Written Update: April 29

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Rajeshwari and Jalpa are pacing in living room waiting for other bhabhis to come. They all 3 come from their rooms and sit down on stairs. Rajeshwari asked if bhais are impressed with their cooking and behaved softly. They all disagree saying all brothers r same. All they know is how to say no. Not only they didn't eat the food but gave a warning again to tell the truth by tomorrow. Parul asks what will they do now. Alpa says we have to make fool of Mohan and Bhakti again. Manjula says for now we have stay up and pray to show how much we care bout that budhiya. Parul gets upset saying do we really have to stay up all night. Alpa says we have to pretend that. Parul asks how, and Manjula takes out a tape recorder and they all get happy and start singing prayers. They sit in front of God, and start playing the tape. Parul says that she has put soft drink instead of water in kalash. She removes flowers from plate and there is khakhra in there. They all get happy and eating throughout.
Bhakti is shown preparing food. Mohan asks what is she cooking. Bhakti says that she made lemon juice and khichdi for ma. Mohan says I know you care for my ma a lot but she is sleeping right now. Bhakti says that she didn't eat before and when she wakes up she will eat if there is sumthing in front of her.She tells Mohan she will go and give the food to them. She walks upto bhabhis and Jalpa sees her and gets up, so does Parul. Bhakti is finding it weird that both are up then how come the voice is still loud. Other 3 bhabhis start singing and Alpa hints Rajeshwari to turn off the player. When the player gets turned off, They all get quiet and approach Bhakti. They tell her that since ma is not well, they don't like it and decided to stay up all night and sing prayers for ma to get well soon. They ask Bhakti what is she doing up so late. Bhakti mentions she brought food for ma so when she wakes up, she will have sumthing to eat.
Rajeshwari takes the plate and container and Jalpa takes the juice and says they will give it. Rajeshwari and Jalpa go and knock on ma's door. Ketan and Gautam walk out and ask what are they here for. Rajeshwari says that she made khichdi for ma and Jalpa says she made lemon juice and they brought it. Ketan says it's good they made food. They look at the plate and ask if they made it at home then why did they bring it in container and why are they not using their home plates. Gautam says that these are Mohan's house vessel or did she put her vessels at Mohan like she did with jewelry. Rajeshwari gets nerveous saying that they are Bhakti's. Bhakti brought kheer in it once and forgot to take it back. Brothers get mad saying that it's good they cared but they forgot that ma is sleeping and close the door on them. Rajeshwari goes back to living room and tells Bhakti that brothers said that ma is sleeping now and not to worry because ma ate before she went to sleep. Bhakti is sad and leaves.
Alpa makes a small circle with rest and says now our jaagran is finish and we can sleep. Parul says how can we sleep here, what if sum1 walks in. Alpa says it's middle of the night. Who will wake up and come down here. Manjula says that each bhabhi will take turn to stay up and see no1 is coming in for an hour. Since Rajeshwari is they youngest, she has to b the 1st one to be on the watch. The rest goes to sleep and the tape is being played. Rajeshwari paces around and tries hard not to sleep. She thinks no1 is even awake and still she has to stay up. Bhais are shown awake. Rajeshwari decides to eat since there isn't much she can do.. She is eating and sees that all bhais are coming downstairs. She quickly turns off the tape player and starts singing real loud. Manjula and Alpa wakes up and wakes the other two and start singing along. Bhais sees them and goes to ma's room. Mohan and Bhakti come in the morning with diya. Mohan wakes bhabhis and Manjula says that they were praying all night, they just went to sleep. Mohan says that he came to meet ma. Bhabhis go along with him and they go in ma's room but there is no1 there. Everyone is shocked at where ma can be.
Precap: Mohan is screaming for ma's name in the house. Bhais walk downstairs and ask what is the matter. Mohan says that they cannot find ma anywhere and everyone is scared.
Edited by Sapno_ki_rani - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks so much yaar...your updates are too good..thanks
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thanks for the update
story becoming interesting day by day & taking a U turn on bhabhis

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