MELA: My first short FF(Avitha)-completed - Page 7

Originally posted by: -sia-

wow...sunaha...u really write good yaar...chaala baa undi!!!

the third part was even more fascinating...i mean it took me into a trance world...it was like i was watching it all over!!! how i wish this cute virtual scene could turn into a real one!!!

well done!!! do keep writing n i'm awaiting the next one :))

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Originally posted by: -sia-

wow...sunaha...u really write good yaar...chaala baa undi!!!

the third part was even more fascinating...i mean it took me into a trance world...it was like i was watching it all over!!! how i wish this cute virtual scene could turn into a real one!!!

well done!!! do keep writing n i'm awaiting the next one :))

@ bold......Thanku......My english teachers will be proud of me..........😆😆😆

let me tell you a secret, all my schooling, i never used to get a spelling rite and grammer was.........phewwww.....😆😆😆

Tnx ra....

Originally posted by: prash_t

Sunaha..

mesmerizing yaar.👏..

wooooooowwww...i read it 5 times😃

want to read it more...😳😳😳

this part is wonderful.....😳😳😳

Tnx luvvvvvvvv..................😊😊.........

@ bold.......Will give all of you much more.......😃😳😉

@ swathi and priya..................😊

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Tnx a ton.......

Lovely Sunaha, nicely written. Waiting for the next one.

Hieeeeeeeeeeeee..........gals.....I am up with another update for you......I don't know how you feel exactly..........But iam loving it................

Now time for some dishum...dishummm.......Dhagad dham..daghad dham....Bahubaliiiii............Bhayaji.....😆.....Luv you avi..........😆😆😉

Happy readingggggggggggg

Part 4

The man awdesh was talking to, at the bangle store was his spy…when Chulbul wished to visit the mela, he denied first…but later hoped that HE would come too...Pappu…

Awdesh's spy bought him the good news that, Pappu was at the mela…Awdesh's prediction came true…He felt that it was the right time…

He closed his eyes and remembered his wrath for him…His eyes opened up in the thirst for revenge…awdesh and Chulbul left the spy behind and entered the crowd in search of pappu…

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Manjari and Arpitha were having great fun roaming around; watching the colorful atmosphere… suddenly someone moved forcefully hitting arpitha's shoulder with his…

Manjari—(was in full rage)"Can't you see… you blind b******* …"

He stopped and turned around…He had an evil smile on his lips, revealing his dark intentions…he licked his lips with his tongue disgustingly…He was pappu…

Pappu—"I wish I would have seen…and smirks…" He notices Arpitha and is dumbfounded...

Pappu—"what a piece of excellence…Come with me gorgeous…You will be kept like a princess…I'll love you all day and night…"

His words hurt Arpitha, and she sighs away in disgust…He holds her wrist and she tries to free herself…The struggle causes the red glass bangles in her hand to break and one of them pierces into her flesh, causing blood to flow out of her skin...she moans in pain...

He hurts her tender wrist wantedly by pressing it hard…

Manjari—"Leave her you Moran…Bloody B#@$#@#$" she holds his hand and tries to set Arpitha free from his grip...but it all goes in vain…His hold was very tight…He smiles evilly seeing her cry in pain and disgust…

Awdesh holds pappu's collar from behind (With full of anger and hatred in his eyes)—"Leaveeeeeeeeeee her"

Pappu turns around revealing the girl to awdesh…Pappu's eyes open up wide in fear…Awdesh still holding his collar looks at Arpitha crying in pain with her eyes tightly shut and notices her broken bangles; blood flowing out her veins…

His anger now knew no bounds…he punches pappu in his chest with a frightening shout…

Pappu falls down…Awdesh lifts him up with his collar and punches his face randomly…Pappu starts bleeding…his nose bone might have broken…awdesh is still holding him through his collar and gathers all his energy for the final blow…he holds his fist tight and is about to hit him…..

Arpitha—"Ahaaaaaa………."

Yelling loud, Arpitha closed her eyes not willing to see any more violence…Seeing the bitter quarrel, Arpitha is quite afraid…She feels week and faints…

Before she could fall on the ground a strong muscular hand holds her through her waist, supporting her…Her sight was blurring…But she could still see his face…His worried expression…as if nothing he wanted… nothing in the world… but only her well-being…She slowly closed her eyes… and the last word that she heard before completely losing her sense was……..

