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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi frnds
it had been a delay in posting, updated Chap 2

CHAPTER TWO

Avdesh with his frnds were wating near the NGDC Girls College. Bhaiyaji aap ko nahi lagta ki bhout jaldi aageye? abhi to college khula bhi nahi hai? Chulbul doubted. Avdesh looks back at him and says he doesn't want to loose any chance to see her, and hopes that he gets courage to talk to her. Ha bhaiyaji, amjad continues, aajse pariksha chalo ho rahi hai pata nahi college kab khule ? But Avdesh was in no mood to listen to them, he just kept looking at the way which leads to the college entrance. Avdesh was thinking, I had been waiting for such a long time to come here to talk to her and to tell her that how much he loved her. Now they are saying to go back it's impossible. If required I will wait for the whole day to have glimpse for her, but I am not going back that for sure. Avdesh had decided that today he will tell Arpita what he really feels for her. After waiting for two hour, he saw her coming towards the college gate, as he started to walk towards her she was joined by her others friends and Avdesh just stood their watching her go inside the college. Avdesh frnds started teasing him, that after so such days he had just not found the courage to speak to her.

Avdesh, watched Arpita walk inside the college, remembering the first time he met her, six months back when he came to Lallanpur, after that he visited Lallanpur several times for day or two but was unable to tell her what he truly felt for her. But he had decided this time he has to find a way to speak to Arpita.

While waking towards the examination room Aprita felt relieved as she saw Avdesh at the college gate and decided that she won't miss this chance to meet Avdesh and let him know that how she loved her. After her exam got over she hurriedly walks towards the college hoping to see Avdesh, but she moved towards Avdesh she hold back a voice calling her. "Aprita beta paper kaisa tha? Chalu sath hi ghar chalet hai." As her mama called she was unable to say no and once again couldn't meet Avdesh. Even Avdesh was disappointed.

Everyday when Arpita had her exam Avdesh used to come to the college but never tired to go near her has her mama used to be with her .Today was the last day of her exam, and Avdesh was waiting for her to come out of the college, as today she was alone no mama with her. Arpita searched for Avdesh but couldn't found him so was walking sadly with Manjari, when Rajan arrived and started misbehaving to her. Both the girls tried to avoid him but was of no use. While trying to avoid Rajan, Arptia lost her balance and fell hurting herself and as Rajan came near to her, he was taken back by a powerful punch. Avdesh was furious when he saw Arpita hurt due to Rajan. Avdesh was very angry and wouldn't stop hitting Rajan. Rajan was hurt badly. When Avdesh was going to hit Rajan again Arpita came in between and stopped Avdesh in further hitting him. Avdesh was very angry with Arpita and leaves from their. Manjari for a moment couldn't believe what just happened. "Apri kya kiya tune???? Tu jante bhihe ki who kaun tha!!!!! BHAIYAJI", Manjari stressed on every word. But Arpita was in other thoughts, she kenw she not only missed a chance of meeting Avdesh, but also made him angry.

Avdesh was very angry, he couldn't believe that any one ever oppose him, and that to Aprita how she can stop me, for the guy who was misbehaving with her. With all the thoughts, has he entered haweli, he saw Dev and his mother were waiting for him. " Ye kya haal bana rakha hai , phir se jagada kar ke arehe ho, esiliye main yeha ana nahi chati" His mother not very happy to see him in this condition, he just said sorry and walked towards his room. Dev followed him, again asked him if anything is wrong or is their something in which he want his help? But Avdesh didn't reply has he been very upset.

Next day, when Avdesh was going out Dev also accompanied him; he was a bit worried about him for the last night. Dev had heard about the college incident, he knew that Avdesh is very frustrated. Avdesh got a call from Amjad, and he turned his car towards the temple. After reaching the temple ground Avdesh hurriedly walked towards the steps followed with Dev, chulbul Amjad and Phelwan. Dev unable to understand the situation kept asking Avdesh wats going on, Avdesh hardly replied him, and now has he is walking towards the temple he had sensed trouble.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: chatterbox

hi mukta how r u dear


yaar my prb is ffs confuse me so i dont read them// u can ask others also

keep it up i just read a bit


U has been here for a long. I am new and also not regular. Moreover I joined u all even show was going to end. Just think how confused I am??

