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CHAPTER ONE:
ALL WAS WELL'
Harry was so tired by the time they got back to the Gryffindor common room, which was now damaged and was not as cozy as it was a few hours ago, that he didn't even notice himself climbing up to the boys' dormitory and collapsing into his four-poster bed. He summoned Kreacher sleepily and told him to bring a sandwich for him. He hadn't even finished eating when sleep overpowered him and he curled up in the bed, not aware of his glasses, his injuries and his torn cloths. The last sound he heard before sleeping was snoring from Ron, who was deep in sleep, being equally tired.
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Harry awoke next morning and rubbed his eyes, but didn't get up. He looked sideways at Ron's bed and saw that he was still fast asleep. Wondering whether he should wake him up or not, he lied in the bed for a long time. The previous day flashed in front of his eyes. Breaking in Gringotts, apparating in Hogsmeade, Aberforth, meeting DA members, searching for Ravenclaw's tiara, the Room of Requirement, Fred's death'his stomach lurched painfully, death of Severus Snape'another painful lurch, Lupin and Tonks dying'another lurch.
Enough! He told himself firmly. It is not at all your fault'there's no need to feel guilty. But it was not going to be that easy, after all. He felt a great weight in his stomach and wished he had a pensieve to put all the bitter thoughts away. Next to him, Ron stirred and woke up. For a moment he stared blankly at Harry as though sure it is a dream and then he got up.
"Er'Harry?"
"Good morning!" Harry tried to say cheerfully.
"Er'yeah, morning!" said Ron weakly.
A moment went in silence.
"Are you all right?" both said at once and then smiled.
None of them spoke while they dressed up rather absent-mindedly and Ron, anxiously. They slowly went down in the common room to be greeted by the students. Hermione joined them and the trio went to the grounds, none speaking.
They reached the lake and sat under a tree. After a while, Harry got up and began walking slowly on the edge of the lake. The flashes of the battle again came over him but he didn't resist them. He remembered watching the memories of Snape, taking in the fact that he was to be dead, walking to the forest and facing Voldemort, meeting Dumbledore at the King's cross and finally, watching Voldemort fall down, dead.
As he recalled the death of Voldemort and talking to Dumbledore's portrait, he felt a bit better. Turning, he saw Hermione crying silently in Ron's chest while Ron gave her a comforting hug and silent tears trickled down his own face. Harry felt alone, as he ever felt while watching his best friends close together, lost in themselves. But then he rushed towards them and put his arms around them and started crying himself. The deadly burden in his stomach seemed to lessen somehow.
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Harry didn't know how much time they spent near the lake, but when they returned to the school, it was nearly the lunchtime. Everybody was gathered in the great hall and looked cheerful except for them whose relatives or friends had died in the war. Harry sat at the Gryffindor table with the other two and the three of them began eating against their minds. Mrs. Weasley and Mr. Weasley were sitting there along with Bill, Charlie, Percy, George and Ginny, who all looked like they have cried all through the night. Harry couldn't look at Ginny, who was eating as though she was forced to.
"Look, everyone'" Harry tried to speak and everyone was startled.
"I'I'm really, really sorry'I'" but the rest of his words were drowned by several voices.
"Oh, Harry!"
"Harry, dear,"
"Harry, don't be silly."
"No one is blaming you, mate."
"Yeah, you're just'"
"Harry," Mr. Weasley was speechless.
There were so many comforting words that Harry realized that the weight in his stomach had completely gone. He felt very much better. Hermione was looking at him anxiously; he tried to smile to her and was happy to see that he succeeded.
She smiled back rather weakly and they continued their lunch grudgingly.
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