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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: cupidstrike23



hey i will try 2 cntinue d story...
avi : arre tum toh naraaz ho gayi...hum toh mazaak kar rahe the.
hum aapse bahut pyar karte hai arpita.(eyelock with bg)..,phir aapko khudse dur kaise jaane dete..
arpi: avdeshji.. aapne humein ek nayee zindagi di hai.
agar aap us din mandap mein nahi aate toh humne apna jaan diya hota...aur....
avi keeps his finger on her lips.."hum aisa kabhi nahi hone denge...aap toh humari zindagi hai.
phir hum apni zindagi ko kaise kucho hone dete.."

avita eyelock..bg..den avi's sis nd 4 goons cum nd interfere
avi sis: uhh..uhh..(immitates to cough )
arpi moves back nd blushes..avi with all angry luk
avi: ab kya hai???
avi sis: bhouji ko neechey bula rahe hai...shaadi k liye gehne dekhne the.
abhi shaadi k din bhauji ko aur bhi accha dikhna hai na..
waise humari bhauji hai toh sabse sundar..aur aapke pyar ne toh unke chehre pe aur bhi chamak laayi hai..nd she laughs...
toh kya hum aapki dulhaniya ko thodi der k liye aapse dur le jaaye???

avi blushes..avi's sis holds arpi hands nd walk away
but arpi keeps turning around nd luk at avi
after arpi goes away..goon gang sing song 4 avi..
"dil k armaan aasuon mein behgaye..."

avi with angry luk runs behind dem ....
i'm very bad at writing..i hope u guys like it..

omg Cupid this Was Amazin ClapClapClap ---- Avi n Gang sittin in their Normal Hang Out Area n Avdesh Keep walkin here n there all stressed n Goons Wonderin wah he is thinkin Kanooo : Arre Bhaiji App Aise Kyun Daur Rahe Hain ? savarna : hmmm Aab Bhaiji Kiske Bare Mein soch Sakte hain 😉 Bhayankar: zarooor Bhabhi ji ke Bari Mein Soch Rahe Hain 😆 All Laugh ! n Avdesh Stops n looks @ thm Sayin " ee Sab Bhakwaas Karne se aacha hai Tum log ee Socho Ke Hum Arpita Ji Se Akele Kaise Mile..." the Whole Gang Goes like " ooooooooooooooooooooooo😉😆" Pehlwan : ohhh Toh Ee Baat Apko Pareshaan Kar Raha Hai 😉 Kannoo: Bhaiya Ji Fikar Maat Kariye Aapki Behen Hai Na ! woh Hamsab Ki Madat Karegi (lost in her Thaught) *Kanooo How Dare u Flirt wid her Angry😆* Bhayankar : Hain Bhaiya Ji Ee Theeek Rahega They All Go in To Get Avi's Sis 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: chatterbox

hahaha good ones re
i m more pathetic when it comes to writing
cudnt go beyond those early lines

keep them coming


Chatter di no1 's good here , We all jst Writtin somefin 😆 u also do same
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: -Cwezy_Manoola-

omg Cupid this Was Amazin 👏👏👏 ---- Avi n Gang sittin in their Normal Hang Out Area n Avdesh Keep walkin here n there all stressed n Goons Wonderin wah he is thinkin Kanooo : Arre Bhaiji App Aise Kyun Daur Rahe Hain ? savarna : hmmm Aab Bhaiji Kiske Bare Mein soch Sakte hain 😉 Bhayankar: zarooor Bhabhi ji ke Bari Mein Soch Rahe Hain 😆 All Laugh ! n Avdesh Stops n looks @ thm Sayin " ee Sab Bhakwaas Karne se aacha hai Tum log ee Socho Ke Hum Arpita Ji Se Akele Kaise Mile..." the Whole Gang Goes like " ooooooooooooooooooooooo😉😆" Pehlwan : ohhh Toh Ee Baat Apko Pareshaan Kar Raha Hai 😉 Kannoo: Bhaiya Ji Fikar Maat Kariye Aapki Behen Hai Na ! woh Hamsab Ki Madat Karegi (lost in her Thaught) *Kanooo How Dare u Flirt wid her 😡😆* Bhayankar : Hain Bhaiya Ji Ee Theeek Rahega They All Go in To Get Avi's Sis 😆



hey manal..dats gud scene
ab tak toh 4 goons bhaiyaji aur arpi ko milaane ki koshish karte the..
aur abhi avi's sis
it wud'b gr8 if avi's sis will support der love..!!!

