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prachurya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Missed out on chapter 10,11 and 12

I loved how Kesar was there for her all the tym and he explained to her how beautiful life is and that she shud appreciate it and not waste it. The murder of Revji is a mystery to be sloved, looking forward to it. Aur ye Talli kahaan se aa gayi???? The story is shaping up nicely. Awaiting ur next update

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Sree

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

nice building up of the story,waiting for ur next updt

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MR21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

nice one...talli ki entry hogayee...

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snehasri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: prachurya
Missed out on chapter 10,11 and 12
I loved how Kesar was there for her all the tym and he explained to her how beautiful life is and that she shud appreciate it and not waste it. The murder of Revji is a mystery to be sloved, looking forward to it. Aur ye Talli kahaan se aa gayi???? The story is shaping up nicely. Awaiting ur next update

thank you ye talli bhi na kahi kahi gus jaati yaar i hate that too

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snehasri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

chapter13

tu khch bhi soch na mat kesar gives him the answer with irritation tone aur kuch kehanawala hota hai lekin he intruppted by a cell phone ring
and he says excuse me and he takes the phone in the hand and goes to bolcony, and he sees that
The name appear on the phone is "TALLI"

Kesar gusse me puchata hai ki ab phone kyo kiya?

Talli:Kesar vo.. my..kuch baath karna chahiti hu tumse

Ab aur kuch baaki reha gaya kya? baate karne ke liye aur muje koi dilchaspi nahi hai especially tujh se, my phone rakhta hu

Kesar, kesar phone math rakhna myne phone isliye kiya ki us din jo kuch bhi hua bahut galat hua

kesar talli ko baath poora karne se pahele hi baath karta hai ki
Tu kisi vajah se phone kiya ho my tum se bilkul baath karna nahi chata hu us din ke baad to bilkul bhi nahi,teri vajah se ghar me itna sab kuch ho gaya aur hamari itne saalo ki friendship ko bhi bhula diya

gusse me aakar phone kaat deta hai

vo apne aankhe band kar ke shanth hone ki koshish karta hai lekin usko motabha ne jo kuch bhi kaha use yaad aata hai ki " sir name VARMA ko hatane se tu bhi nahi, tera astitv hi kya hai mera bina tu kuch bhi nahi" ye sabhi baate kesar ki dil thes pahunchte hai aur vo itna krodhit ho jata hai ki
apne dono daanto ko haard se biting karte hue bolcony wall ko maarta hai

tne me peeche se

bulding ko girane ka irada hai kya?haste hue poochti hai gulaal

Kesar javab diye bina idhar udhar dekhne lagta hai

To gulaal kesar ki haath ko apne haath me lekar puchti hai ki kyakar raha hai tu?

kuch bhi to nahi, ise khahe ke apne kaath ko peeche kar deta hai

teek hai, lo tumhara chai

thanks

koi pareshani hai kya?tu apne aap ko takaleef de rahe ho

nahi vo my...meri chod tu bata tu kyo chai lekar aayi, aaram kar leti na

my to teek hu, tu apni paresahni mujhse sher karna nahi chahta vo to no problam, lekin baath ko badlo math

nahi vo business ki problem hai aur koi baath nahi

business me utar chadav hota rehata hai usme pareshaan hone ki koi jarurat nahi hai,business ke baare me jyada soch kar apna tabeeyat kyo karab kar rahe ho, koi na koi hal hoga problem ko solve karne ke liye ,
lo chai peelo isse relax feel karega

thanks gulaal, lekin apne aap me sochne lagtahai ki sorry gulaal my ne tujh se jhoot bola mujhe maaf karna, aaj is haalath me aur kasht dena nahi chata hu tujhe

kya hua ?kya soch rahe ho?chai peena, by the way koi special girlfriend hai kya?is tarah secretly baath kar rahe ho haste hue kehakar andar chali jaati hai

kesar gulaal ko aachary se dekhta rah jaata hai

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snehasri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: sauris
When ru updating

update kar diya

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minizz

@minizz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

res for comments for all the chapters I missed😃

Sneha,the story is getting interesting and I am loving the bond between Kesar and Gulaal.loved how Gulaal took care of Kesar when he was sick.and Kesar is such a sweetheart,he comforts Gulaal and makes her smile and his "ZNMD"mantra-loved it.Talli made an entry so some masala is coming up I guess😆great going .looking forward to the next update😃

