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Posted: 16 years ago
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ur guud yaar, luved them..... will wait 4 ur chpts ahead
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
Wow👏
This is a really great fanfic. Its very well written.
Plz continue soon. Can't wait for more
Posted: 16 years ago
#23
Chapter 4 coming in a few days...........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
Wonderful job Aishwariya :) Amazing as always...Syrine is interesting. Post more soon!
Posted: 16 years ago
#25
Professor Avalon
Everyone got out of the boat and headed for the castle doors. Rose and Albus stayed together. "See you inside mate!" said Alex, smiling.
"Wait! Join in with us", said Albus who kinda found a strange liking for this bright and energetic boy.
"You sure?" asked Alex eyeing Rose whose cheeks turned crimson out of anger.
"Ofcourse", said Albus and so the little group of three proceeded. "Your dad and my were really good friends", siad Alex. "They got into quite a lot of adventures. Everyone sees a bit of a role model in our parents, you know".
"I know. My parents loves your family. They always talk about the good friends they had during their school days", siad Albus.
"I know, its really amazing how you can get fri................."
"Attention all students!" shouted professor Majenta. "Quite!"
All the students were distracted. They soon realized that they were standing in front of the final staircase, before the great hall.
"In a few seconds, you will march into the great hall where you will be served with plenty of edibles. But before that, you will be sorted into your respective houses, depending on your abilities and qualifications. Until you are inside this historic place, your houses will be your families. All certificates will lead your points and misdeeds will minus points. Till you are here, you will be taught the essential basics of both magic and disciplines. Get ready, we are heading indoors", said professor Majenta, and soon the hall doors opened and the children formed two staright lines and followed professor Majenta indoors.
There were two large tables inside filled with students. Above, at the ceiling, there was a scene of a stary sky night with floating candles and sometimes many pixies flew and waved at them. Rose plainly explained that they were the work of a careful plotted magic which was certainly a tough one to learn. Ahead of them, was a long row of table and all the elderly magicians or rather the teachers sat still.
A bulky and jet-blacked haired professor seemed to wave at the incoming students and sure enough, Alex waved back , recognising his father.
Albus' blood felt warm with red-hot excitement. He was so wiling to kow which house he would belong.
"Gather around Students!" cried professor Majenta. "Okay...first....Sean Cauldrin".
The bulky boy who accompanied Rose and Albus gulped and went to the podium.
Professor Majenta took a black sleek hat with a bend nozzle and placed it on the boy's head. At once, eyes and a big wide mouth poped up and it began to speak.
"Interesting. Very interesting. Ravenclaw!"
At once, there were claps from the table where students were wearing blue and silver ties.
"Close call", whispered Rose.
"Ellen Page", said professor Majenta.
A brown haired girl with dimples went up to the podium.
Just as the hat was placed, the sorting hat spoke up, "Ambitious! Slytherin!"
"That's harsh!" whispered Rose. "I hope I'm not ambitious enough to be in Slytherins".
"Rose Weasley!" announced professor Majenta.
Rose looked at Albus. He uttered the words 'Good Luck' and Rose took a deep breath and headed forward. As the sorting hat was placed, she started thinking all bizzards about life and adventures.
"Confussed but quite intelligent. Griffindors!"
At once the students of the Griffindor table yelled in excitement and welcomed Rose delightfully.
Albus suddenly had the feeling that maybe he wouldn't be able to follow his father's footprints afterall.
"Alex Longbottom!" announced professor Majenta.
Alex was confident enough. He simply marched upto the podium and took his seat.
"Very very intelligent! Tough but fair in making decisions..........Griffindors!"
Another shout followed.
"Scorpious Malfoy!" cried professor Majenta.
The sorting aht did not take much time in sorting Scorpious and merely cried out, "Slytherins!"
"Albus Potter! announced professor Majenta, this time she looked at the person having the name. Infact everyone did. Some even started whispering.
Albus chuckled twice.
He, with shivering legs approached the podium and took his seat. Professor Majenta with a little hestitations, placed the sorting aht on Albus' head.
"Ah! Another Harry Potter. Possess all the qualities of the four houses. But I have made enough mistakes placing your father in Griffindors. I have other plans in store for you. You are daring, intelligent, hard-working and yet power hungry. No! I won't let you go that easily..........hmm..........Griffindors!"
It was like something had hit Albus right into his stomach. In just a few moments he was going to be deducted from the house he meant to be in. He rose up with the same shivering legs.
The entire Griffindor table was filled withshouts and screams of joy.
Albus aproached the table and Rose immediately hugged him. "Congratulations!"
"Congratulations mate!" said Alex.
It was only a smile which Albus was able to give.
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After the entire sorting was done, a slim-figured lady with spectacles and a long-pointed hat and old green clothes rose up and cleared her throat.
"Welcome to another marvellous year of Hogwarts! Students and teachers...welcome! I hope all of you enjoyed a lovely summer vacaton. Before starting the glorious year, I really want to ask you to put your best skills forward. Some rules which I would like to repeat for you all.
"No wondering around at the corridors late at night. Students are prohibited to go even a step near the forbidden forest. Students are advised to follow the instructions of their house prefects and teachers and any students caught misbehaving are to be severely punished. Another important annoncement, the headmistress of Cloud Tower is going to pay us a vist tomorrow so I want you to be at your best." said Professor Mc'Gonagall.
"This year, you will be challenged both mentally and physically in almost all the subjects. And before you depart into your rooms, let me introduce you to our new Defence Against the Dark Arts teacher, professor Avalon, previous teacher of Cloud Tower."
As soon as she said this, a tall, thin and pale faced man rose up and rested his eyes on the students. You canot call him a professor because he had a snake like appearance in his eyes and face and his presence made Albus feel a bit uncomfortable.
"Professor, would you like to say something?" asked professor Mc'Gonagall.
Professor Avalon nodded and looked at the teachers' table and then spoke up. "I do feel honoured to be a part of this highly-reputed school which has taught students magic in an emphasized way as well as disciplined students with the values of moral and ethics, but I hope that my new rules and regulations might help to bring a change in the changeable corners of the school."


