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Posted: 13 years ago
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Rimjhim,you are back with a new FF.I am so happyšŸ¤—The intro looks very interesting.looking forward to know more and hmmm I think I am going to love this KesaršŸ˜†

sorry for the late comment.I could not come on to the forum earlier😊

Take care😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: alanta

RimšŸ¤—, so happy that u started it...update soon


Thanks Alanta :)..
Will update soon😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

hey rimjhim is back šŸ¤— so glad to see u back here 😃 how have u been? n very nice start for a new story, it seems interesting, rewa n kesar r here to stay with gulaal n her baap ji, hmmm lets see how the story vl proceed further, waiting for the updates 😃


Hi KiranšŸ¤—...Hmmm im all good, just exams and things all going over my headšŸ˜†..
is your grandma better? :)...
And thanks, will update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: minizz

Rimjhim,you are back with a new FF.I am so happyšŸ¤—The intro looks very interesting.looking forward to know more and hmmm I think I am going to love this KesaršŸ˜†


sorry for the late comment.I could not come on to the forum earlier😊

Take care😊


Hi Mini😃...Thanks man, hope you guys do like it :)..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 2


Gulaal walked over to the male's toilets briskly, she stood outside waiting...suddenly a man came out, she looked at him he seemed to be in his early 30's.
'jee main um kisi ko dhoond rahi hoon'..
The man grinned at him, 'agar aap jaisi beautiful girl dhoond rahi hai, toh zaroor mujhe hi dhoond rahi hogi'..
Gulaal looked at the man disgusted..'shut up, tum kesar nahi hoh'..
kesar ko dhoond rahi hoh toh apne peeche bhi dekh lo'..suddenly a voice came form behind her, Gulaal turned and came face to face with a young man, he had a exciting and a mysterious looking face...and floppy black hair..
'K..Kesar main Gulaal' and she cursed herself for staring at his face intently..
'jaanta hoon' he said nodding, his face softened as he looked at her and then he looked at the person standing behind her,
'chale'..
'haan chalo'...
As they walked over to the car, the atmosphere was quite..Gulaal felt uncomfortable and felt the need to say something..
'toh london kaisa laga..' she said smiling at him..
'abhi dekha hi kitna hai' he said rudely, 'waise agar london mein admi aurat ki izzat waise karta hai' he said nodding his head over at where they had come from, 'phir toh london bohot hi ghatiya jagah hai'...
Gulaal looked over at him stunned, 'dekho i understand ke tumhe time lage ga, lekin bohot jald tumhe sab accha lagne lagega, jaga uss jaise ghatiya aadhmiyon se nahi banti, jagah toh yaha ki khoobsoorti aur hum jaise asli hindustaniyon se banti hai, jinke dil mein abhi bhi india hi bada hua hai and phir bohot jald tumahri maa bhi aa jayegi'..
'oh please bashan mat dho' he said..'aur maa ki toh baat hi na karna, tumahre papa aur tumhari wajah se paanba wahah akeli hai, aur hum..hum yaha dil lagane ke liye aaye hai' he said angered..
Gulaal shook her head and said nothing...he was angry but his harsh words didnt make her angry... on the contrary she felt extremely sorry for him..
'Kesar...dil toh tumhara lagne hi wala hai, whether you like it or not', she said grinning at him and he looked up at her surprised, she smiled and ran over to the car where rewa, her father and the driver was waiting..

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Kesar looked out of the car in anger, how he had left his mother only he knew, all alone without any help...why couldn't he have stayed with her, he glanced over at Gulaal and her father in anger...'kyun mujhe itna dard deh rahe hoh aap, mere ghar se cheen kar mujhe yaha iss anjaane des mein le aye'...he looked at out of the car window, it was raining heavily, it seemed like even the weather agreed with him.
'Kya soch raha hai kesar'...he looked at his sister, she was smiling and chatting away with gulaal, as though she had known her forever..
'kuch nahi rewa, mujhe akela chod de' and he went back to looking out of the window...rewa looked apologetically at gulaal and her father...they smiled back at her knowingly...

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kesar looked at the big house infront of him, he slowly walked in behind the rest of them, glancing feverishly at gulaal, who was infront of him...she was different from what he had imagined, very different...

