:.Boring Weekend.:LetsHaveSomeAviTaFun;]-UPDpg1

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Hola Friends 🤗

Argh Im sure Im not the Onli 1 whos Bored Widout AviTa n the Kraazzy 4🥱

Argh Why Cant They Show This Show Everyday of the Week😡😆 (hahaha look @ me 😆is it a Halwa or Wat😆)

Kay So To Kill Our Boredom, Lets Play a game😉

Why Not Lets write a Short AviTa or AviTa + Kraazy 4 scene WE WANNA SEE😉
it can Either be a Funny😆, romantic😍 or a Heart Touching Scene😍
the Nxt Person can Continue the Scene if They Want buh if not, u can write ur own Scene😉
Guys it Would be gr8 if u write a Proper Scene😳 it Will be Fun reading 😉
So My Crazy Writters 🤪lets start😆😳
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Story So Far By All AviTians 🤗
Avdesh is searching for Arpita & enters her room to see her but she is not there...He is about to go when he hears something & turns behind.........Arpita comes out after having a shower & drying her hair with towel(actually I am crazy over that scene so again want it😆)

Arpi looks beautiful in wet hairs & Avi gives her romantic look & have eye locks....He comes towards her & gently tries to remove the hairs from her face....😍

Then someone enters the room....
Angry
Some1 Enters The Room n its Avi's Sista 'oh Sorry ... Woh Bhouji Ne Beja Mujhe Ba..Bhabi Ko Lane.. Im Really Sorry '
Avi n Arpi r All Shy n Avi Sis says 'Waise Apko Nahin Lagta ke PEhle Kamra Lock Kar deni Chaiye 😉 " n Avi runns Afta her n Arpi is Standin there Blushin☺️
he comes back again and locks the door this time


he comes slowly smiling blushing

raises arpi chin with his finger and
Avi Raise Arpis Chin *AviTa Eye Lock* ' Choriye .. Koi aajaye Ga☺️' Says Arpi Blushin ' Ane Do 😉 ' Says Avi in a Naughty Way ..... ' Agar Bhoiji Agaye Toh? ' Says Arpi ... ' Aane do... Aap Hamari Biwi Hain 😉 ' says Avi ... 'BHOUJI ' Fakes Arpi n Avi Gets Scared n Turns Around sees No1 n Arpi Laughs n Tries to Run Away Buh Our Munda Pulls Her Towards him 😉 *AviTa Eye Lock*
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Sister: Hmm.....toh humare bhaiyya ji ko sarmana bhi aata hai...
Avi: Nahi..aisi kauno baat nahi hai...
Sis: Haan haan..tabhi aapka chehra laal hui gawaa hai...
Avi(all the more red): Tum bhi na...kachu bhi bolti ho...(& leaves)

Again he is looking for Arpi but encounters Kanpooriya...

Kanoo: Toh Bhaiyya ji kise dhoond rahe ho????
Avi; Kisi ko toh nahi....
K: Hmm...Bhauji ko na....
Avi again blushes but controls & stares at him..

K: Ab gussa kai ho rahe ho...Bhauji ko humne chat(terrace) par jaate dekha hai..
AVI: Aisi koi baat nahi hai..chalo jao apna kaam karo..

Kanpooriya leaves...Avi looks here & there to see if someone is watching or not & goes to terrace..

Avi Rushes to Terrace n starts Lookin for aRpi n finally sees Her😍
Arpi is Lookin Out , Where Avi is Walkin Towards her Slowly *Avita BG muzic* he Comes closer to Arpi n Holds her waist wid Passion n arpi is Shocked buh she knws its Avi n She is All Blushin☺️
Arpi : aa.. Aap Yahan ?
Avi place her Finger on her mouth Shhhhsshhhh and stares @her☺️
Avi : bhouji Ko Bhi Phirse Shadi Karwane Ki Pari Hai aur Hame Saath Rehne Bhi Nahin Deti
Arpi is All Laughin 😆
Arpi : Aapse Intezaar bhi nahin Hota
Avi : Kaise Kare Intezaar 😡 itne Mushkil se Mille Hai 😳
Arpi is All Blushin n hugs Avi😍
Avi hugs Arpi....& then he breaks the hug & looks her in the eyes & then lips...& tries to come close to her....close..
But Arpi blushes & tries to run..☺️
Avdesh holds her hand & pulls her back....
☺️
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Avi : Pehle Toh Apne Hume Pagal Kardiya ☺️aur Aab Humse Door Jate Rehte Ho
Ek din Itni Door Chale jayenge Tab Apko Pata Hoga '
Arpi holds His Mouth says "Bas Abb Aur Nahin 😲Phir Kabhi Door Jane Ki Baat Kiya Toh Hum aapse Naraz Hojayenge😭
Avi : Itna Pyaar Karte ho ap humse ...
Arpi : Apne Jaan Se Bhi Zyada
AviTa Eye Lock ☺️
Avi then kisses her forehead...😍☺️
& says "Hum bhi ap se bahut pyaar karte hain...aap k bina ek pal bhi nahi soch sakte....."☺️

