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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Cuty16

Congo dear,this was once again very nice,very goooodddd one,waise u always write so well only.
Thanks dear for your concern we all gkdians are realy heartbroken by yesterday,and i think this track will continue for little long so we all are going to suffer too for long.So in that hardship your beautiful ff realy works dear.
Bye.


hey cuty 🤗

thanks very much for reading..i am glad you like it 😳

don't worry everything will be alright in upcoming epi....😳

luv ya 🤗


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: chatterbox

hey that was nice
i do like os a nd i m so so so sorry tht i hvnt been reading ur ffs or anyones

cos everything in my head turns khichdi and i cant keep track of who is who.. i hope u understand

os is ok coz i read it at one glance and it doesnt muddle my head..

this was very cute cud imagine both avdesh and arpita this way..



hey cb di 🤗

thanks very much for taking your time and reading it 😳

i know you are busy with your work...so no worries 😳


luv ya 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: danno

hey priyaaa

this is amazing
i mean very romantic too good
i don't know waht to say
butttttttttttt awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee


hey munniiiiiiii 🤗

i am glad u like it 😳

@bold 😲 😲 😲 🤣

luv ya 🤗


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaanshen

hey priya

you have done a great job
this is really awesome


hey ashu 🤗

thanks very much for reading it 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: msmarple

Hello YogaPriya,
nice story. Much needed in such depressing times on GKD.


hey marple 🤗

thanks very much 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Sunaha6

Very good priya...u are a very good writer nd let me tel u honey, u made my day....
i loved it sooooooo much....


hey sunaha 🤗

awwww thanks very much 😳

now you made my day saying it .....but you always made my day with Mela...love to read it's Sequal or Continuation ....😳


luv ya 🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: jes_jade

Priya!!!!!!🤗🤗

My Sweetu!!!!!!
🤗🤗

That was really an awesome surprise!!😳😳

U really lightened my mood.....
Why...why can't we get such nice...& sweet scenes in the show...

Ur OS & FF are always close to my heart as I can interrelate myself with them...They are so simple yet make a huge connection!!!👏👏

Loved it!!👍🏼
👍🏼

Love ya a lots!!!
😳😳





jess 🤗 🤗

my only one jaanu 🤗 🤗

i am cloud9 now 🥳

love you lot's for your kind words 🤗

love you 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dear,as your ff titles waiting for u i am also waiting for ur next part,b'coz i love reading love stories and fictions.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys thanks for reading it...i truly appreciate it...love you all 🤗 🤗

dedicated to Jo and Cool guy...hope you both like it 😳




Waiting For You


Confession of True Love




Avdhesh POV


i was waiting for her..she used to come here at around 4 and now it's 4:15 she is 15 minutes and 25 second late."what if something happend to her,i hope everything is all right with her or she didn't go on a date or spend an evening with her boyfriend." he thought angrily.

i never saw her with any guy,maybe he doesn't love her as much as she does, ugh i don't understand what she is sees in that ugly, prick of a guy, who doesn't care about her and makes her wait everyday, but it's good for me even though she can never love me, i am happy that i could at least love her from afar.

love......yes love..even though i hardly know her or her name yet i fell for my angel..she is an angel who lightens up my life.

"She has Come," the manager told me. breaking my thoughts i looked at her..i was mesmerized and staring at her today she was wearing my favourite color blue with pink flowers on it and it suited her pretty well, smiling at my manager i went to take her order.

"What would you like, Miss?" I asked with a small smile.

"Arpita" she said looking at me shyly.

"Arpitha?"

"that's my name." wow Arpitha...that's a beautiful name..it's suit her too he blushed.

"Oh my name is Av--"before i could say her my name..someone came and hugged me.


Arpitha POV

Gosh because of Manjari and Ran Vijay i came late to Coffee Shop...i missed 15 minutes because of those love birds..i was happy that he proposed her and she accept it then he took her on a perfect date..some times i really wish i could find a guy who loves him but i know he couldn't never love me she thought,suddenly a heavenly voice broke her thoughts.