As they knocked the frotn door and waited, rewa came and stood beside him, he looked at her and felt sorry, she was going through exact same thing he was going through, he slowly pushed his hand into hers and squeezed it..she glanced up at him greatfully..
Poonam opened the door and saw her husband and daughter, she smiled and then rushed past them...
'kab se aap ki rah dekh rahi thi main, kitni dher hoh gayi hai' and with that she enveloped, Kesra and rewa into her arms...she squeezed them close to her, 'kaise hoh aap dono, kitna lamba safar tha na, thak toh nahi gaye,' she said it all in one breath... tears slowly welling up in her eyes...
Kesar smiled, he liked her, she reminded him of his mother, the same worried face, the same motherly love...'hum theek hai' he said to her softly...
'Maa, chalo andhar chale, baaki batein baad mein kar lena,' Gulaal said smiling at her mother.
'h...haan andar chalo' she said not taking her eyes of kesar and rewa.

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as kesar sat in the room he was assigned to, he looked around, rewa's room was getting work done to it, so she was also sharing with him but she was still not back. Talking to gulaal he thought disgusted, how could someone become so friendly with someone in just a few hours. and then he thought about gulaal and her cheeky smile and what she had said, a small smile crept on his face.
suddenly the door opened and rewa and gulaal barged in...
'kesar tum abhi tak jaag rahe hoh, maine socha ki main gulaal ko apne kapre dikhati hoon, yaha london mein iske paas bohot thode hai'.
kesar nodded and looked the other way...

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As they looked at the different clothes, Gulaal stared in awe, rewa had beautiful salwar suits that she had not worn in years, she smiled and caressed them softly her eyes lighting up seeing all the different colours. rewa grinned at her, 'tumhe acche lage gulaal'...
'haan bohot sundar hai' gulaal said smiling..
'toh tum ek rak loh na'..
'nahi nahi yeh kya keh rahi hoh yeh tumhare kapre hai, main kaise'..
'arrey humare size toh thakreeban ek hi hoga, jao' and she picked up one of the several clothes on the bed and threw it at Gulaal' tum yeh try kar lo'.

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Kesar looked up from where he was sitting, she came out of the bathroom shyly smiling and looking at rewa,
'kaisi lag rahi hoon'...
kesar looked at her in awe and stayed looking.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Rim šŸ¤—...So kesar dont want to come here leaving Pb alone...gulaal is very lively...kesar already started feeling for her...thats good...kesar n poonam ba bond is very common thing na as its in the show as well...
Loved the chapter...do update soon...

Edited by MR21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
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Rimjhim,sorry for being so late with my comments.I am slightly busy this week isliye.maaf kar do please😭
coming on to the chapter,I loved it.loved Gulaal's attitude.The way she says"dil tho tumhara lagne hi waala hai"was too good.Kesar was also surprised na.
Kesar ka rudeness...hmmm,let's see how long it lastsšŸ˜†I am so happy that you are developing the Poonam and Kesar bond.I loved the sasuma-damaad jodi in the show😊
Rewa and Gulaal awww they will become the best of friends right.loved them together and now eagerly waiting for Kesar's reaction...yep he is all mesmerised but will he show it or try to hide it.want to know.so please update soon.and if I am late again with my comments just know that I am reading everything,but not able to comment...will be back on track by next week.bye
Take care😃

Edited by minizz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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RimšŸ¤—First of all I am happy that u are back with another dhamakedar FF...how long I've been waiting for this😳
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So Gulaal finally found him and Kesar instantly recognised her and ofcourse, why not?? she was taking his name na..and he finds her totally different from what he has expected, hope it holds good...and I loved his attitude yaar when she asked, how about London the way he replied on considering the way a woman being respected there...after all that man was too an Indian...
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Coming to her home, I agree with Aditi and Mini, Poonamba and Kesar, the perfect MIL and SIL and he is a bit confused of the sudden bonding of Rewa and Gulaal...

Kesar, wait for some more days tuje sab kuch patha chalega ki that how u get this close towards a stranger in no time, and tab tuje khud ka bhi khayaal nahin rahegašŸ˜›...RimšŸ˜†...I think I should stop here or else tu muje maar dalegi...jaane se pehle, ek aur baat dear, please please update soon.😊
Edited by alanta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so Kesar's landed with bit of antagonism in his heart toward Gulaal and her father and of course the overhearing of conversation and the guy line maroing her in London ahm ahm!! Didn't help either.

I am glad he found someone positive and worth smiling at i.e. Poo Ba, so where does this land him now new country, new city and lots of unresolved question in his heart…..am looking forward to unraveling this guys in chapters to come….very interesting start Rim….good job…keep it up………………

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Posted: 13 years ago
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yay rims is back with another ff my only hope for chii and some paapšŸ˜‰

ok so now this is set in london namaste londonji and kesar has come to stay with gulaal with loads of anger and attitude huh saara london k bridge k tarah fall down ho jayega

and dont u dare sanitize ur ff this time else i m gonna kill youšŸ˜”šŸ˜‰

bring the next chapii with mahachii😳

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