[Their BG music]
in the mean Time the Kraazy 4 Arrives n Laughs
AviTa is All Shy n Looks Here n there 😆
Kanooo😳😳😳 : Bhabi Ji Aap Sirf Bhaiya Ji Se Baat Karienge ! hum Bhi Apke Dewar hain! aur Hum Ne Bhi Toh Itna Papar Bele Te Ap Dono Ko Saath Lane Ke Liye😆 (The Whole Gang Agrees)
Arpi is All Shy n Runs Away n Avi Tries to stop her buh She Runs Away
n The Kraazy 4 : Dost Dost Na Raha pyaar Pyaar na raha😆
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Arpi....chod dijiye.koi dekh lega.
avi....jhindagi bar sath deney ka vachan diya.ab kaisey chod dey
arpi with great luv filed emotin in her eyes..nd they hold hand in hand again nd those killer lools from avi. 👏Avi all Over Sudden in a Teasing Mood
Avi : waise Apki Aur Woh Papuwa Ka jodi Kamal Ki Thi 😉 Kya Lag Rahe Te 😉😆 Arpi All Annouyed : Acha Toh Yeh Baat Hai 😡 Toh Aye Kyun hume Bachane😡 (n tries to walk Away in anger) Avi Pulls her towards him : Oh oh 😉Tum Kitni Khobsoorat Lagte Ho Gusse Mein 😳 Arpi : Jaane Dijiye Hume! hum toh Papu Ke Saath Acche Lagte Na😭 😆
Arpi turns very serious, lowers her head to hide the sudden tears in her eyes. Avi is shocked and instantly puts his fingers under her chin to lift her face. Arpi closes her eyes but is unable to prevent a tear from escaping through her left eyelid. Avi watches the progress of the tear down her face, fascinated, then captures it on his fingertip and puts it in his mouth. Then uses the same fingertip to trace a line on the side of her face, from hairline down the cheek. Arpi takes a deep breath and slowly opens her eyes to reveal sadness mixed with love.
Avi:" Bahut sataay hai woh aapka haina? "At Arpi's nod, he continues:" uska aik aik cheej ka jawaab dene ka padi😡"
Arpi: "Nahin, ab aap kuch mat kariye ga....aap ka karara chaanta to uspar bijli gira hi chuka hai!"
Avi:" Aapka matlab, uski dhoti geeli ho chuki hai bhari mehfil mein....."
Both start laughing and hug each other.
All over sudden Avi Stops Laughin n Stares at Arpi And Says " Bas Yuhin Aste Rahe Aap 😳 Apke Ankhoan Mein Ansoon hum Nahin Dekh sakte😳... " Arpi Holds His Hand Tight n Says " jabtak Hum Apke Saath Hain Hum Kush Hai !! Ap Hi Hamari Kushi Hai, Apse Meri Din Shuru aur Raat Katam😳 Marjayenge Hum Agar Aap Humse Juda Huwe😭..." Avi Shuts Her Up By Holdin Her Mouth n Says " Bas Ab Judai Ki Baat Koi Nahin Karega... Kyunki Avdesh Aur Arpita ek Duje Ke Liye Bane Hain😳" Arpi is All Lost in his eyes😳 when they Hear Bhouji callin Arpita 😡😆 n Arpi Tries To Hide Avi some where😆
avi : arre tum toh naraaz ho gayi...hum toh mazaak kar rahe the.
hum aapse bahut pyar karte hai arpita.(eyelock with bg)..,phir aapko khudse dur kaise jaane dete..
arpi: avdeshji.. aapne humein ek nayee zindagi di hai.
agar aap us din mandap mein nahi aate toh humne apna jaan diya hota...aur....
avi keeps his finger on her lips.."hum aisa kabhi nahi hone denge...aap toh humari zindagi hai.
phir hum apni zindagi ko kaise kucho hone dete.."

avita eyelock..bg..den avi's sis nd 4 goons cum nd interfere
avi sis: uhh..uhh..(immitates to cough )
arpi moves back nd blushes..avi with all angry luk
avi: ab kya hai???
avi sis: bhouji ko neechey bula rahe hai...shaadi k liye gehne dekhne the.
abhi shaadi k din bhauji ko aur bhi accha dikhna hai na..
waise humari bhauji hai toh sabse sundar..aur aapke pyar ne toh unke chehre pe aur bhi chamak laayi hai..nd she laughs...
toh kya hum aapki dulhaniya ko thodi der k liye aapse dur le jaaye???

avi blushes..avi's sis holds arpi hands nd walk away
but arpi keeps turning around nd luk at avi
after arpi goes away..goon gang sing song 4 avi..
"dil k armaan aasuon mein behgaye..."

avi with angry luk runs behind dem ....

Avi n Gang sittin in their Normal Hang Out Area n Avdesh Keep walkin here n there all stressed n Goons Wonderin wah he is thinkin
Kanooo : Arre Bhaiji App Aise Kyun Daur Rahe Hain ? savarna : hmmm Aab Bhaiji Kiske Bare Mein soch Sakte hain 😉 Bhayankar: zarooor Bhabhi ji ke Bari Mein Soch Rahe Hain 😆 All Laugh ! n Avdesh Stops n looks @ thm Sayin " ee Sab Bhakwaas Karne se aacha hai Tum log ee Socho Ke Hum Arpita Ji Se Akele Kaise Mile..." the Whole Gang Goes like " ooooooooooooooooooooooo😉😆" Pehlwan : ohhh Toh Ee Baat Apko Pareshaan Kar Raha Hai 😉 Kannoo: Bhaiya Ji Fikar Maat Kariye Aapki Behen Hai Na ! woh Hamsab Ki Madat Karegi (lost in her Thaught) *Kanooo How Dare u Flirt wid her 😡😆* Bhayankar : Hain Bhaiya Ji Ee Theeek Rahega They All Go in To Get Avi's Sis 😆
sarwana nd chulbul will hold shikh'a(avi sis) hands nd bring her to place wer avi nd gang r present..
shikha:annoyed.." arre...aap logon ko kauno kaam nahi kya..
aur humein kyu aap yahan leker aaye..?

sarwana: arre behna...woh kya hai na humne tumhe yahan kucho kaam se hi bulaya tha.

shikha: abhi humse kya kaam hai aap logon ko...???