I am just asking a fovour from u to read for me?

With u I had a lovely chat ealier when the show was on.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey mukta.. reason i dont read ffs as whole plot gets confusing for me.. though i really admire the work of all writers.. i read the two parts now.. it is very good. almost as if we were watching gkd again.. atleast here avdesh is padha likha guy not anpadh


very good dear

continue..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey frnds updating the third chapter.

And asking u all to comment on this chapter, earlier two chapters were merely an introduction so not

much to comment. For further chapters I am held up bit as I want to change the story track, so waiting for ur suggestion.





CHAPTER THREE

After what happened at the college, Arpita got really tensed what will happen next. But later decided she will go and meet Avdesh. Next day she asked her mami to let her visit the temple, she thought it will be a nice excuse for going out and meet him. Her mami gave her the permission, but said she will also be joining her, Arpita lied again she had leave now has Manjari would be waiting for her and from the temple they will go to meet another friends. So unwillingly she called Manjari and asked to meet her at the temple as she knew that her mami will be visiting the temple and she should be with manjari when she arrives.

Manjari was a bit worried has she felt that Arpita was much tensed and she never called her with such a short notice. When she reached the temple Arpita was waiting for her, she took Manjari to the other side of temple and said she leave the temple soon before mami arrives. Manjari asked her to calm down "Arpi shant ho ja. Kya hua hai??? etni kya jaldi abhi mandir main aaye hai puja bhi nahi ki." Nahi Manjari mami ke aane se phele hum yaha se jana, muje Avdesh se milna hai!!!!!!" on hearing Arpita Manjari got worried. "Bhaiyaji se tuje kya kam, kal jo hu who kam nahi ta kya? Kahi who tuje dhamka to nahi raha??? Arpita was about to reply when they both stood still when they saw Avdesh standing in front of them.

Looking at Avdesh they both knew he was very angry with what had happened yesterday, although he had never misbehaved with any girl but here the situation was a bit different. Manjari was frightened and about to say, when Avdesh just walked towards Arpita. Arpita didn't knew what to say, but she weren't frightened and just look straight towards Avdesh. "us ladke kyu bachaya?, who tumhare sath baatamisi kar raha tha, aur tumne use hi jaane diya". Meanwhile Dev and other friends of Avdesh also came along. Dev walked towards Avdesh and tired to calm him down. "jane do Avdesh, dekhiye aap duno yaha se chale jaye main esai samjha duga" on looking at the girls, Dev understood that they are the same girls of college incident, he tried to clear the situation. Avdesh frnds who were standing to a distance were worried about what Avdesh was telling to her, may destroy his image in front of Arpita, also he can never tell his real feeling to her. "hamne jo kiya who sahi tha, agar aap use aur pithe to shayad who mar jata" Arpita replied, "mar jata mara to nahi??? Aaj tak lallanpur main kisi ki himmat nahi jo muje rok sake, tum ladki ho esiliye baach gaye!!!! Dev was still trying hard to calm him down, but was confused Avdesh's behavior towards this girl. Manjari also stood near Arpita, Avdesh grab her hands and hold her tightly and continued "warna koi bhi mujse es tarah ka bartav nahi karta. Tumne kes hak se muje roka????

Arpita got hurt to what Avdesh had just told tears rolled from her eyes "KOI, ham koi bhi nahi hai Avdeshji" her crying made her voice shaking but with all her inner strength she replied firmly, Dev and Manjari both stood confused what Avdesh and Arpita are talking "aur hamara kya hak hai, hamra pura hak hai apko rokne ka, kyuki PYAAR KARTE HAI AAPSE" Avdesh and everybody else was shocked to hear that, "ye kya bole rahi hai arpi??? Manjari stood besides Arpita with her eyes wide open, Avdesh always wanted to hear that, but it was unexpected to him, at that moment all his angry was gone and slowly her. "jabse pyaar ka matalab shamja hai tabse pyaar karte hai aapse, ye baat estarah nahi batana chahte the, lekin hamre pass koi dusara rasta nahi tha, aap hame pyaar kare ya nafrat hum hamesh aapse pyaar karte rahege." Avdesh stood in front of her, just lost in his thoughts, he could only hear what Arpita was saying, and her words pyaar karte hai aapse, kept echoing in his mind "hum jaarehe Avdeshji agar apko lakta hai humne lagti ke hai to hame maaf kardigiye." Arpita grabs Manjari's hand and walks away.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
wow it seems we r seeing gkd again