btw i'll try to cntinue d scene....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
cupid ma Brain is empty now 😆 continue Soon 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: cupidstrike23



hey manal..dats gud scene
ab tak toh 4 goons bhaiyaji aur arpi ko milaane ki koshish karte the..
aur abhi avi's sis
it wud'b gr8 if avi's sis will support der love..!!!

btw i'll try to cntinue d scene....




im just xpecting dat avi's sis will treat d goons (xcept kanoo) as her brother's...

sarwana nd chulbul will hold shikh'a(avi sis) hands nd bring her to place wer avi nd gang r present..
shikha:annoyed.." arre...aap logon ko kauno kaam nahi kya..
aur humein kyu aap yahan leker aaye..?

sarwana: arre behna...woh kya hai na humne tumhe yahan kucho kaam se hi bulaya tha.

shikha: abhi humse kya kaam hai aap logon ko...???

pehelwaan: arre humko nahi ...kaam toh bhaiyaji ko tha aapse
unhe tumhari maddat chahiye tha.
.kyu bhaiyaji.sahi keh rahe hai na???(luks at avi with all smiles)

shikha: bhaiyaji ko humari maddat chahiye!!!
chalo bhayaji ko apni behen ki yaad toh aa gayi..warna jabse arpi bhauji aayi hai unhe toh kisi aur ki hone ki khabar hi nahi...laughs!!!

avi: arre aisi kauno baat nahi ...tumhe pata hai na tumhare bhaiyaji tumse bahuto pyar karte hai.

shikha: pata hai..ab boliye kya baat hai?
apne humein yaha kyu bulaya??

avi: woh...woh...(avi is tonguetied nd shy to tell nd 4 goons laugh)

chulbul: arre kya bhaiyaji ..aapki shaadi hone waali hai bhauji se. aur ab bhi aap itna sharmate ho..bata dijiye na shikhaji ko ki aap bhauji se milna chahte hai
woh aapki maddat zaroor karengi...
"kyu shikhaji..hum sahi keh rahe hai na???"(kanoo luks at shikha with all smiles nd blushes)

shikha: accha...toh yeh baat hai..
aapko bhauji ki yaad satarahi hai...

avi: tum bhi na..woh toh bus humne socha ki shaadi se pehle ek dusre ko jaanna jaroori hota hai..
bas isiliye yeh log keh rahe the ki humein arpita se akele mein milna chahiye..( avi turns chaloo here nd luks at goons nd goons nod der head as disagrreing avi's wrds )

shikha: bas bhaiya..humsab jaante hai..milne ki chahat aapko hai aur ilzaam inpar dal rahe ho(shikha nd goons laugh)..
hum samjte hai aapki becheiyni ko bhaiya...
par hum koshish karenge bhauji ko laane ki...
hum kal bhauji ko leker shivji k mandir jaane ka bahaana banaate hai..aur aap wahan unse milyega
par iske badle humein koi tohfa chahiye...

avi: (all happy nd smiling) zaroor tumhe jo chahiye woh laadenge..bus tum humein arpita se milado..

shikha nd 4 gang: ooohooo...itni bechaini..
avi blushes...nd in thoughs of arpi nd der meeting in temple..


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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey manal can u continue with d temple scene...
like shikha brings arpi to temple nd she meets avi der...so on
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lemme read n thn Continue 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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arre yaar...last time avi tried to meet arpi in moti mahal ..but pappuwa😡 k kaaran unka dream toot gaya tha..😔
❤️but i hope now he'll take her to dat lover's point nd hve sum romantic moments..!!!😍❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: cupidstrike23


im just xpecting dat avi's sis will treat d goons (xcept kanoo) as her brother's...

sarwana nd chulbul will hold shikh'a(avi sis) hands nd bring her to place wer avi nd gang r present..
shikha:annoyed.." arre...aap logon ko kauno kaam nahi kya..
aur humein kyu aap yahan leker aaye..?

sarwana: arre behna...woh kya hai na humne tumhe yahan kucho kaam se hi bulaya tha.

shikha: abhi humse kya kaam hai aap logon ko...???

pehelwaan: arre humko nahi ...kaam toh bhaiyaji ko tha aapse
unhe tumhari maddat chahiye tha.
.kyu bhaiyaji.sahi keh rahe hai na???(luks at avi with all smiles)

shikha: bhaiyaji ko humari maddat chahiye!!!
chalo bhayaji ko apni behen ki yaad toh aa gayi..warna jabse arpi bhauji aayi hai unhe toh kisi aur ki hone ki khabar hi nahi...laughs!!!

avi: arre aisi kauno baat nahi ...tumhe pata hai na tumhare bhaiyaji tumse bahuto pyar karte hai.

shikha: pata hai..ab boliye kya baat hai?
apne humein yaha kyu bulaya??

