MELA: My first short FF(Avitha)-completed - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: -sia-

this part(4th) is also good... :))Tnkuuuuuu.....wen i first read abt pappu..i thought how come Avdesh already knows...then i realised it's a different story!!! i liked the best when Avi places a kiss on her forehead...how romantic!!! (hehehehehe😉😉😳)wish in the real story Avi wud let off his damn pratigyagrrrrrrrr😡.......stupid fellow..........but cant help loving him back again😉😃😳(which he's almost doing.. ;) ) n try to spend some time with Arpi(i pity her now-a-days...she's all crying!!yaaaaaaa......its really not going well...)

school essays are quite boring ra...i agree with uhhhhhhhhhh.....I used to pull my hair, trying to figure out the correct punctuations, grammer and spellings....Thanks to Ms Word Spell check...😃dats why we wudn bother writing much abt it!! but here this is different!!
well written do continue it...
here's a big hug from me for all ur hard-work n patience
awwwwww sowmya..........luved the hug.............😳






😳😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
hey sunaha i finally caught up

hehe well written

and as for manjari in the serial she is total dumbo and coward and here she is so bindaas


pappu hahaha even i was wondering abt him yeh kahan se aaya


hehe good one i really enjoyd
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
Part 4 Good too. It was lovely. 😊 Enjoyed reading it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
Heyyy Sunaha...part 4 was soooo cute...
Loved all the action, Avi's concern for Arpi, her romantic dream...😍

Serial mein to AviTa scenes dekhne ko nahi milte...so ur FF is a feast for us...

Keep it up dear 👍🏼

Will be waiting for the next one 🤗


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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
hey Sunaha... thanks for starting a fan fiction.... I lubbd the parts..
Will you pls PM me when you update next...????
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
thanks ra nenu 6 times chaduva...........hemm chapala ni theliadu ra naku.........WOW
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Sunaha6

@ swathi and priya..................😊

🤗🤗

Tnx a ton.......

welcome ra.......maku endhuku ra thanks.........friends ki thanks chapthara......hemm chapthavu swathi....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
hey sunaha.... d 4th one is more romanticwa yaar....
arpi ka toh pata nahi magar main toh poori tarah dream world mein chali gayi yaar..
too gud yaar... we wer xpecting 1 surprise magar tum toh hamein surprises pe surprises de rahi ho..
FANTABULATIOUS..!!!👍🏼 👍🏼👍🏼DREAMYLACIOUS..!!!😍😍😍 ROMANTICWA STORY..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: cupidstrike23

hey sunaha.... d 4th one is more romanticwa yaar....
arpi ka toh pata nahi magar main toh poori tarah dream world mein chali gayi yaar..
too gud yaar... we wer xpecting 1 surprise magar tum toh hamein surprises pe surprises de rahi ho..
FANTABULATIOUS..!!!👍🏼 👍🏼👍🏼DREAMYLACIOUS..!!!😍😍😍 ROMANTICWA STORY..

swathi emotions chala bhagundi ra......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: yoga23priya

swathi emotions chala bhagundi ra......



hey priya....
thanx raa... glad u liked dem..
btw at present emina ekkada stay chestundi ..???

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