As he takes the report and medicines from the table,Indira looks at Rishi,who has also been so much pain lately,and holds his hands and brings them closer to her cheek and closes her eyes.

Rishi:Beholds this moment in his eyes for a while and says,"Aaj Bohut Pyaar Aaraha Hain Paati Par,Kiya Baat Hain?Aap Rukeyein Mein Reception Se Bill clear Karkein Aatain Hoin."

As Rishi goes down,he thinks about the situation they both are in.They have to go back to Delhi,and there is just little money left with him,which he has borrowed from a friend.Now reality is staring right at his face,he's unemployed and doesn't have any savings;he's married and has the responsibility of a husband.He feels ashamed that,he can't even effort for the tickets also to go back home.Rishi,keeping aside his ego,calls up Sumer and tells him to lend some money.The cop comes to the hospital and meets Rishi and gives him two train tickets for Delhi,and some money.Rishi feels grateful to this stranger,who has helped him and Indira,in such a circumstance,like a friend.So he shows his gratitude towards Sumer by giving his hand for friendship and says,"Thank you Sumer,Aaj Join Aapne Humere Liya Kiya Woh Ek Aacha Dost Hin Karsakta Hain.Mein Delhi Loteinhin Kaampar Laag Jayon Gain Aur Aapke Paise Lautain Dongain."

Sumer:Shakes hand and says,"Aarein Koye Baat Nahin Rishiji,Aab Aapne Mujhe Jaab Aapna Dost Mana Toh Itna Toh Karsakta Hoin.Wase Mein Nikalta Hoin,Aaplog Aayein;Aur Hain,Madamji Kese Hain?"

Rishi:Gets little jealous when Sumer asks about Indira's condition Rishi says she is doing well,and soon recover.They part,and Rishi comes upstairs to take Indira.

Indira:"Kahain Reh Gayethe Aap?Mein Abhi Phone Karnewali Thi."

Rishi:He tells her that he asked Sumer for help,and got tickets back to Delhi.He also wanted to open up to Indira about his anger that he has gone through,realizing how ashamed he is for not being able to take care of things.But Indira's condition,not only externally,but her inner turmoil that is killing her every moment,thinking about the betrayal of her father and her brother,made him keep aside his turmoil,which seems very little near hers."Aare Chaliye Aapne Toh Aabhi change Nahi Keya";he takes her dress and tells her to put on.

Indira:She takes the dress and asks Rishi to turn over.As she raises her hands to put inside the sleeves,the wounded part gets a stretch and she makes a painful sound.

Rishi:He immediately turns over and holds her saying,"Kiya Hoya?"He sees Indira putting her hand over the wounded area and tells him to turn.Rishi takes holds Indira's hand and asks her to get up;"Layeyein Mein help Kardoin Aapkoin sleeve Dalne Mein.Chinta Maat kejeyein Mein Pechein Chala Jatain Hoin Aur Kuch Nahin Dekhunga."He lifts Indira's left hand slowly and puts it in the sleeve,and then zips it up.

Indira,for the first time,doesn't react to this action of Rishi's.She feels that,that feeling of uneasiness,which she once had,is not there.It seems they have overcome that phase of uncomfortableness.She is happy that,she is slowly accepting Rishi's closeness.And as Indira stands there thinking all these,Rishi collects their belongings and they leave the hospital;takes a cab and goes to the station to catch the train for Delhi.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very interesting take on the story. I enjoyed it! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Enjoyed reading it. you are an awesome writer.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I really like your imagination. Please continue.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice imagination. I hope u will come up with imaginations like this daily. 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Earnshaw...
Nice scene ... wished we could have seen something like this in the show ...Rishi taking care of Indira ... the growing of their Bond ... the strengthening of their Love ...
I fail to understand why the HD CVs are shying away from showing us scenes of Greater Emotional Bonding between INSHI . 😕
Without the focus on strenghtening of INSHI Bond , the show can not achieve great heights...
the Viewers need to see and feel the depth and Intensity of their Love... the viewers need to build this strong attachment with their relationship ... only a strong INSHI relationship will draw the audience into the INSHI story and get the Viewers hooked on to this show ... we as viewers do not want to see only Comic scenes or somekind of Hitlergiri all the time ... we want to see a story with Depth of Emotions ... greater feelings ...strong Bonds between the lead Couple that is INSHI .
i really hope that the CVs get this point before it is too late ...
but anyways you should let your Imagination soar and come up with more such scenes . 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really loved it! thanks for writing another great part! :)

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