pehelwaan: arre humko nahi ...kaam toh bhaiyaji ko tha aapse
unhe tumhari maddat chahiye tha.
.kyu bhaiyaji.sahi keh rahe hai na???(luks at avi with all smiles)

shikha: bhaiyaji ko humari maddat chahiye!!!
chalo bhayaji ko apni behen ki yaad toh aa gayi..warna jabse arpi bhauji aayi hai unhe toh kisi aur ki hone ki khabar hi nahi...laughs!!!

avi: arre aisi kauno baat nahi ...tumhe pata hai na tumhare bhaiyaji tumse bahuto pyar karte hai.

shikha: pata hai..ab boliye kya baat hai?
apne humein yaha kyu bulaya??

avi: woh...woh...(avi is tonguetied nd shy to tell nd 4 goons laugh)

chulbul: arre kya bhaiyaji ..aapki shaadi hone waali hai bhauji se. aur ab bhi aap itna sharmate ho..bata dijiye na shikhaji ko ki aap bhauji se milna chahte hai
woh aapki maddat zaroor karengi...
"kyu shikhaji..hum sahi keh rahe hai na???"(kanoo luks at shikha with all smiles nd blushes)

shikha: accha...toh yeh baat hai..
aapko bhauji ki yaad satarahi hai...

avi: tum bhi na..woh toh bus humne socha ki shaadi se pehle ek dusre ko jaanna jaroori hota hai..
bas isiliye yeh log keh rahe the ki humein arpita se akele mein milna chahiye..( avi turns chaloo here nd luks at goons nd goons nod der head as disagrreing avi's wrds )

shikha: bas bhaiya..humsab jaante hai..milne ki chahat aapko hai aur ilzaam inpar dal rahe ho(shikha nd goons laugh)..
hum samjte hai aapki becheiyni ko bhaiya...
par hum koshish karenge bhauji ko laane ki...
hum kal bhauji ko leker shivji k mandir jaane ka bahaana banaate hai..aur aap wahan unse milyega
par iske badle humein koi tohfa chahiye...

avi: (all happy nd smiling) zaroor tumhe jo chahiye woh laadenge..bus tum humein arpita se milado..

shikha nd 4 gang: ooohooo...itni bechaini..
avi blushes...nd in thoughs of arpi nd der meeting in temple..

shikah : Arpita Bhauji Kal Taiyar Rahi Yeh Hum Shivji Ke Mandir Jayenge😃
Arpita: Shikha... Shivji Ke Mandir Kall ? Lekin Aachanak? 😕
Shikha : Hmmmm.. Woh .. woh isliye Ke Hum hamesha Shivji Ke Mandir Jate Hain aur Iss Bar Hum Ab Tak Gaye Nahin toh socha Ke Kyun Apni Nahin Bhabi Ke Saath Chalejate Hain😊
*and here comes The Kabab mein Haddi As always😡*
Bhouji : ee Saab Kha Horaha Yahan aur Kahan Jane Ka Taiyari ho raha Hain yahan?
Shikha : oh Bhouji Woh Hum itne Dino Se Shivji ke Mandir Nahin Gaye hain Toh Socha Iss Baar Arpita bhouji Ke Saath Chali Jaati Hoon😊
Paar Jab Tab Aap Haan Karenge😊
Bhouji : Yeh Toh Achi Baat hai ... Kab Jana Hai?
Shikha Woh Bhouji Kaal 😃
Bhouji : Theeke Lekhin Ee Nahin Dulhan hai, Log Kha Kaheinge ?
*Arpi Standin There Quite*
Shikkha : uh Bhouji Aap Fikar maat kariye Koi Nahin Pehchanega😊
Bhouji : Theeke Theeke *she exists*
Shikhaa(excitedly) YES !YES !YES !!!
Arpita: Aapko Kya Hogaya😕itni Khushi😆
Shikha : oh woh Baas aise Hi 😆
Arpita : 😕Oh Kay😕😆
*Nxt Morning Arpita n Shikha in Shiv Mandir*
shikha : bhouji Aap Jaye Upar Hum abhi Aathe Hain * n She Walks away*
Arpita : Lekhin ..... *Tries to Call her*
arpitaa Walks on the stairs where she notices the Mandir is full empty n She wonders how theres no1😕
n she sees a Pandit n Tries to ask him
Arpita : Pandit Ji....
Pandit : Ji Beta
Arpita : Aaj Yahan Koi Nahin ... Aisa Kyun 😕
*Pandit Ji Tries to Say Avdesh empty this Place buh MY Kanoo does the Signal to scare him n He stops*
Pandit Ji : woh Bas Aise Hi Beta 😊
Arpita : ohh shukriyaa😊
*n she continues walkin *
Arpitaa Starts wid her Pooja n all Over She Feels some1's Hand on her Shoulder n she gets shocked n turns around....
as soon as arpi feels sum1's hands on her shoulder,she gets an idea dat it is his avi..
she slowly turns around nd is happy to see avi...(eyelock with bg)
arpi; aap...aap yahan...?

avi: haan woh hum bhagwaan ke darshan karne aaye the...aur aap dikh gayi..
humein pata nahi tha ki aap bhi yahan bhagwaan k darshan karne aarahi hai...warna hum.....(arpi interrupts)

arpi: ji nahi woh shikha ko mandir aana tha..isiliye hum unke saath aaye..
humein yahaan aane ki kya zaroorat hai...humare bhagwaan toh aap hai avdeshji...(avita eyelock with bg)..
arpi continues..." aur aap toh hamesha hamare saath hai na..."..(again eyelock nd avi is very happy to get so much respect nd love 4m arpi)

avi: humtoh hamesha tumhare saath hai . jabtak avdesh singh thakur ki saansein chalegi, tabtak woh apni arpita ki raksha karega...(arpi has tears in her tears after hearing dis)
avi cntinues.." aur hum tumse vaada karte hai ki hum hamesha tumse pyar karenge, tumhe izzat denge, aur humari zindagi mein tumhari jagah sabse upar rahegi...
aur aaj hum tumse kuch aur bhi kehna chahte hai jo bahut dinse kehna chahte hai...

