FF:Tum Ho Toh...Final Chpt updtd on Pg-34

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MR21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

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Mini..first of all sorry for being late in giving the comments...this might be the case for the next 2 months or so...

Coming to the chapter...wow u started it with hostel scene where kesar reading the letters written by gulaal...gulaal letter letting him knew abt all the feelings of the family members but not hers...his reaction after reading the letter throwing it n making room resemble like a hell is so common as his room mate even confirmed it...n ofcourse after cleaning the room he has to go back n take the letter to keep it with him...

So the engagement is done n he is trying his level best to ignore her in front of others but still noticing her each n every action...this is so kesar na...kesar is shy why with girls 😳...but this is gulaal...she can any ways patao him n she did it atlast...so she is all free bird in front of kesar...else she is the goody goody girl to family n vasant...he know how to make her happy with gifts n also they r sharing a very good relationship...he is so helpless when it come to his love for her...her treating him like a kid is the thing he never liked and also he never gave their relation a name ...he never call her as bhabhi...omg...how would have kesar felt seeing gulaal n vasant like this...but that is the truth now...how many days will he run from this...

Coming to his out burst in front of others...he always have a bad timing na...even this...first of all the topic of bhabhi when he is so restless seeing gulaal n vasant together n then all the teasing n gulaal asking him why cant he call her bhabhi n her complaint to vasant n vasant reaction to it and ofcourse the last arrow when gulaal started treating him like a child...this is it..how can he handle all these things all of a sudden...so his outburst has come in front of others...which lead vasant to think that kesar hates gulaal...for kesar this hatred is far better reason to be away from gulaal than to let every one know that he loves her...

Gulaal point of vew...this is the typical gulaal...who will not show n reveal her true feelings to kesar...who will always keep them deep inside her heart...that tear show how she needs him...ohh kesar's looks n eyes are always a mistery to her...mission patao kesar n jhansi ki rani kabhi nahi haaregi when it comes to kesar...she is happy with his friendship n she can still stay the same gulaal with him...even she know that she is not the same girl in front of vasant n family..he has become her best friend...kesar is always like this na...he has always showed that maturity in him which is beyond his age...kesar playing guitar only for her 😳...n her reaction with tears in her eyes n a hug...so she treats him like a kid only when she want to get through her feelings n emotions...kesar has made his place in her heart but she cant accept it...its very clear when she thinks abt what kesar will think seeing her in vasants arms...so she again starts him to treat him like a kid in front of others..but this time it back fired...even she dont want kesar to call her bhabhi 😳...she dont want vasant to talk between her n kesar but his words where a shock to her...she cant accept them as his eyes always said his true feelings for her...gulaal almost started being a galool in this chapter...looks like this will continue...

Wow Mini...this is amazing...the way u are giving the feelings n story from both kesar n gulaal is too good...no talli n kunal..thats great...looking forward to see a full on triangle love story between kesar, gulaal n vasant...do update soon yaar...

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

An interesting sequence of progression between GK here - what surprised me was vasant misunderstanding Kesar so grossly... But I suppose from where he can see, it might be impossible to imagine Kesar's truth.

I like the way you've woven this character link up among the trio so far Mini and Kesar and Gulaa's respective mind bloacks and hold backs are so justified in their respective plights.

I was reminded greatly of the Rock On song, Tum Ho Toh... given the character sketch especially - and its the only thing that comes to my mind as a title hence =)

Thanks for the long chapter, and hope you can update not all so much late!

JZee

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alanta

@alanta

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Mini🤗, I loved this SS...I loved it yaar,..but at the same time I am crying😭...yeh kaunsi misfortune hein...

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Gulaal is more free and is herself with Kesar, than with Vasanth...and that's the magic only ur best friend can do. I loved the whole 'Kesar ko patao mission' well done Gulaal...Oh I cant just think, what would have he gone through on seeing Gulaal and Vasanth together like that..it was really heart wrenching...I was reading all that with a heavy heart...and for the same reason I liked it dear..absolutely fantastic portrayal of Kesar emotions and POVs...

...and Mini, u are here with the most daring trio..Kesar- Gulaal -Vasanth ...hats off 👏...I am remembered of Jzee's thread and the discussion of this probable trio once again.. Go ahead 👍🏼

...and his room mate,..must be Kunal na???...was just asking,,will wait for the update😛

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: JZephyr
(from my phone - excuse formatting, or the lack thereof, and typos Mini) you are talking to me about formatting and typos😆but I miss the blue colour.That is your signature na so I got lost for a second when I suddenly saw your comment in black😛

So Vasant is standing a tall, handsome fair wall from the very introduction?! Sigh. No one, even Kesar himself being a 16 year old should have taken this "love at first sight" seriously.awww 16 such a wonderful age to be when everything is exaggerated.even a simple crush appears to be the love of your life😆But we know Kesar better than that, don't we.haan Kesar is a unique piece so if he says he fell in love then it must be true😳 I can imagine the axe that befell him hearing the word "bhabhi" for someone who'd caught his eye like glitter that was not going to become his gold after all! I know,so sad na😭I loved how you put it.

