InShi OS- Khalbali Part 4 on pg 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heya IFians, I am Shivam... new to this forum and also very less visitor of IF. I am following HD from day 1 and wish to share one OS with you all. It is based on how I want Rishi will manaofy Indira and will make her smile.

Khalbali

Indira's POV

What should I say to this? Today Mr. Sharma divorced that Jhumpa! Should I be happy! I can't make myself accept such a father who left us for mere greed for money. He left us on the road, where my struggle began. I have learnt to take care of my family, I can supplement my family alone and I don't need anyone NOT EVEN HIM.

And today this man who I hated the most has come back to us. I don't feel right something is terribly wrong, for the first time in my life I need someone to hold my hand and direct me towards the right path. Why is it that always I am betrayed and I am left alone to feel the pain? When I was 10 papa left us and now Rishi, I hate men

Indira- Bhabhi mere liye paani laayiega please!

Indira had too much to care of- the wedding preparations, his spendthrift family and most of all...a broken heart. It was the first time after so many years that her heart had opened its doors to someone only to be wounded terribly. But she still had some iota of faith left in Rishi.

Indira- main us nikamme bigdail ameerzade pe itna vishwas kaise kar sakti hoon. Aaj bhi mera dil usko dhokebaaz maanne ko tayyar kyun nahi hai? (she thought)

Bhabhi enters with a glass of water. She is shivering with fear.

Bhabhi- Indira, le paani

Indira- haan bhabhi table pe rakh dijiye aur jaiiyye... aur haan...neeche phoolo ke decoration dekh lijiye. Mujhe kuch zaruri phone calls attend karni hai.

There is a loud shriek...

This is the first part of my OS. I will update in a week. If you want a PM...add me to your buddy list.

Cheers,

Shivam


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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice starting dear..pls do continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: achoose

nice starting dear..pls do continue soon...

Thanks alot😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice and do continue please
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amazing love it ..cont soon dear ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyshhh ... continue pleash... i myself was thinking to write one :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start dear
please cont,. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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u mean to say its an ff... gr8... nyc srt... plz continue n pm me when u update!!... :)
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Nice start yaar,continue soon
PM me when u update
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Its nice start shivam.Awesome
.please do cont.

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