Edited by Miley_hp - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its niiiiice........ but dont u think it was a lil' short.... btw.... luved it like hel.. w8ing 4 next chpts
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Posted: 16 years ago
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interesting update...want to find out more about alex...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great part👏 Plz continue soon.
Posted: 16 years ago
#29
The Three Witches

Often you have heard that people complain regarding the unconventional names given to streets and lanes. I did. The last time the Criss-Cross ALne was renemd, the Quibbler drastically objected to such artificials, as per the permission of the editor Luna Lovegood Longbottom. But the Mourning Lane was one exception and probably will continue to be. Mourning Lane lies at the far end of the Spinner's End, or maybe further. Many people especially young and adventurous boys have tried to explore this lane but without success. Tales run through the valleys that nobody has ever returned after putting a step at this strange lane.
But today, at this stormy weather, under the crimsoned coloured sky, few cloaked men proceeded towards the Mourning Lane without being noticed.
I am saying they are men because one of them, in their most fearful and husky voice whispered, "I think someone is following us....we must stop".
The others looked around but saw no one. The night was very dark and it was quite impossible to see anyone like that.
"Are you sure you saw someone Steve?" asked a slim cloaked man.
The person namely Steve looked around with round eyes and then he took out his wand. He pointed it towards a tree and cried out "Divido".
At once, the tree splited into two from the trunk and there, behind the tree, stood a shadowy figure. At first, the onlookers thought it to be a dark shadow of the branches but now, they clearly saw that a woman was satnding and watching them.
"Syrine, I knew you would come to see......." began Steve but Syrine cut her short.
"I did not come to talk to you in friendly modesty. I have come to you with a warning...........about your doings and steps", said Syrine.
"What rubbish are you talking about lady?!" cried otu a bulky stout man.
"Silence!" cried out Steve and said "Continue..."
"You have come to meet Valtore.....I know, have come to see his growing power but you must be aware. The three Witches are still his guardians", siad Syrine.
"You have seen Valtore?" asked Steve.
Syrine nodded.
"How is he like?" asked a curious man.
"Powerful and stronger than anyone can ever imagine, with a cunning look that adds to his face and wit....everything about him is something new", said Syine.
"Then take us to him. I must meet him and endure him myself", siad Steve.
"Not so suddenly Steve. Your daughter is in Hogwarts with that Potter's breed. You must make sure that your every step assures safety for her", siad Steve.
While they were talking, the wind grew a lot wilder. It was shivering and cold. Steve rubbed his arms and loked at others. They looked at Steve.
"I think it will rain", siad Steve nad saying so he looked Syrine.
Her face was paled with fear and she looked at all directions.
Steve and the others understood that something odd and unexplained was happening. But what?
"They are here.....the three withches are here", and saying this Syrine bent down as if to greet them like royal guests.
The sky grew dark with the clouds hovering over.
Suddenly, three rather strange and shadowy figures approached and circled them all from the night sky. They started to circle them in such a speed that they could not see what was ahead of them. Some men shouted others held tight onto them. Slowly, the speed decreased and finally stopped.
And there, standing in front of them were three large and dark creatures with white curled up hairs and wrinkled skin and huge nails.
One looked at Syrine and said, "The time has come".



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Edited by Miley_hp - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
#30
I'll be updating soon..........don't worry about it.........

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