Looking forward to the updates on this story Mini - sounds interesting already. And 3 years sounds like such a reasonable and fathomable age gap for a change. haan I wanted to project them as friends. 16 and 19-not a big difference right and waise bhi he is a mature soul and she still has that bachpana so hisaab baraabar😃

Thanks you for starting a new one here *hugs*Thank you so much yaar and here you go-one badi waali jhappi from me🤗
JZee

Originally posted by: JZephyr
An interesting sequence of progression between GK here - what surprised me was vasant misunderstanding Kesar so grossly... But I suppose from where he can see, it might be impossible to imagine Kesar's truth. First of all yay for the return of blue😃Vasant's misunderstanding and his reaction to Kesar's feelings about Gulaal...I kept that part vague as I will be explaining it in the next chapter.Hopefully it will clear any doubts you have.

I like the way you've woven this character link up among the trio so far Mini and Kesar and Gulaa's respective mind bloacks and hold backs are so justified in their respective plights. thank you😳

I was reminded greatly of the Rock On song, Tum Ho Toh... given the character sketch especially - and its the only thing that comes to my mind as a title hence =)I love Rock On and all the songs.My fav is "yeh tumhari meri baatein".and I remember you have made a VM on "Tum ho toh". I was amazed at how beautiful it turned out cause I would have never thought the song would be so good on GK. I mean the lyrics are great but the beat is slightly rockish na.I am glad I was wrong😃thank you for the suggestion I will think about it.

Thanks for the long chapter, and hope you can update not all so much late!I will post the next update on monday😃

xx
JZee

Jzee,thank you so much for the constant support.It inspires me and helps me always😃

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: nneeiill
hey mini...Hi Nithya😃
interesting beginning...16 yr old kesar...hmmm too early age to fall in love...but if its kesar than may be he can..haan Kesar ki baat tho kuch alag hi hai.with him anything is possible😳
looking forward for the next update.I have posted the update.Please do read and comment.Hope you will like it😊

Thank you so much for your lovely comment.means a lot to me🤗

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: MR21
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Mini 🤗,,,me happy shappy as u started new FF Ramya🤗chalo main bhi join karti hoon dancing mein
Kesar koh toh love at first sight ho gayaa na...that too when he is 16 n when he make out that she is older than him...but still I like it...his wish to look at her n his worry after followed her n his reaction after he came to know her name...his reaction was superb...his worry to find her some how 😳 n the things he did while trying to search her 😆awww I am so happy you found his antics funny.and yep bechare ko filmy wala pehli nazar mein pyaar ho gaya😳
what a shock he got 😲..vasant n gulaal marriage fix horaha hai...n usse bhi zyaada dhuk ki baath their intro is done with the word bhabhi...yaa I know so sad na😭
gulaal thinking that vasant is good for her just like any other girl but still her eyes recognising kesar's reaction looking her with anger, shock n hurt ...how can she forget those eyes 😳I do love Neil's eyes.They are very expressive hai na😳

Lovely start mini...do update the next one soon 😍update tho kar diya bas aap ke comment ka intezaar hai😊

Ramya,thank you so much for the support and such nice comments.They always help me a lot🤗

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: enchanted23
wow reswa 😳

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Mini big hug 🤗Aditi le meri taraf se bhi ek le hi le🤗for starting a new FF...chalo one more take on GK,it's amazing na how we never seem to run out of things to write about these two'🥳never,arre mere dimaag mein tho itne saare ideas ghoomte rehte hain though sab ke sab bekaar hain.phir bhi I do think about them every time I read some romance novel or some movie or listen to some song.haan haan patha hai I am a paagal but I have company na😛

Coming to chappi I liked the start first encounter was just like it should be for any GK stories na, thoda pyar, thoda anger, thoda longing, thoda shock, thoda pagalpan aur bahut jyada surprise'..👏thank you😳

I like how he is following her oblivious of mayhem he was creating on the way,typical Kesar determined,obsessed and devoted to his cause'.😊thoda filmy tha but I did want to show his single minded determination to find her.so glad you thought the same😳

So Vasant is price charming ouch! Hope he doesn't last another chappie😆sorry to disappoint you but Vasantji tho bahut important hain yahaan but you will be glad to know that I am not planning to introduce Talli here.khush😃And naturally his eyes are talking to her and she is interpreting it correctly even though she is seeing him for the first time'ahh these two!!aankhon hi aankhon mein ishaara ho gaya😳Very nice start Mini👏'.I am looking forward to the update'😍 maine update post kar diya hai.Please do read it when you get time and comment.I am waiting eagerly to know your thoughts on it.