arpi: ji kahiye..(arpi all xited to listen nd avi bit tensed but blushing..

avi: woh..woh... hum tumse bahut pyar karte hai...I LOVE YOU...
( WOOHHAAA...AGAIN EYELOCK..arpi tears in her eyes to see her dream cumin true...nd without wasting more time she hugs avi......even avi holds her tightly..

arpi: humbhi aapse bahut pyar karte hai avdeshji...jabse humne pyar ko samja hai tabse humne sirf aapse pyar kiya hai...
aapne humein pyar ka matlab sikhaya...aur hum aapke bina jee nahi sakte..(they both hug each other 4 long time with bg....nd den avi has sum idea..GUESS WAT..!!!

avi: arpita hum tumhe kahin le jaana chahte hai...

arpi: kahan..???
avi: aap hamare saath chaliye...hum aapko ek aisi jagah le jaana chahte hai jahan kabhi humein apna sapna tootta hua dikhayi diya..magar aaj humara sapna humare saath hai..aap chaliye humare saath..(he holds arpi's hands nd walks frward...arpi all cnfused)

avi takes her twards his car nd opens d door 4 her (as gentleman) nd tells her to sit..
arpi: magar shikha ..
avi: uski fiqar aap mat kijiye...woh aapko yahan humare liye laayi thi..( arpi all cnfused nd sits in car)
avi drives nd reaches to dat place nd arpi is shocked to see dat he brought her to lover's point( MOTI MAHAL)Smile

avi opens d door 4 her nd lets her get down d car. arpi luks at avi with smile nd avi holds her hands nd both move inside mahal...
both move around in mahal nd maybe sum romance with sum naina thag lenge song nd eyelocks......nd ofcourse he'll gve her wole guldasta...
nd yahaan bhauji nahi hai toh avi will hug her...kiss her on fore head...nd much more......

Avi Takes Arpi to the Bench n All Over Sudden Arpi becomes sad *FlashBack* ( the Creep Touchin Her everywhere🤢😡) n She is all in tears 😭 Avi sees Arpi Cryin n is Shocked n asks her : Arpitaa Aap itne Kafa kyun hai😲 aur Yeh Ansoo' Arpitaa Hugs Avdesh tight n Cry out Loud n Avdesh holds her tight too n Arpi says "Gin Ati hai Mujhe iss Jaga se😭 Uss ne Kaise Kaise Mujhe Haath Lagaya😡 😭" Avdesh All Furious n Says " Jis Insaaan Ke Wajeh Se Humari Arpita ke Ankhaon mein Ansoo😡 Uss Insaan Ko Hum Nahin Chorenge😡" Arpitaa breaks the Hugs n says " Nahin Avdehs Ji ! aab Aap Hamare Saath Hain Hum Aur Kuch Nahin Chaiye ! Lekin Uss Insaaan Se Zyaada hume Apne Aap Par Gussa Aaraha Ke Hum Uss Ghar Mein Peda Huwe 😡 jis Ghar mein Aurat Ki Koi Izzaat Nahin😡 Hamare Bhaiyon ne aur Hamare Papa ne Hame Uss insaan ke Saath Akele Kaise Beja😡..... Apko Pata Hai Avdesh Ji... Hume Kuch Gham Nahin Uss Ghar ko Chor Ke ! Uss Ghar ko jis Ghar mein beti ki koi izzaat nahin!...." Avdesh Stops her n says " Buri Bataon Ko Yaad NAhin Kiya Jata ! Ab Hum Apke Saath Hain! Arpitaa tak Ponchne se pehle USse Avdesh Ka Samna Kar hoga " Arpitaa is All in Tear n is lost in Avdesh Eyes😳 Arpitaa : Aab Baas Ab Hum Sirf Ek dusre Ke Bari Mein Baat Karenge😳*n hugs Avi*
Avi & Arpi are returning from Moti Mahal...Arpi is silent...
Avi: Aap itni shaant kyun ho gayi??
Arpi: Nahi...wo...hum soch rahe the...ki...
Avi: Aap hum se kyun darr rahi hain...bol dijiye jo bolna ho...
Arpi: Woh hume maa ki yaad aa rahi hai..hum ek baar milna chahte the..
Avi: Bas itni si baat....par agar engineer wahaan hua toh woh bewajah humse maar kha jaayega..
Arpi: Nahi abhi ghar par papa nahi hote...
Avi: Phir theek hai..

