ff: pyar impossible

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi friends after reading all of u r ffs i got story in my mind i just want share with u all but i never wrote
ff s in my life if u like like it i will continue otherwise not
here u go
Chapter 1
Good Morning San Fransisco aaj ka taapmaan bahut achha and traffic bhi...Gulaal listning the radio while going on the highway with speed 80chalte chalte 10 mintue ke baad red signal ki vajah se car ruk gayi vo sochen lagi hi ki SARAYU mil gayi to maar daalungi use .usko pata hai na
aaj mujhe KESAR ko pick up karna hai airport se phir bhi vo alaram clock badal kar chaligayi apni boyfriend ke saath ghoomne uska kaam mujhe saup kar kudh masti kar rahi hai. Itne me honk bajiti hai loudly irritatetone me kya museebat hai chal rahi hoo apne aap me kehakar car start karti hai
after 10 min ke baad airport pahunchiti hai vo car park karke arrivals ke paas pahunchkar "KESAR"
naam ka board pakad kar khadi ho jaati hai
5min ke baad sabhhi log bahar aate rahene lage us bheed me eh handsome ladaka blue jeans and
black shirt and black shoes pehankar apne dono haatho ko sudar si airhostes ke waist pe rakhkar bahar aata hai bahar aakar un dono ko cheeks pe kar ke bye bol deta hai ye sab dekhkar gulaal apna sir jhuk kar soch ne lagti hai ki kaun ahi? ye badtammej
itne me koi gulaal ke waist par haath rakh kar apni sweet voice bolta hai "CHALE DARLING"
Gulaal stunned and asks him EXCUSE ME AND WHO R U? he tells her that TUMHARA HUM SAFAR

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Posted: 13 years ago
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U CAN GIVE ME COMMENTS TELL ME HONESTLY OTHER WISE NA AAP LOGO KI SAR KHALOONGI APNI BURI FF SE GUYS SO U CAN THROW WHATEVER U WANT
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good story :)
par thodi si writing clear kar do, it will help the readers alot :).
please do continue seems quite promising :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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haye pehle hi scene mein kamar pe haath😆jaldi update karo maate warna hum tumhara sar kha jayenge 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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par thodi si writing clear kar do, it will help the readers alot :).
please do continue seems quite promising :D
thx rimjhim from next time dhyan rakhungi thx for liking
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good start..
thx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: bioinfo

haye pehle hi scene mein kamar pe haath😆jaldi update karo maate warna hum tumhara sar kha jayenge 😉


thx for liking it next scene will be diff
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: minizz

Good start,continue please.


thx for liking it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue ur ff,intresting lag raha hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey sneha dear, very nice, yipppyyy aik aur FF, me sho happy 😃 update soon sneha 😃

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