"What would you like, Miss?" he asked with a small smile and i blushed

"Arpitha" i said him my name, i don't like him calling me miss.

"Arpitha?" he said in confusing way but i loved the way how he pronounced my name from his perfect lips.

"that's my name" i said him shyly then i noticed something unfamiliar in his face, may be i was dreaming i thought he was blushing.
"Oh my name is Av--" before he could complete his name, a girl came and hugged him, i frozed and my whole body was numb.

"Omg! i missed you very much" that girl said and hugged him tightly and kissed on his cheek.

"i missed you too Shikha" he said then hugged her back and kissed her forehead.

she felt a tear spill continuously and she got suddenly from her sit then started running to exit, she was about open the door then suddenly a someone caught her hand and she was stunned to see who it was.


Avdhesh POV


When i was about to say Arpitha my name,then someone came and hugged me i was kind of surprised to see that was my sister so hugged her back then kissed her forehead.

I noticed Arpitha, she looked shocked, then i noticed she was staring at me and shikha continuously, tears were spilling from her eyes and my heart pained seeing her in this state,then she started running towards the door before she could open it ,i caught her hand.

"Arpitha were are you going?" i asked her while still holding her hand,

"Hmm my friends are waiting for me,so i have to leave see you later " Apritha said she began to walk but i caught her arm then pulled her towards me then wrapped my arms around her waist and kissed her, i thought she will pull away but she wrap her hands on my neck and she kissed back.i looked at my angel and there was so happiness in her eyes and i knew it's now or never.


Normal POV



"I love you ." He said pulling her close to him in a tight embrace as he placed his lips against hers and kissed her again.

"I love you too" she said to him and never did she think this would happen. Never did she think he would kiss her like this pulled back.

"but your girl friend " she asked him about shikha and he stared at her then laughed whole heartedly and he called shikha who came happily jumping like a deer.

"Shikha, this is my love Arpitha" he said while Arpitha blushed when he called her love,noticing her blush he and shikha laughed while Arpitha pouted.

"Love, this is my kid sister Shikha not My Girl friend" Arpitha realized that she was his sister felt embarrassed and before she could say anything to shikha hugged her and she left from there.

"Arpitha? what about your boy friend?" he asked her

"boy friend?"she wondered suddenly whom he was talking about.

"i mean you always ordered two Cup of Coffee and so i thought you are waiting for your boy friend " he spat venously word Arpitha understood.

"oh that the person I was waiting for is...YOU" he was shocked then she clasped his hand and walked out of cafe.

"The reason i came to cafe everyday was to see you" she said and pulled his collar and kissed him once again.

"i am glad to know that"he said and kissed her forehead and they sat in a bench near to the park.

"Hey" Arpitha said while resting her head on this shoulder.

"Hmmm" he wrapped his arms around her waist and laid his head on her head.

"i still don't your name" Arpitha asked while she was blushing thinking that she kissed a guy without knowing his name.

"Avdhesh" he said while looking in her eyes and there was innocence in his eyes when she saw that he was staring at continuously she blushed and hide her face in his chest.

"I Love You Avdhesh " she said then hugged him .

"Me too" he said then kissed her fore head.

She know that she finally found the person from whom she could even die and she will always love him and would wait for him to hold her till last breath.



EDITED BY PRASHUUUU⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Completed...😃

thanks for reading 😳

waiting for you views and any mistake i'm sorry....feel free comment😉

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Edited by yoga23priya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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res😲

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Edited

Okk....before u say something...the shocking emoticon was coz I didn't recieve ur PM when I reses it....😆😆

Sweetu!!!🤗🤗

It was simply Awesome!! Superb!!👏👏
Who says u r not romantic..😉

Arpi feeling jealous for Shikha...dat was really embarassing..😆😆


The whole OS was really mesmerizing & amazingly fantabulous😍⭐️⭐️








Edited by jes_jade - 14 years ago

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