OS For You I stay..Part 2 (c) on page 11 Completed - Page 8

Originally posted by: jes_jade

Awesome Priya...👏👏👏
It's so beautiful dat I just got lost in it....😍😍😍



Yaar..you really write beautifully..⭐️
& dat angel line...you are an angel with beauty & grace, you are kind & sweet, you have an angel face,you have very graceful angel wings,happiness and joy are just something that on angel can give......... is truly sweet & fabulous..😳😳



Plzz...Cont soon...🤗

Originally posted by: cupidstrike23

oh dear..even dis new part is too gud..
u know priya it actually feels very realistic.... i mean nijanga clg dayz laga undi..
sitting in class,, grp discussion abt crush esp. if u hve crush for sum1 4m ur class..,,, frnds teasing u nd link-up's for fun...ohhhh !!! cld dayz r best dayz of life yaar..
@ honestly i was taken aback to d memory lane of my inter-clg dayz,.... felt soo gud after reading dis..
thankz dear..👏👏👏

Originally posted by: -sia-

agree with swati... :) priya your this part was also good but more than that it brought back many memories n reminds me that this time i'm going to have to spend feb 14 in clg(for the first time) n i'm sure it's gonna be just like this!! roses...propasals...chocolates..confessions!!! u've described the situation exactly like it wud be... i'm loving it n Avi is so so admirabale!! amazingly written ra.... :)

lookin forward to the next part!

Originally posted by: danno

full too fataaaaakkkkkkkk(in swaati's rajeev style)

Originally posted by: Milii

Heyy Priya....u r a fantastic writer...
The concept is sooo wonderful.. 👏

I wud love to read a full length FF from u...😃

After you finish this, pleeeeeeeeeeeease think about it dear

Originally posted by: laxmi73

Loving i..Post the next part soon na....

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

wowiee Priya..
wonderfull ....
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