FF- The colours in Gulaal.. ch 4 pg 4

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Rimjhim

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: MR21
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Rim 🤗...So kesar dont want to come here leaving Pb alone...gulaal is very lively...kesar already started feeling for her...thats good...kesar n poonam ba bond is very common thing na as its in the show as well...
Loved the chapter...do update soon...

Thanks alot Ramya😃...

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Rimjhim

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: minizz
res😃

Rimjhim,sorry for being so late with my comments.I am slightly busy this week isliye.maaf kar do please😭
coming on to the chapter,I loved it.loved Gulaal's attitude.The way she says"dil tho tumhara lagne hi waala hai"was too good.Kesar was also surprised na.
Kesar ka rudeness...hmmm,let's see how long it lasts😆I am so happy that you are developing the Poonam and Kesar bond.I loved the sasuma-damaad jodi in the show😊
Rewa and Gulaal awww they will become the best of friends right.loved them together and now eagerly waiting for Kesar's reaction...yep he is all mesmerised but will he show it or try to hide it.want to know.so please update soon.and if I am late again with my comments just know that I am reading everything,but not able to comment...will be back on track by next week.bye
Take care😃

Hey Mini😃...Your late with the comment and i haven't updated for so long:), its all good..

Thanks alot for liking, your comment means alot :)...

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Rimjhim

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RES! ;)

Im taking it, this is never going to be unresed😆..

How have you been man?😊

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Rimjhim

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Originally posted by: alanta
Rim🤗First of all I am happy that u are back with another dhamakedar FF...how long I've been waiting for this😳
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So Gulaal finally found him and Kesar instantly recognised her and ofcourse, why not?? she was taking his name na..and he finds her totally different from what he has expected, hope it holds good...and I loved his attitude yaar when she asked, how about London the way he replied on considering the way a woman being respected there...after all that man was too an Indian...
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Coming to her home, I agree with Aditi and Mini, Poonamba and Kesar, the perfect MIL and SIL and he is a bit confused of the sudden bonding of Rewa and Gulaal...

Kesar, wait for some more days tuje sab kuch patha chalega ki that how u get this close towards a stranger in no time, and tab tuje khud ka bhi khayaal nahin rahega😛...Rim😆...I think I should stop here or else tu muje maar dalegi...jaane se pehle, ek aur baat dear, please please update soon.😊

Alanta🤗...thank you so much for your comment, i abloutely love to read what you guys think and please you can go on forever tab bhi kam lage ga 😃...

Will try and update soon :D...

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Rimjhim

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: enchanted23
so Kesar's landed with bit of antagonism in his heart toward Gulaal and her father and of course the overhearing of conversation and the guy line maroing her in London ahm ahm!! Didn't help either.

I am glad he found someone positive and worth smiling at i.e. Poo Ba, so where does this land him now new country, new city and lots of unresolved question in his heart'..am looking forward to unraveling this guys in chapters to come'.very interesting start Rim'.good job'keep it up''''''

Thanks alot Aditi...😃

Yep loads of unresolved questions ;)...lets see what happens now😊

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Rimjhim

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: arti07
yay rims is back with another ff my only hope for chii and some paap😉

ok so now this is set in london namaste londonji and kesar has come to stay with gulaal with loads of anger and attitude huh saara london k bridge k tarah fall down ho jayega

and dont u dare sanitize ur ff this time else i m gonna kill you😡😉

bring the next chapii with mahachii😳

Gosh talk about chand chupa badal mein...Arti where were you man, i got the jist that you hurt some body part but not really sure😆...hope your better😳..

ahahaha meri chii ki queen they have only just met😆...

Abhi phir se gayab mat hoh jaana...i missed your funny comments on everything🤗

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Rimjhim

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Chapter 3

Rewa smiled, 'bohot acchi lag rahi hai gulaal, jaise bilkool change nahi hoh jaata,'..

Gulaal giggled and fiddled with the dupaata, she looked at kesar nervously, but to her suprise he was staring at her with a awe about his face...

'kesar main kaisi lag rahi hoon'...she said nervously and then held her breath waiting for his reply..

he looked away immidately, 'mujhe nahi pata, yeh ladkiyon ki cheeze'..

gulaal looked at him and then giggled, 'arrey isse toh dekho, jaise main isko pata nahi kya pooch rahi hoon, arrey kesar, yaha london mein aise dar dar ke raho ge, toh kaise chale ga, yaha ke ladke apne dil ki baat khul ke kehte hai aur tumhe dekho'...

kesra looked at her in anger, 'main yaha se nahi hoon'...