AVITA reach the home...Her mom opens the door..
Arpi & Mom get really happy....Both Avi-Arpi enter..
Chirag is as usual sitting on dining table & munching..Avi speaks to him..
Avi: Aur Pranam saale sahab
C: Aur boliye jija ji..
Avi smiles on hearing Jija ji
C: aur aapne toh bade filmy tareeke se entry maari aur humari behen ko utha le gayye...waah..hume bhi aapki tarah banana hai..kuch gyaan batayenge..
Avi smiles his half-smile, looks down and then saunters over to where C is lounging in a chair. Putting a hard hand on C's shoulder that makes him cough, Avi says:
"Aree saale sahab, ab isma koi degree thode hi liyen hai hum jo aapko gyaan baatenge....baaki, ee jaroor hai ki abhi talak humne kaune hero aeesa nahin dekha hai jiske baal aapke jitne laambe hon............woh ka hai ki, baalon ki lambaayi utni hi honu chaahi jitna ki aurat marad ka pharak boojha ja sake............."
C is listening with bated breath and his expression change from rapt attention to embarrassment to acute discomfort.
C: "Woh Jijaji...woh ...arre, yeh to aajkal ka fashion hai..."
Avi: "Faison...........yeh kaeesa faeeson........"
C: Are usko jaani dijeye aap....hero banne ke aur kuch tareeke bataayi"
Avi:" Phir wahi....aapki to lagi hai jaise recordwa par sooyiye hi atak gawi hai....." he smiles and pauses then goes on. "Asli hero apne aas paas kabhi koi atyachaar nahi hone deta.....apne se kamjor aoor ablaon ki sada raksa karta hai.....apni sakti ka istamaal hamesa nyay ke liye karta hai.................samjhe aap, saale saab.....hum to suni raha ki aapke ghar mein bhor-sanjh atyachaar hot rahe............par ab aapke rehte aur nahin hona chaahi,,,,aoor kabhi jo aapko laagi ko baat aapke samjh se baahar hai...to aap humen batana, haina?" Avi puts his hand on C's shoulder and gives him a very significant, stern look.
C nods, too scared to do anything else.
mean time in the house manjari comes to arpi house and arpi introduces manjari to avi than
manjari tells avi-meine hi aap dono ko mil waya hai agar mein woh letter aap k ghar nhi lati toh aap mandap pe kaise aate
avi-sukriya salih saheba
manjari-koi baat nhi jijaji arpi k liye kuch bhi kar sakti hun manjari got an idea than
manjari tell avi-jijaji chaliye aap ko ek cheez dikhani hai
Avi-kya salih saheba
arpi-kya dikhana hain?
manjari-chaliye toh
arpi-kahan ? (surprisingly)
manjari take Avi to arpi room
arpi got the intention of manjari and arpi tries to stop manjari
than they all enter the room
arpi stand in front of the cupboard than arpi tries to stop manjari but manjari opens the cupboard
arpi is blushing and is very shy..
avi suddenly hugs arpi without wasting anytime { manjari smiles}
then avi kisses arpi on her hand ..❤️
avi felt very special after seeing this.❤️


then avita say good-bye to arpi's mumSmile
avi says to chirag😈: saale sahib hamre amma ka khayal rakhna aur kono pareshane ho toh hamre ko telephone kerdewga....Smile
and they leave the house..
they are going back to mandir because avi's sister is waiting their for them and they can't go back together because of bhauji..

while they were in the car..

after a long silence..............Embarrassed
avi: app ka eh andaaz hame bohete pasand aegawa
arpi smiles and they have an eyelock😍
then they arrive at the mandir but avi doesnt want arpi to go away from him so he holds her hand and brings her closer to himEmbarrassed but she says: bohat deir hogaye hai bhauji hamare raah dekh rahe hunge..😔

then she starts walking away and avi is all sad ....
seeing this she couldn't stop and runs to him and hugs him tightly🤗😍{very filmy but i'll love to see them hugging like this}
avitha at the mandir, lost in each other....shikha nd the ulle khey phathey enter.... kanoo:arey sarwanawa.....ankhey bandh kar...bacha hai tu abhi.... al go🤣🤣 avitha c them nd go blushing..,.. Embarrassed
Shikha : 😆 Ok Baut Hogaye Masti Aur PYAAR (n Looks @AviTa 😉 😆 ) * AviTa All Shy n Avi Touches In Hair 😆 *
Shikha : Ab Chalein Warna Bouji Yahin Ajaye Gi 😆
Kanoo : Arre Shikha Ji Sahi Keh Rahi Hai ! Hume Chalna Chaiye Abb
(Avi Holds Arpis hand n Says : Haan Chalo Chalo Chaltein hain
*and Every1 starts Laughin 😆 *
Shikha : bhaiyaji Bhabi Humare Saath Chalegi 😆
Avi : Oh k 😔 😆
*Shikha Holds Arpis hand n Walks Away Buh Arpi Keeps Turnin Bk n looks @ Avi n Naina Tag lenge BG*
-Shika n Arpi Reachs home n While Goin in side Some1 shouts Frm Behind : Agaye Tumlog ...
*Yes its Bhouji -.- *
while arpi nd shikha r abt to enter haveli,dey listen sum1 shout 4m behind.."aagaye tumlog..."
both r scared nd slowly turn back(with sum khatarnak bg music)...
as dey both turn ,dey find bhauji in front of dem...dono nazrein neechey karlete hai...
den after a while bhauji breaks d silence..
bhauji: "toh aagaye tum log..???subha ke gaye,abhi aa rahe ho..?
mandir mein kauno bhagwaan prakat ho gaye kya..jo tum log itni der mandir ko gaye...
ya phir mandir k bahaane kahin mela dhekne gaye the dono..?..
(both r silent nd luk at eachother)..
bhauji cntinues..:"kya hua..ab dono bol kyun nahi rahe ho? (den bhauji stares at arpi nd starts her torture.).." shikha toh choti hai, magar aap is ghar ki hone waali bahu hai..
aapko is ghar ki izzat ka khayaal rakhna chahiye....

shikha: magar bhauji..(shikha tries to interrupt bhauji but bhauji shows her hands nd tells her to stop..)

bhauji: shikha,aap chup rahiye..aap kuch nahi jaanti.
aap toh choti hai ,magar inhe is baat ka khayaal rakhna chahiye tha ki jyada waqt yeh bahar ghumegi toh log tarah-tarah ki baatein karenge..
aur aap arpita, aapke ghar mein shayad aapko yeh sab baatein nahi sikhaya gaya hoga....magar is haveli mein rehna hai toh aapko is ghar ke kaayde-kanoon seekhne honge...

