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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Very well written.👏
i m feeling like 😭
thanks 4 the update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Very nice sad story. Nice update. Thank u.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Thnks 4 the pm...Nicely written...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
hey nice ss... luvd d 1st part...
very emotional... i was lyk...😭😭
plzzz contd sooon...
please pm me nxt tym... i dont want 2 miss any part...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part2

Doctor...doctor...- indira shouted

Doctor mere husband...inka accident hogaya hai...plzz doctor dekhiye plzzz *indira was almost soaked in tears*

Doctor- nurse OT mein le chalo inhe...aur aap plz tnsn mat lijiye

Doc goes from there and at same tym avantika and vidit too come there

Indira- bhaiya*hugging him* rishi...woh rishi ko...*sobbing*

Vidit- kuch nahi hoga rishi ko...shant ho jao

Avantika *crying*-indira accident kaise hua

Indira- bhabhi pata nahi mujhe bas ek call aaya aur phir mein yaha agayi rishi ke pass

Avantika- ab kaisa hai*tears flowing continuosly*

Indira- doctor unhe OT mein le gaye hai

Avantika cudnot handle tis...she cudnot see her little brother in such condition...that brother to whom she loved and cared him like her own son...avantika went from there

Vidit was consoling indira...he noticed avantika going from there but decide to stay wid indira coz he knows tht his wife needed a lil tym to be alone and indira too was in the bad state...indira felt the absence of her sister in law...the day avantika was married to her brother or even b4 tht avantika was always like a mother to her...indira knew tht avantika loved her brother like hell she cudnot resist to see her son like brother in this condition...indira was lucky to have avantika as her sister in law infact she got her elder sister and more thn tht indira got her mother who used to console her care her and scolds her...indira realised tht she totally had forgotten abt her sister...she looked towards her brother for an answer

Indira- bhaiya...bhabhi?

Vidit- mene usse terrace ke taraf jaate dekha hai...woh kuch tym shayad akele rehana chahti hai...tu jaanti hai rishi kya hai uske liye...

Indira- mein jaa rahi hu bhabhi ke pass

Indira went from there asking the way for terrace to the ward boy and finally she reached there...she saw her sitting in the corner looking infact staring at the sky as if asking the almighty y his brother only has to suffer wat has he done...avantika sensed indira...now avantika cud even recognise indira's silent footsteps...indira had becum her small sister since she was not even married to vidit ...avantika was always grateful to indira coz indira was tht person becoz of whom she met her life partner who loved her very much...wen rishi told abt indira to her at tht tym she understood she might be the different from others coz rishi was not tht who will choose abruptly...rishi always claimed tht his life partner wud be different and avantika was happy tht his life partner was different...indira always was inspiration of avantika...she had known indira taking responsibilities at tender age...all she knew was indira is gem nd also knew tht indira will always take care of her brother, will not let anything to harm him and she too knew tht indira did her work honestly...avantika was proud to have her as sister in law...

Indira- bhabhi...

Avantika cudnot control and broke down...she cried hard hugging indira

Avantika- indira m not as strong as u are...i cannot see rishi in this state

Indira- m sorry bhabhi...i broke ur promise, i cudnot take care of rishi...i m a bad wife who cudnot even take care of her husband

Avantika- arre pagli*wiping tears of indira* kya boli jaa rahi hai...isme tumhari kya galti hai...yeh sab toh uska kiya hua hai*points at sky*...dekh abhi humein himmat rakhni chaiye especially tujhe nahi toh rishi jab thik ho jayega toh usse bura lagena ki uske wajah se hum sab ki buri halat hogayi...aur tu kab se buri patni hogayi...u r the best wife any guy can have and guess wat my brother is luckiest one...arre jarur usne precaution nahi li hogi car chalate tym...dont blame urself bacha...sab thik hojayega...i know kit um mere rishi ka saath kabhi nahi chodogi...i have full faith on you...mene ainvayi tumhe apna bhai nahi saupa hai...i know tum uska khyaal ache se rakh paogi...

Hearing bacha from avantika indira cudnot control her and hugged avantika and cried her heart out...also she was crying coz she will not able to stand the expectation of her sister...she knew she soon was going to break avantika's faith and belief...she knew she will not be there to take care of her husband...she cursed herself for not being wid him wen he will need her da most and wen he will enter in new phase of life as father...she hated herself

Indira- bhabhi agar mein rishi ko chod ke chali jao toh...agar mujhe kuch hogaya toh kya aap mere rishi ka khyaal rakhoge

Avantika- pagal hogayi hai kya tu...kuch bhi bolti hai...tu kaha jaane wali hai waise bhi tujhe toh apne great grand children ka fourth nappy change karna hai...abhi tu kahi nahi jaa sakti...

[note: the line great grand children one, i have taken this line from other show, this line suited here so used it, i hope u all wont mind...if any problem let me know i will change it ]

Avantika always brings smile on indira face from her random talks she tries here too nd was quite successful

Indira- kya bhabhi...aap bhi na kuch bhi bolti ho...chalo bhaiya pareshan ho rahe honge

Indira and avantika went from there although she smiled infront of avantika but inside she was broken...first she cudnot be wid her baby and husband and now her life is struggling for his life...on the way indira stopped avantika

Indira- bhabhi rishi thik toh hojayega na*a drop of tears rolled down her cheek*

Avantika- sab thik hojayega...dekhna rishi bahut jald tumhare pass hoga

Soon they reached to OT vidit was waiting for them he was relaxed to see them calm...by seeing them he knew tht both sisters had consoled themselves...he was proud to have such a smart wife and sister

They all were waiting for doctor to come out...indira was sitting on the chair nd was in deep thoughts remembering

Flashback

Phone rings

Indira- hello rishi*she saw jaan on her phone*

Person- ji mein rishi nahi aap kon

Indira- ji yeh toh rishi ka number hai...rishi ka phone aap ke pass kya kar raha hai

Person- ji aap rishi ki...

Indira- mein unki patni...lekin hua kya hai

Person- ji rishi ka road accident hojaya hai...mein unhe ambulance mein leke hospital jaa raha hu...

Indira- accident!!!!

Hearing this indira applied break to her car...she felt like the world around her ended, she cudnot breathe...tears were continuosly flowing from her eyes...she just cudnot believe this...he always used to say her drive safely and today he met with an accident tht too road accident...she felt like something had tore her heart apart, whole body was numb...she lost her senses

Person- hello Mrs rishi *this brought indira into senses*

Indira- konse hospital

Person- city hospital

Indira- thik hai

Widout killing a second she took U turn and increased her speed...on the way she was only muttering rishi...rishi's memories was flashing infront of her...tears making her vision blur but she blinked it away as she wanted to reach asap...she wanted to be wid rishi...she reached hospital and saw which took the earth below her feet...rishi was lyinh in the stretcher all covered with blood..she shouted rishi...

Flashback ends

Avantika placed her hand on indira's shoulder pointing towards doctor...it had been 4 hrs since rishi went in OT...indira saw doctor cuming and went to him

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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Well written girl👏
suspense par lakar rok dia.😔
Btw thanx for the update😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
Awesome update..👏 well written.. 😭 kya hua indu ko?bachega na rishi..?
waiting for next one..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: loveinshi

Awesome update..👏 well written.. 😭 kya hua indu ko?bachega na rishi..?

waiting for next one..



indu ko kya hua? u need to read my previous update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: girl_rocks



indu ko kya hua? u need to read my previous update

i'll surely..😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
ohhh!!! suspense is killing me...

awsum update dear...

waiting 4 d nxt... plzzz contd sooon ... m waiting...

thanks 4 d pm dear...

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