Awdesh (with a shiver in his voice)—"Arpitha"……

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Slowly opening her eyes, still feeling week, Arpitha tries to move in her bed…Seeing her slightest movement, Mom comes near her, who was sitting in the chair, praying for her…

Mom—"Arpitha…Beta…Are you o.k.…dear, I was so much worried for you…"She moves besides her giving her a hug…

Arpitha—"Mummy…I am o.k.…I am really Fine..."

She tries to remember what happened and is suddenly shocked to find herself in her room…She thought back and saw herself fainting at the mela in his hands…How come she is home…Was this all a dream….? She looked at her hand…It was properly bandaged…so It can't be a dream…then how did she reach home…Where is Manjari?

Arpitha (With a big question mark in her face)—"Mummy…How did I reach home? Where is Manjari?"

Mom—"Beta…Don't strain your self… you need rest…Go back to bed…Its 3 am in the night…Sleep dear…"

Arpitha—"B..But mummy…Plaese tell me…How….."

Mom—"You fainted at the mela and hurt yourself on your hand…Manjari bought you back…You were carried by her friend…God bless him…Manjari wanted to stay back…but I insisted her to go home…coz her parents would be worried too…enough…now rest.. We can talk everything else in the morning…"

Arpitha was a little confused…She laid down on her bed…She was thinking and made out that maybe Manjari made up the story, so that mom doesn't get to know the incidents at the mela…She was glad that Manjari handled the situation very well…Otherwise, mom would be unnecessarily worried and what if her father came to know all this…The very thought caused a shiver in her spine… But there was nothing to worry…Everything is o.k.….She calmed down…

"You were carried by her friend…God bless him"…Arpitha remembered her mom say it to her…Awdesh's picture came into her mind…His innocent face rotated before her eyes…His deeply worried and concern filled expression , when he saw her in pain, made her think about him…about the Bangle –seller……She fell asleep slowly thinking about him…

The sun rose up in the sky, signaling the moon to rest…awdesh entered her room and came closer to her…He bent forward and placed a gentle kiss on her forehead, while she was still sleeping in peace…his soothing touch caused her to wake up…she smiled at him and hugged him, for which he responded immediately, by enclosing her in his hands…

Mum—"Arpitha (She says it very caringly)…beta…"

Arpitha opens her eyes, coming out of her dream still smiling…She is shocked to see mummy…she looks around…It was a dream…

Mum—"Had a sweet dream Na…"

Arpitha smiles and tries to make up a story in her brain…But she is saved…Mummy smiles at her and walks out of the room leaving Arpitha alone again…

Arpitha thinks back about her dream…She blushes…

A thought suddenly comes in her mind…..she nods her head in a no….

Arpitha (Whispers to herself)—"no…this is not possible…I don't even know who he is…his name…whereabouts…nothing…He is just a dream…a sweet dream in my life…"

Promising herself to forget him, she gets out of her bed to prepare for the day ahead…..

Soooooooo......How did you feel it.....Please do tell me😕, your likes and comments are my energy boosters..........😉😊.

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Originally posted by: Gaurishah

Lovely Sunaha, nicely written. Waiting for the next one.

@ bold.....😊😊

hi sunaha i hvnt read the third part yet

wud do so later had been too busy yday and i came bck for few mins now

catch u later

keep it up gal

oh u put part four too

ok wud read both together first thing i m free

Originally posted by: chatterbox

hi sunaha i hvnt read the third part yet

wud do so later had been too busy yday and i came bck for few mins now

catch u later

keep it up gal

oh u put part four too

ok wud read both together first thing i m free

haiiiiii diiiiiii.....

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Take your time di....I am also going now.....got some work to complete.....

byeee

this part(4th) is also good... :)) wen i first read abt pappu..i thought how come Avdesh already knows...then i realised it's a different story!!! i liked the best when Avi places a kiss on her forehead...how romantic!!! wish in the real story Avi wud let off his damn pratigya(which he's almost doing.. ;) ) n try to spend some time with Arpi(i pity her now-a-days...she's all crying!!)

school essays are quite boring ra...i agree with u...dats why we wudn bother writing much abt it!! but here this is different!!