arpi:(she is shocked to listen dis nd stares at bhauji "bhauji aisi baat nahi hai..humare liye ab is haveli ki izzat sabse jyada maayne rakhti hai. aur hamari maa ne bhi hamein yahi seekhaya hai...

bhauji(again interrupts arpi): "pata hai hamein ki aapko aapki maa ne bahut seekh di hai..isiliye toh aap aaj is anjaan ghar mein hai,aur woh bhi shaadi k bina...( arpi all shocked nd tears in her eyes).."magar ek baat ka dhyaan dijiye..ki is ghar mein saare faisle hamesha hum karte aaye hai..aur humein yeh sab pasand nahin..aur...

here cums d hero again to do her ladylove ka hifaazat..avi listen to all torture talk of bhauji
avi:( avi interrupts bhauji ).rukiye bhauji...(nd here bhauji turns back nd all 3 luk at avi while he'z walking towards dem...)

avi: hamein maaf kar dijiye bhauji ki hum aapki baat ko kaat rahe hai..magar yahan baat hamari patni ki izzat ki hai. aur is waqt hum chup nahi rehsakte...(avi luks at arpi nd is sad to see tears in her eyes...nd den continues)..." isme arpita ki koi galti nahi bhauji. yeh toh bhagwaan ke darshan k baad hi ghar waapas aana chahti thi., magar humne inhe rok liya tha..."

bhauji is all shocked to listen dis nd stares at avi. avi is bit scared ..
bhauji: " yeh aap kya kar rahe hai...?
aapke kaaran...? magar yeh toh shikha k saath mandir gayi thi phir aap kaise..?
(all r silent nd avi is scared to answer..)..
bhauji:" babuwaji ..hum aapse kuch pooch rahe hai...humein jawaab dijiye...babuwaji.."(bhauji is all angry nd avi luks at her as he tries to talk to her, arpi interrupts him nd diz time she rescues avi..

arpi:'" woh..woh..bhauji darasal humein maa ki bahut yaad aa rahi thi..
aur isiliye hamari khushi k kaaran yeh humein hamare ghar le gaye ...( avi nd shikha all shocked to listen dis) arpi continues..:" aur wahi par hamein der ho gayi..."

bhauji:" wah..kya baat hai...ab hum kya kahen aapko..
agar maa ke bina reh nahi sakti toh unhe chodkar is anjaan jagah aane ki kya zaroorat thi aapko.."

avi: bhauji yeh inke liye anjaan ghar nahi hai abhi...ab yeh hamari patni hai aur is ghar ki bahu bhi..( arpi luks at avi with smile on her face nd tears in eyes-khushi k aasoon ..nd den avita eyelock)
avi : arpita hamari patni hai bhauji aur humne hi inko yahaan laya tha aur woh bhi sindoor bharke...(again avita eyelock nd bhauji as usual stares at dem with jealousy)
..." ab hamein maaf kar dijiye bhauji aur is baat ko yahi khatam kijiye..."
( den avi luks at arpi nd apni haathon se arpi k aasoon ponchta hai nd gestures her not to cry...nd den he holds her hand nd walks towards her room ..
nd now dey both enter arpi's room( haveli ka guest room which is arpi's room now) ...
AviTa in the Room Arpita : Shukriyaa.... *Wid Tears in her Eyes* Avdesh : Shukriyaa? Kisliye Confused Arpita: App Jante Hain Hum Kya Ke Rahe Hain
Avdesh : Dekhiye Pehle To Aap Baat Baat Pe Shukriya Kehna Chod di jiye ... Kyunke Hum hamesha Aap Ke Saath Hain Aur Hamesha Rahege !
*Arpita Smiles n says*
Arpita: itna Pyaar Karte hain Ap hum se ..?
Avdesh : Apne Jaan Se Bhi Zyada... *n They Hug*
Buh Guess who Sees Them Angry
Bhouji Angry !! *Jealousy B*tch walks Away in Anger*
*Arpita Breaks The hug n says *
Arpita : Chaliye Aab Jaiye ... isse pehle Apko Koi Yahan Dekhle
*Avdesh Put his Arm Around her n says *
Avdesh : Toh Dekhne Do ! Sasura Apni Biwi Ke Saath Uh Kha Kehte Hai Angazi mein ... ROMANCE kar Rahe hain 😉 😆
*Arpita Laughs @The Way he said Angrazi n ROMANCE*
Arpita : Chaliye Ab Jaiye * n Pushes Avi Out n Closes the door n Turns around n Laughs*
*All Over Sudden she feels some1's Hands Around Her Waist n gets Surprised*
Avdesh : Itne Jaldi Chutkara nahin milega 😉 Aur Waise Bhi Abhi Yahan koi nahin hai 😉
*n all Over Sudden Some1 Sneazes 😆 n Guess wah the Gang + Shikha Standin out side the Window watchin the scene buh Kano Had to Sneaze Angry 😆 *
as soon as kanoo sneezes ,all d 4 gang luk angryly at kanoo nd den dey hear avi's voice 4m room..
avi: " arre..kaun ???"
all 4 gang nd shikha r scared nd try to runaway but till dat time avi nd arpi cum out d room nd find dem..
avi: " tum log yahan kya kar rahe ho?"
all r scared nd try to move away 4m him..
avi: " bolte kyun nahi..?"
sarwana: " woh..bhaiyaji chulbul hamein kuch dikhana chahta tha..isiliye humein yahan lekar aaya.."
kanoo interfere...kanoo:" arre ..nahi bhaiyaji..yeh log toh bas jhoot bol rahe hai...humtoh bas.."
avi interrupts kanoo..nd calls him 2wards him..as kanoo cumes near him,avi holds his ear nd drags him closer nd tells..
avi:" aise harqat sirf tumhi kar sakte ho..kyun beta, aajkal tumhe bahut mazaak sojhraha hai...haan..?"