Aditi,thank you so much yaar for your support and entertaining but thoughtful comments.It means a lot to me😊

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent
mini 🤗 u r back with a FF yeayyy, i was waiting for this yaarKiran I am so happy that you are happy(cheesy na but chalega) 😃 very nice start yaar seems interesting, kesar fell in love at 16, woh bhi us waqt jab gulaal's marriage has been decided with vasant, oh us k dil pe kya guzri hogi when he heard about this decision haan very sad bechara Kesar😭continue soon yaar, i wanna read what happens further in their life 😃 n i wanna know what effect gulaal vl have of those pair of eyes on her life 😳Kesar ki aankhen-bechaari kahaan jaayegi bachke😆 jaldi se update kar 😃

Kiran,I have posted the update.Do read and comment when you get time.Thank you so much for the support yaar.It helps me a lot🤗

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Aditi Mehta

@enchanted23

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

reswa😊

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So you start off with Kesar hostel and letter –ab main kya bolu bolti bandh kardi meri meri theen kamjori ek saath…I just love the description of crumpled letter and then the ruckus that he creates in the room which seems to be norm and is taken as such by his roommate…ahh Kesar….

So the love at first sight lover boy cannot give up his feeling merely because she is engaged to his brother na,so what uska haq to tabhi establish ho gaya tha jab he saw her for the first time na….and that intense look and following her every move and gesture typical Kesar, so encompassed in his own world, unmindful of surroundings…..

Kesar had to relent if Gulaal is determined of getting her way no one can stop her,not even me first Kesuda…and once he throws in the towel he will go out of his way to make her happy by finding out everything and anything that pleases her and will also jalofy all her nakhras and anger as he starts that journey towards being her Kesar….

So Kesuda is surprised at her multi dimensional personality a complete on the guard Gulaal who will put on shy and sweet act to please his family members especially Vasant,Kesuda you have seen nothing yet, she will also deny and shun her feelings, desires and wants and will sacrifice yours too in the name of family togetherness…dekhte jao….

Ahh…he walked on to some intimate moment and Kesar being Kesar will definitely not take kindly to this even if he happen to accept the relationship between his Gulaal and Vasant bhai…ahh she has come that close to him that I have to put her as his Gulaal and not his borther here sigh! and after that whatever occurred was definitely unstoppable, Kesar unleashed …..Bringing only tornadoes in his wake…….

Gulaal being galool will definitely deny and shun her feelings thinking as she would all "paap" how could she even think of someone who makes her happy, who she can be herself with, who will do anything for that smile, who would always know her needs and likes when her family have already chosen her prince charming…..why will she try and understand pain of those eyes that speak volumes to her, why should she not turn away from that intense glare which only attracts her magnetically, why she shouldn't trade the path that's chosen for her, why should she listen to her heart that pulling her away from her chosen prince and pushing toward this guitar playing, sensitive, shy and reserved boy on whose music she loses all her senses and becomes completely oblivious and devour of her surrounding…why….

Mini🤗-lovely chappi yaar 👏 defines their individual characteristics so well...I am looking forward to this triangle unfolding...amazing start...please update soon😍

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: alanta
Mini🤗, I loved this SS...I loved it yaar,..but at the same time I am crying😭...yeh kaunsi misfortune hein...awww don't cry yaar.Smile please😃
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Gulaal is more free and is herself with Kesar, than with Vasanth...and that's the magic only ur best friend can do.yep Kesar has become her best friend and I am glad you liked that. I loved the whole 'Kesar ko patao mission' well done Gulaal me too. but that is how Gulaal is na.In the show too when she did that whole patao Kesar thing she was so determined and finally he had to give in😳...Oh I cant just think, what would have he gone through on seeing Gulaal and Vasanth together like that..it was really heart wrenching...I was reading all that with a heavy heart...and for the same reason I liked it dear..absolutely fantastic portrayal of Kesar emotions and POVs...me too.bechara he was just coming to terms with his feelings and tabhi laga zor ka jhatka.I am happy that you could connect to the scene emotionally😳
...and Mini, u are here with the most daring trio..Kesar- Gulaal -Vasanth ...hats off 👏...I am remembered of Jzee's thread I remember that thread and everyone was comparing him to Heathcliff and stuff.I loved that discussion.I was a silent lurker at that time but I did enjoy that discussion and actually that did strike a chord with me.I always wanted someone to write a story based on the show in which Vasant doesn't die.Then how would Kesar feel towards Gulaal?what would be their relationship.?asar of that discussion I guess. but that would be wonderful to read na.So are you upto it?😃and the discussion of this probable trio once again.. Go ahead 👍🏼
...and his room mate,..must be Kunal na???...was just asking,,will wait for the update😛Alantaji you really want me to bring in Kunal Talli and all other characters.I will if you want me to but after that my life is in your hands😆