very good mukta
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Posted: 14 years ago
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woww
mukta di
i just real all the parts
now
love every part very much specially this one
amazing
as cb di
jaise ki KGD dobara dekh rahe ho lekin in new avtar
continue di
love u di
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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤗🤗Hi frnds 🤗🤗

I know u all waited fr the updated.
Soorrry fr the delay –

Just couldn't got the story moving.😕
Updating chap 4.😊

My updating is completed & edited with the help of my dear Priya. 😃
A big thanks to u. my dearest Priya this is for u

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Posted: 14 years ago
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CHAPTER FOUR

Arpita and Manjari walked away from there and Manjari still had not recovered from the shock what Arpita just said "Arpi tu kya bole rahi thi, kya tu sach main aisa schote hai?,arye who ek gunda hai? hamne job hi kaha who sab sach hai aur hame nahi lagta ko who gunde hai", Arpita was not listening to her she was in her thought about Avdesh reaction will be as they were walking towards the temple gate Arpita's mami with Manjari's mother were coming towards them.

Avdesh stood there still at same place has if he was glued and still couldn't believe what he just heard, only when chulbul came near him said, "bhaiyaji who jaa rahi hai!!!!! He came out from his thoughts, he just ran towards Arpita as if he missed one moment he might lose her and that thought almost squeezed his heart in painthen he was about to call her but her mami entering the temple and walking towards her.
Aprita tumne abhi tak puja nahi ke? Her mami asked, but latter when she noticed that she is crying and got worried, "kya hua beta roo kyu rahi ho? Manjari's mother replied "bhanji, lagta kal ye yeha se chali jayege esliye duno roo rahi hai", then moving towards Arpita, she continued, "mama-mami yeha nahi honge to kya hum to rahege, jab bhi jee kare aajana, Manjari ke papa ko bhej denege kabhi bhi aajana."Mami also agreed with her and all they went inside the temple to perform puja.

Avdesh stood there and watched Arpita going inside the temple with Manjari & her mami. "Bhaiyaji Arpitaji ne aapse jayada himmat dhikha di, aap akele main bhi kuch nahi keha paye aur who hum sab ke samne apni baat keha kar chalee gayee." Saravate said, Avdesh turned towards them only to find them with controlling their laugh, he gave them an angry look, well he was not so angry at all, but was happy to hear that she also feels the same as he do.

In all this conversation Avdesh had totally forgotten of one thing, as he turned around completely with a smile, he just noticed Dev standing right in front of him with a big question on his face. "Bhaiyaji urf Avdesh nahi 'nahi Avdeshji he said with a slight anger in his voice Dev continued kya hume batane ki krupa karegene ki yeha jo kuch abhi hu who kya tha???????" Avdesh knew that this time he had to tell Dev everything about Arpita.

Meanwhile at Saraswati Sadan, Arpita was very sad, thinking about that happened in last two days and everything has turned out but she is leaving Lallanpur and never returning again and it hurted her most that she had made Avdesh angry and many questions were going in her mind will he now ever love her or hate her? Although she never thought of getting back love from Avdesh and still loved him, but she didn't wanted him to hate her.

At the haweli Dev had now been normal, waiting eagerly to know about him and Aprita.

Note :
(Earlier I have mentioned that this FF is totally based on GKD-AVITA and some part of my story will be same as the show. So I think all the meeting of AVITA at the beginning of show was the best shots for the first meeting of my AVITA in the FF, pls use ur imagination in further part of my story). He started to narrate Dev, how he first met Arpita, six mths ago'''''''''''''''''
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
that was very nice mukta

reviving gkd memories
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice part dear,
arpi is realy bold and brave dats gud and avi as always thinks alot.
Arpi had already confessed time for avi do it soon my Lion.
Will wait for d next part.

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