but here new love story starts..SHIKHA interferes..
shikha :" arre nahi bhaiyaji...inki koi galti nahi..waise humein bhauji se koi kaam tha..isiliye hum yaha aagaye..."
shikha nd kanoo luk at each other nd eyelock...den shikha continues..:" waise bhaiyaji aap in sab par kyun gussa ho rahe hai...jabki galti aap kar rahe hai.."

avi:" humne kya kiya..?
shikha:" acchaa..aap toh itne masoom ban rahe hai jaise kucho pata nahi..
aapko pata nahi ki shaadi se pehle aapko bhauji se nahi milna chahiye.."
avita blushes...nd again avi tries to groom his hair..den tells
avi:" woh..tum bhi na..hum toh bas unhe yahaan chodne aaye the..."

shikha nd 4 gang:" achaa...bas choodne aaye the...!!!!"
avita blush again...
shikha..: " waise bhauji accha laga yeh dekhkar ki aap dono ek dusre se itna pyar karte hai...aap bhaiya ko bhauji se bachaya aur phir bhaiya ne pehli baar aapke liye bhauji k saamne kuch kaha.(avita eyelock).."
kanoo: ji bahuji shikhaji bilkul sahi kehrahi hai...aapke aane se toh hamare bhaiyaji ke zindagi mein khushiyaan chaa gayi...warna toh us din moti mahal aapko pappuwa k saath dekhkar yeh toh toot gaye the.."
avita eyelock..den goons again immitate to cough..nd den shikha.."ab bas ..bhaiyaji apne kamre mein jaaiye warna hum bhauji ko bulayenge..
avi still keeps staring at arpi..so shikha tries to b notorious here nd shouts.."bhaujiiiiiii"
avi scared nd " arre shikha ..tum bhi na..tumlon ko kucho kaam nahi ...
arpita bahut thak gayi unhe sone do..chalo sab.."
goons nd shikha..:" achha.."
den all 4 goons nd avi smile at arpi nd start walking away..nd shikha holds arpi's hands nd takes her inside room.." chaliye bhauji ..hamein aapse bahut baatein karni hai.."

as shikha goes inside room nd as arpi turns back to see ,she finds avi front of her..
he goes close to her ear nd tells "I LOVE YOU" ,SMILES AT HER ND GOES OUT..
ARPI IS ALL BLUSHING ND SHIKHA ALL SMILES..


Night time n Avi+Gang on their Usual Place n Avi is All Lost in Arpis Thaughts! The Gang Dancing Around singin n All over Notice Avi is all lost n all 4 togetehr Says : BHAIYAJIIII *Buh No Response* BHAIYAJIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII *Avdesh Back To Reality* : Huh Kya Huwa ! Konu Pareshani ! Kano :eeloo ulta Chor Humko Dante😆 Avdesh : Kya Matlab ? Bayankar: iska Matlab ke app kiske Kayalo Mein LOST hai (dunno the indian Word 😆 )
Sarvanna : abbe Abb Bhabiji Ke ilawa Bhaiya Ji Kinke Khwabaon mein LOST ho sakte hai 😉
*All Laugh*
Avdesh : Bas Chup😡😆 ab... Ee ... Ab Ee Socho ke Hum Sowe Kaise!! Kyun tab tak hum unka Sota Surat Na Dekha, Hum ko Neend Kahan ane Wali hai
*The Gang goes like OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO😆*
Kano : Bas itni Si Baat 😆
bhaiyaji Hum Apki Takleef Door Kar dete hain 😉 Lekhin ee sab itna asan nahin
Avdesh : Tum Bolo Toh Sahi !!
Kano : Hum Seeda Darwaje se Andhar Nahin Ja Sakte ! Bhouji Ka kamra Bhabiji Ke Kamre Ke Bhil Kul Pass Hai ! 😕
Toh....
Avdesh : Toh .... Toh Kyaa😕
Bayankar: Toh Iska Matlab Ab Aap Bhi Apni Mashooqa ...*Avdesh Hits him on his Head* Mera Matlab Biwi Ke Pass kidki se Jayenge😆
Avdesh : KIDKI! 😲
The GANG: HAaN KIDKI !!
Avdesh: Abhe Hum Kidki Se Kaise Jaye😡 joi dekhlega toh kayega ke 'deko apne ghar mein Choro ke tara Jara raha hai ' ...
Pehlwan : Paar Bhaiyaji aab Yahi Ek Rasta hai ! Kariye Ya Phir SO JAiye 🤣
*The gang Laughs *
Avdesh : Hmmm !! Hum Unko Dekhe Bina So Toh Nahin Sakte😕 toh ... toh ! Hum Kidki Ke Se Jane Ke Liye Taiyar Hain
*The Gang Cheers*
*Avdesh + Gang Standin down 2 Balconies n r confused ! *
Avdesh : Abbe In dono mein Se Unka Kamra Kaun sa hai😲?
Kano : Aarre Bhaiya Ji AP KA GAHR HAI AUR APKO NAHIN PATA 😡😆
Yeh Wala Hai *n points on the right side*
*bayankar Being Naughty n asks Kano * Tumko Kaise Pata😉😆
*Kanoo Widout Thinkin * : Oh Woh Isliye Ke Hum Shikaa..... *n he stops n Avi loooks @ him like ^o ) * * the Gang Starts laughin 🤣 *
to be continued.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I am a very bad writer....
But will try....

