FF:Seducing MR.KESAR-Chapter16 updatd pg 29 - Page 7

Originally posted by: minizz

Ayushi🤗wonderful chapter yaarthanx.ab tho Gulaal gayi.ab aayega mazaa😃😃😃

You got inTwilight too😆😃bechare Kesar ko Gulaal kya kya bulaati hai,Vampire,monster,beast-that was funny ya too funny na!!.I loved how her heart is making the right choice.Her instinct is telling her that Kesar is true but her head filled with Vasant's nonsense is making her deny her heart.Let's see for how long not so long!!😳

Vasant sounds so selfish herehmmm.He sent his beautiful girlfriend to live with a rich, handsome, young guy all alone with an ulterior motive to trap him and then he dares to question "usne tumhe chua tho nahi"really now😡Gulaal,better realize soon that her boyfriend is not worth her love and trust.yar may be u didnt notice that vasant was saying her "tum ne hi zid ki thi na"

acha hua Kesar got to know.looking forward to what he will do now.Whatever it is,it will be very interesting for us to read😊plz keep reading,

Thank you for this lovely chapter my pleasure,,.Update soon.hope u like the update

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent

wow ayushi 😃, superb chapter, full of mystery 😃 thanx,thanx vampires n twilight bhi here 😃 vasy ko aakhir prob kya hai yaar,oww my vassy i m getting a negative feeling from his side n gulaal is innocent n sweet n loves vasant so much but i feel like he is using her n kesar 😲 is ki kya mystery hai, u have to w8 for morehmmm he seems to be a good person but alone too gulaal is stuck between the fight of her mind n heart, i hope her heart wins 😊 update soon yaar,i'll update soon as possibleee... cant wait to read what happens next 😃

Originally posted by: rsk16

really interesting thanx.want to know more abt this natasha .loved the way you wrote it😊😳.plz do continue sooni'll,.

Originally posted by: minizz

Ayushi,awww I too am a fan of Rahil realy??😃 and I was just making comments on Vasant's character in your story then ok i do not mind,keep going😊,not the actor so please don't feel bad.I loved Vasant's character in the show but in this story he is kind of selfish..ya little bit.that's why. but if it bothers you too muchno,no I will try not to be too mean to him.now smile please😃ok😃😃😃

I loved the chapter a lotoww thanxxx😳.Gulaal is trying every trick in the book isn't she but everything is failing😆ya its too funny

So Kesar is unaware of her true intentions or is he playing a game.and who is this Natasha...what's her story?cant tell u now!!

hmmm so many questions.Hopefully the next chapter will clear up some of them.This was good.so please update soon😃keep redng n questioning!!wil updt soon