FF- DEEWANGEE: Ch18 'Its 8 pm on pg 55

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Sidda

@Sidda8

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Posted: 14 years ago

#281

Ramona, this update is so awesome. Where did Pappu come from and now go away? He is defintely a mayavi. Avita is together finally and thank god Avi took out the bullet. I was thinking Arpi will be stubborn all the way.

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tukun2009

@tukun2009

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Posted: 14 years ago

#282

amazing updat😊loved arpi avi scene😡pappu... hopes avi teaches him a good lesson

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Muskaan

@piyarapiyari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#283

sweetu first of all thanks for the pm and second my mindblowing writer fantastic kya likhti ho bey 👍🏼muah muahhh🤗 each one is different and unique well i don,t know about them very much bt frm the chp it seems arpi is very naughty and avi so loving chp ended on a romantic note😳 heheheheh 😆will b waiting for next my sweetu😍

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Cuty16

@Cuty16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#284

Hye ramona,
the bullet had directed its effect on avitas heart i think.

Just readed last three updates,this part was realy sweet dear and good to see the loving caring avi back nai toh i was realy scared.
Sorry for late rply dear.

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Ramona

@PristineSoul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#285

this update is dedicated to my Siddu.. love you darling..🤗

Ch- 14

Jungle All the way

Arpi quickly opened her eyes. She looked into his eyes that had only her picture in them. He looked at her lovingly. At this moment, Arpita forgot everything.. she felt only his presence around her. She felt as if time had come to halt.

"Get him, I want him at any cost.."

They were interuppted by Pappu. *Stupid Fellow.. I could have continued with their Romance*

Avi looked through the bushes. Arpi was puzzled,
"What's going on & why are they after us?"

Avi - "Dnt make a sound or else we're dead."

Arpi obeyed without further questions. He grabbed Arpi's wrist and pulled her along. Pappu's men were scattered all over. One of them was just a few meters away from AviTa. Avi immediately pushed Arpi against the tree & stood beside her. He carefully watched Pappu's men. Meanwhile, Arpi just gazed at Avi. She was taken aback by his angry, still handsome face... Gosh, she didnt know why but she felt like touching his face and kissing him. She unknowingly raised her hands but quickly them down realising what she was about to do.. Avi hadnt noticed all this as his eyes were focussed ahead.

Pappu growled- "Where did he go? "

One of his men- "I dont know Sir."

Pappu- "Oh dont tell me U dnt know. I want Avdhesh Singh Thakur as soon as possible. Go get him."

The man who was near AviTa moved closer towards the tree. Avi snaked his arm around Arpi's waist & pulled her closer to him oblivious of the distance.
Arpita couldnt resist herself & he hugged him. She felt secured in his arms. She hugged him tight & enjoyed herself. Avi was surprised by this gesture of hers but quickly hugged her back. He was very happy to see her being so frank with him. He realised that she too loved him & now very soon Avdhesh & Arpita would be one. Both of them were lost in each other that they failed to notice that they were alone. Pappu & his men had left long ago.

Arpi slowly opened her eyes & moved back. She was really embarrased.

'Geez.. Arpi..cant you control yourself? What were you doing?'

Avi smiled at her embarrasment..
"I think they've gone. Lets go."

Arpi- "Who were they and why were they after you?"

Avi- "I'll tell you later. Now lets move."

Arpi was adamant- "No. I want to know everything. What are you hiding Avdhesh?"

Avdhesh looked at her- "Trust me.. I will tell you everything.. but now.. we have to leave."

Both of them drove home in Avdhesh's car. On they way, Arpi was tensed. She knew Avi was hiding something.
"Do You Trust Me?"

Arpi- "What?"

Avi- "Do you trust me Arpita?"

Arpi was puzzled- "Yes.. Of course I trust you. Coz I.."

Avi- "Coz what??"

She didnt want him to know about her feelings, so she changed the topic.

Arpi- "I wanna go home. Mom will be waiting."

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Edited by KriYa_life - 14 years ago

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Yoga priya

@yoga23priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#286

Heyyy Cherrryyy 🤗

Loved Avita Moments 😍

Arpiii is sooo much head over heels on Avi ☺️

Stupid PP urf Pappu Prasad destroyed the sweet AviTa Moments 😡

Their hug ☺️ 🤗 ☺️ 🤗

Avi is sooo sweet and cute he is concern about Arpi 😳

love you 🤗

Edited by yoga23priya - 14 years ago

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EAREYE

@EAREYE

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Posted: 14 years ago

#287

i m first

nice update ramona

its very funnuy arpi puzzled and gone home vase luved ur update

i read the update before ur pm😆

Edited by EAREYE - 14 years ago

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Ramona

@PristineSoul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: yoga23priya
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I thought you were off line..

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Ramona

@PristineSoul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: EAREYE
i m first toofaan is first..
nice update ramona thanks..

its very funnuy arpi puzzled and gone home vase luved ur update aww.. thank you.. glad you liked it..

i read the update before ur pm😆 mujhe pata tha.. 😆