Avdesh is searching for Arpita & enters her room to see her but she is not there...He is about to go when he hears something & turns behind.........Arpita comes out after having a shower & drying her hair with towel(actually I am crazy over that scene so again want it😆)

Arpi looks beautiful in wet hairs & Avi gives her romantic look & have eye locks....He comes towards her & gently tries to remove the hairs from her face....😍

Then someone enters the room....😡


Now someone continue...I know it was bad..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazin Jes😍 ----- Some1 Enters The Room n its Avi's Sista 'oh Sorry ... Woh Bhouji Ne Beja Mujhe Ba..Bhabi Ko Lane.. Im Really Sorry ' Avi n Arpi r All Shy n Avi Sis says 'Waise Apko Nahin Lagta ke PEhle Kamra Lock Kar deni Chaiye 😉 " n Avi runns Afta her n Arpi is Standin there Blushin☺️ -- hehhehe some1 continue if u want 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice game hmm if avdesh has run away then what

he comes back again and locks the door this time


he comes slowly smiling blushing

raises arpi chin with his finger and

oh man

continue 😳😳
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thnks Chatter Di ... 🤗 --- Avi Raise Arpis Chin *AviTa Eye Lock* ' Choriye .. Koi aajaye Ga☺️' Says Arpi Blushin ' Ane Do 😉 ' Says Avi in a Naughty Way ..... ' Agar Bhoiji Agaye Toh? ' Says Arpi ... ' Aane do... Aap Hamari Biwi Hain 😉 ' says Avi ... 'BHOUJI ' Fakes Arpi n Avi Gets Scared n Turns Around sees No1 n Arpi Laughs n Tries to Run Away Buh Our Munda Pulls Her Towards him 😉 *AviTa Eye Lock* ---- Continue 😆 Ayeee 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sister ki entry ho gayi...
Okk I will again write my ideas...

Sister: Hmm.....toh humare bhaiyya ji ko sarmana bhi aata hai...
Avi: Nahi..aisi kauno baat nahi hai...
Sis: Haan haan..tabhi aapka chehra laal hui gawaa hai...
Avi(all the more red): Tum bhi na...kachu bhi bolti ho...(& leaves)

Again he is looking for Arpi but encounters Kanpooriya...

Kanoo: Toh Bhaiyya ji kise dhoond rahe ho????
Avi; Kisi ko toh nahi....
K: Hmm...Bhauji ko na....
Avi again blushes but controls & stares at him..

K: Ab gussa kai ho rahe ho...Bhauji ko humne chat(terrace) par jaate dekha hai..
AVI: Aisi koi baat nahi hai..chalo jao apna kaam karo..

Kanpooriya leaves...Avi looks here & there to see if someone is watching or not & goes to terrace..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Woww Manal.........😍😍😍
Meri story alag chali gayi..😳😆
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Originally posted by: jes_jade

Sister ki entry ho gayi...
Okk I will again write my ideas...

Sister: Hmm.....toh humare bhaiyya ji ko sarmana bhi aata hai...
Avi: Nahi..aisi kauno baat nahi hai...
Sis: Haan haan..tabhi aapka chehra laal hui gawaa hai...
Avi(all the more red): Tum bhi na...kachu bhi bolti ho...(& leaves)

Again he is looking for Arpi but encounters Kanpooriya...

Kanoo: Toh Bhaiyya ji kise dhoond rahe ho????
Avi; Kisi ko toh nahi....
K: Hmm...Bhauji ko na....
Avi again blushes but controls & stares at him..

K: Ab gussa kai ho rahe ho...Bhauji ko humne chat(terrace) par jaate dekha hai..
AVI: Aisi koi baat nahi hai..chalo jao apna kaam karo..

Kanpooriya leaves...Avi looks here & there to see if someone is watching or not & goes to terrace..

Avi Rushes to Terrace n starts Lookin for aRpi n finally sees Her😍
Arpi is Lookin Out , Where Avi is Walkin Towards her Slowly *Avita BG muzic* he Comes closer to Arpi n Holds her waist wid Passion n arpi is Shocked buh she knws its Avi n She is All Blushin☺️
Arpi : aa.. Aap Yahan ?
Avi place her Finger on her mouth Shhhhsshhhh and stares @her☺️
Avi : bhouji Ko Bhi Phirse Shadi Karwane Ki Pari Hai aur Hame Saath Rehne Bhi Nahin Deti
Arpi is All Laughin 😆
Arpi : Aapse Intezaar bhi nahin Hota
Avi : Kaise Kare Intezaar 😡 itne Mushkil se Mille Hai 😳
Arpi is All Blushin n hugs Avi😍
----
ufffff *THUD* thts me Fainted😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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You fainted😆

Avi hugs Arpi....& then he breaks the hug & looks her in the eyes & then lips...& tries to come close to her....close..
But Arpi blushes & tries to run..☺️
Avdesh holds her hand & pulls her back....
☺️☺️

I am going all blushy..
☺️☺️☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jes_jade

You fainted😆

Avi hugs Arpi....& then he breaks the hug & looks her in the eyes & then lips...& tries to come close to her....close..
But Arpi blushes & tries to run..☺️
Avdesh holds her hand & pulls her back....
☺️☺️

I am going all blushy..
☺️☺️☺️

Avi : Pehle Toh Apne Hume Pagal Kardiya ☺️aur Aab Humse Door Jate Rehte Ho
Ek din Itni Door Chale jayenge Tab Apko Pata Hoga '
Arpi holds His Mouth says "Bas Abb Aur Nahin 😲Phir Kabhi Door Jane Ki Baat Kiya Toh Hum aapse Naraz Hojayenge😭
Avi : Itna Pyaar Karte ho ap humse ...
Arpi : Apne Jaan Se Bhi Zyada
AviTa Eye Lock ☺️

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