'haan toh, ab toh yahi rehne waale hoh na'..

kesar jumped off the bed in anger, 'main yaha nahi rehne waala' and he went out of the room, slamming the door behind him.

gulaal stared after him and then turned to rewa who was sitting on the bed quitely wathcing,

'kya yeh hamesha se hi aisa hi tha'

'nahi gulaal kesar aisa hamesha nahi hota, bas usse kabhi kabhi gussa aa jaata hai, aur phir sirf maa hi usse shant kar sakti hai, leki yaha' and she looked down, wnating to cry..

gulaal immidietly changed her tone of voice, 'rewa tu parshan mat hoh, main ussse le ke aati hoon' and she smilied and left.

Gulaal walked down the stairs and looked around the house but kesar was nowhere and then she saw that the backdoor was open, she slowly walked outisde and there he was sitting on the small garden swing, it was a dark but silent night, gulaal took a deep breath and walked over to him.

he looked up and the anger immidately went away from his face, she looked so serene and innocent,

'main yaha baith jaoon' she said grinning cheekily..

kesar siad nothing but moved to the end all the same, as she sat, he steadily breathed in her smell, as fresh as toothpaste..he had the urge to burt out everything he was thinking but then he thought about what she had siad to him inside, shayad mere chup rehne mein hi balayi hai he thought, abhi toh aahayai hai na mujhe koi lamba lecture dene ke liye..but to his suprise minutes passed and she said did nothing except form softly hum, kesar turned towards her suprised but she was looking up at the sky with her head abck and eyes still soflty humming, he stared at her mesmerised...and then suddenly said..

'kuch kehne ayee hoh kya, ta aisi hi...

she looked at hima nd then slowly said, 'nahi tumahre paas baithne ka dil kiya isiliya ayee..' she burst out laughing at his suprised expression, 'haan main itni pagal hoon na, ke itne andhere mein, tumhare paas baithne ayee hoon , mujhe yaha se kisi ne kidap kar liya toh tumhari galti hai ok, maa se keh dena' and she laughed at her own expression..

'main bacha loonga' kesar said without thinking, gulaal looked at him surprised, 'um mera matlab hai, pagal hoh kya yaha tumhare back garden se tumhe kidnap kaise kar sakta hai' and he said smiling...

'choro ka kya barosa, kahi se bhi chra lete hai' gulaal said smiling, 'ab tumhe kya aur manana parega, chalo na bohot thand hai'..

'haan chalo' and he stood up holding the swing for her to stand, gulaal stood nonchalantly smiling, 'hmmm not bad, manners are quite good, mera matlab hai...'

but kesar cut her across abruptly and said in a extremely fluent accent, 'and you dont half bad in that dress' and then he walked away inside, leaving gulaal stunned and staring after him.

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As kesar lay in bed, he thought about her and smiled,

'kesar'

'haan rewa'

tum abhi soye nahi'

'nahi tum bhi toh jaag rahi hoh',

'soh jao, suna nahi gulaal ne kya kaha kal woh hume mandir le ke jayegi',

'haan jaanta hoon, soh jaa' and he turned,

'kesar'

'ab kya hai rewa',

'gulaal itni bhi buri nahi hai',

kesar grinned to himself silently, 'jaanta hoon rewa'.

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alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Res.😊

Edited by alanta - 13 years ago

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minizz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Rimjhimji,kahaan gaayab ho jaati ho baar baar🤗

I loved the chapter but bahut chota tha.agli baar bada sa chapter likhna please😳

So just as I expected Kesarji hid his true feelings about Gullu's appearance and left the room.I loved their scene in the backyard and Gullu manages to bring him out of his foul modd.bechara is trying so hard to resist but Gullu ka jadooo chalne laga hai.I loved the way he gave her a compliment.now that's the attitude wala Kesar I love.and his small convo with Rewa was interesting.now I am eager to see the interactions between Gullu and Kesar.so please update soon and yaar don't be a stranger😭

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MR21

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Rim 🤗...wow kesar toh gayaa kaam se...gullu koh toh dekhtha hi rehgaya 😳...ohh he so miss his mom...kithna gussa kartha hai...wow that swing waala scene is too good...n their convo 😳...looks like gulaal ka zaadu ab kuch zyaada hi chalraha hai...loved rewa n kesar scene aswelll...

nice update yaar...do post the next chapter soon...

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