How can they be in love?Part 2 on Page 5 Completed - Page 6

ok absent minded me

dont know if i commented on part two or not

but here it goes..

this is the best one a total different avdesh and what a cute love story again..

wonderful priya

sorry for the late comments honey....

Priyaaaaaaa...........dear first congratulations on such a sweet romantic and heart touching OS......
Completing the first part i desperately searched for the next part.... and now after completing the entire part i wanted it to never end...............👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

part 1 was really sweet.........bt part 2 was simply awsome.........Awi calling arpi as pari is so cute and i loved the ending when he says that it would be their daughter whom he would love other than arpi😳😳😳
awsome dear..........Lots of Hugs and kisses your way...........🤗🤗🤗🤗
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: _nandini

Awww Priya ... hugs to u for this wonderful OS 🤗

Finally got to read it😃 Its Awesome !!! Loved it and more than all i loved the nick name of Arpi 😳 U r a fabulous writer dear 👏👏 Proud of u 😃😃

Originally posted by: danno

well done priyaaaaaaa

u r gr88888888888888888888888

writer................................................................

and "pari"

kyaa naaammm hai yaar

Originally posted by: Milii

Wowwwww Priya....that's really really good 👏
He calls her 'Pari'....that's soooooo sweet 😳

Looking forward to read more OSs and FFs from you 😃

Originally posted by: chatterbox

ok absent minded me

dont know if i commented on part two or not

but here it goes..

this is the best one a total different avdesh and what a cute love story again..

wonderful priya

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

sorry for the late comments honey....

I must say... it was Wowieee

Bole toh.........

Originally posted by: Sunaha6

Priyaaaaaaa...........dear first congratulations on such a sweet romantic and heart touching OS......
Completing the first part i desperately searched for the next part.... and now after completing the entire part i wanted it to never end...............👏