avi: woh...woh...(avi is tonguetied nd shy to tell nd 4 goons laugh)

chulbul: arre kya bhaiyaji ..aapki shaadi hone waali hai bhauji se. aur ab bhi aap itna sharmate ho..bata dijiye na shikhaji ko ki aap bhauji se milna chahte hai
woh aapki maddat zaroor karengi...
"kyu shikhaji..hum sahi keh rahe hai na???"(kanoo luks at shikha with all smiles nd blushes)

shikha: accha...toh yeh baat hai..
aapko bhauji ki yaad satarahi hai...

avi: tum bhi na..woh toh bus humne socha ki shaadi se pehle ek dusre ko jaanna jaroori hota hai..
bas isiliye yeh log keh rahe the ki humein arpita se akele mein milna chahiye..( avi turns chaloo here nd luks at goons nd goons nod der head as disagrreing avi's wrds )

shikha: bas bhaiya..humsab jaante hai..milne ki chahat aapko hai aur ilzaam inpar dal rahe ho(shikha nd goons laugh)..
hum samjte hai aapki becheiyni ko bhaiya...
par hum koshish karenge bhauji ko laane ki...
hum kal bhauji ko leker shivji k mandir jaane ka bahaana banaate hai..aur aap wahan unse milyega
par iske badle humein koi tohfa chahiye...

avi: (all happy nd smiling) zaroor tumhe jo chahiye woh laadenge..bus tum humein arpita se milado..

shikha nd 4 gang: ooohooo...itni bechaini..
avi blushes...nd in thoughs of arpi nd der meeting in temple..


Haila Gal u Betta write an OS 😡 do u knw How goood u r 😲👏👏👏👏
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shikah : Arpita Bhauji Kal Taiyar Rahi Yeh Hum Shivji Ke Mandir Jayenge😃
Arpita: Shikha... Shivji Ke Mandir Kall ? Lekin Aachanak? 😕
Shikha : Hmmmm.. Woh .. woh isliye Ke Hum hamesha Shivji Ke Mandir Jate Hain aur Iss Bar Hum Ab Tak Gaye Nahin toh socha Ke Kyun Apni Nahin Bhabi Ke Saath Chalejate Hain😊
*and here comes The Kabab mein Haddi As always😡*
Bhouji : ee Saab Kha Horaha Yahan aur Kahan Jane Ka Taiyari ho raha Hain yahan?
Shikha : oh Bhouji Woh Hum itne Dino Se Shivji ke Mandir Nahin Gaye hain Toh Socha Iss Baar Arpita bhouji Ke Saath Chali Jaati Hoon😊
Paar Jab Tab Aap Haan Karenge😊
Bhouji : Yeh Toh Achi Baat hai ... Kab Jana Hai?
Shikha Woh Bhouji Kaal 😃
Bhouji : Theeke Lekhin Ee Nahin Dulhan hai, Log Kha Kaheinge ?
*Arpi Standin There Quite*
Shikkha : uh Bhouji Aap Fikar maat kariye Koi Nahin Pehchanega😊
Bhouji : Theeke Theeke *she exists*
Shikhaa(excitedly) YES !YES !YES !!!
Arpita: Aapko Kya Hogaya😕itni Khushi😆
Shikha : oh woh Baas aise Hi 😆
Arpita : 😕Oh Kay😕😆
*Nxt Morning Arpita n Shikha in Shiv Mandir*
shikha : bhouji Aap Jaye Upar Hum abhi Aathe Hain * n She Walks away*
Arpita : Lekhin ..... *Tries to Call her*
arpitaa Walks on the stairs where she notices the Mandir is full empty n She wonders how theres no1😕
n she sees a Pandit n Tries to ask him
Arpita : Pandit Ji....
Pandit : Ji Beta
Arpita : Aaj Yahan Koi Nahin ... Aisa Kyun 😕
*Pandit Ji Tries to Say Avdesh empty this Place buh MY Kanoo does the Signal to scare him n He stops*
Pandit Ji : woh Bas Aise Hi Beta 😊
Arpita : ohh shukriyaa😊
*n she continues walkin *
Arpitaa Starts wid her Pooja n all Over She Feels some1's Hand on her Shoulder n she gets shocked n turns around....
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Continue Cupid 😉
n if u Cant thn lemme knw 😉
Buh Hope u Do 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: cupidstrike23

arre yaar...last time avi tried to meet arpi in moti mahal ..but pappuwa😡 k kaaran unka dream toot gaya tha..😔
❤️but i hope now he'll take her to dat lover's point nd hve sum romantic moments..!!!😍❤️

We'll Fullfill our Own Dreams 🤣

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