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kiran_trudecent

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

nice chapis sneha 😃 aray talli idhar bhi agayi 😲 n yeh kya, mota bha kesar ko bura bhala saying kesar is so sad per gulaal vl cheer him up 😃 update soon dear 😃

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snehasri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: kiran_trudecent
nice chapis sneha 😃 aray talli idhar bhi agayi 😲 n yeh kya, mota bha kesar ko bura bhala saying kesar is so sad per gulaal vl cheer him up 😃
update soon dear 😃

kya kare vo to sanskar lakshmi thodi na hi rukne ke liye kahi pe hi ghus jaati hai

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snehasri

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Posted: 13 years ago

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CHAPTER 14

kesar gulaal ko aachary se dekhta rah jaata hai

Itne me sarayu aakar kesar ko khaane pe bulati hai, Kesar just nodded his head aur andar aakar sab ke saath baith jaata hai,Sarayu sab ko khaana parosti hai,

Mujhe na bahut jor se bhook lagi hai ise keha kar Ajay khana kha raha hota hai,

aaj na ek hi daal ban payi phir bhi bahut hi accha hai na puchti hai sarayu Ajay se

"Maybe bhook ki vajah se isa lag raha hai tumhe" isa bol ke hasne lagta hai
Tu bhi na kehake Ajay ke haath pe maarti hai,kesar aur gulaal ko dekhe bina dono apne masti karte rhae honge,

suddenly dekti hai to ajay ko bhi chup karti hai aur dekhne par

Kesar aur gulaal dono khana khane ke bina apne ek ungali ko daal me daal kar round round ghumate rehate hai aur kehne lagti hai ki

"Daal khane ke liye banate hai khelne ke liye nahi"aur kaha kho gaye hai aap dono is duniya me to aajayiye nahi to ... my kya karungi mujhe nahi pata.

Dono sorry bolte hai

Kesar khana itna bura bhi nahi hai tum kha sakte ho

Nahi, mujhe abhi khane ka man nahi hai baad me kha lunga

Gulaal atleat tum to thoda khalo tum subah se kuch bhi nahi khaya

G:nahi, mujhe bilkul bhuk nahi hai

S: my kuch bhi nahi sungi tune subha se kuch bhi nahi khaya aur behosh bhi ho gayi thi bhul gaya kya?, le ab kha sarayu apne haato me khana leke Gulaal ko khilati hai,aur Ajay aur kesar ko bhi khilane ki kehati hai.
Ajay gulaal ko khilata hai

Kesar gulaal ko khilane ke liye apna haath badhata hai aur isa dekhne lag jata hai ki" khilane ki permission hai" gulaal hichkichakar
apna sar mode leti hai

Sarayu ye dekhkar kehati hai ki tujhe khana to padega mere haath se to tu jyada nahi kha pavogi isliye isa kiya ki tu mana na kar sako nahi to vo jabardasti khilayega soch le

G:nahi,ye kehakar sharmili aankho se Kesar ko ise hi dekhne lagti hai,Kesar bhi gulaal ko aankho me aankhe daal ke khilata hai

Sarayu says its my turn now,is tarah turns leke teeno gulaal ko khilate rehte hai,3 rounds ke baad gulaal bas karne ke liye kehati hai
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arayu aur ajay bhi apna apna khana khane ke baad sabhi log tv dekhne lagte hai

After 30 mintues

Gulaal kabhi kabhi kesar pe check karti rehati hai ki uska mood teek hai ya nahi isa ek ghanta beet jahti hai, phir bhi uska mood teek nahi hota hai to vo Kesar ke paas jaakar puchti hai ki

kya walk pe chaloge?, thoda bahar ghumenge to tera mood bhi teek hojaye ga aur ab baarish bhi ruk gayi hai

Kesar noded his head and he says ok

Gulaal sarayu ko bathake dono bahar walk pe chalte hai dono

Paanch minute tak dono baathe kiye bina chalte hai,

Suddenly gulaal shouts so loudly

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