FFKya mujhe pyaar hai part 35 updt pg 143 - Page 60

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Part 19

A promise

"I'll always be beside you until the very end, wiping all your tears away, being your best friend. I'll smile when you smile and feel all the pain you do. And if you cry a single tear, I promise I'll cry too."

There he stood with his teeny meeny eyes fixed on Gulaal and calling her name..in his deep husky tone.Gulaal was surprised and shocked .His eyes were visible as there was only a faint light outside the window.Gulaal took few mins to clear her vision and realize that it was Kesar who was actually there.Gulaal swiftly grasped her Dupatta and came near the window and asked in disbelief.

K: Tu ..tu yahan kya kar raha hai?.itni raat ko.!.Oh my God Kisi ne dekh liya to?Tu ja yahan se." oye woo hubby hai bf nahi kitna tension le rahi hai

Gulaal looked here and there and signaled Kesar to go away.Kesar kept on gazing at her.Gulaal's vision kept on drifting here and there and then finally fixed on Kesar who was looking at her with imploring eyes. dekha jo tumko yeh dil ko kya hua hai

Kesar whispered,

K: "Ghar chalo Gulaal" bekaar attempt nahi aayegi

G: "Tu itni raat ko mujhe ghar le jane k liye aya hai?Chal abhi ja..yahan se?" to kya tumhe 21 gun shot k salami dekar aaye

K: " mujhe tumse baat karni hai abhi?"

G: "Kesar tu pagal hai kya..koi aa jayega .ja yahan se."

K:" mujhe kisi ka dar hai kya.?Tum bahar aao,Kesar said confidently.

G: "Hey bhagwaan..",Gulaal froze with fear

Meanwhile Talli woke up slightly because of the conversation..and asked

T: Kya hua Gulaal?

Gulaal was perturbed,perplexed ,scared and replied quickly..

G: wo wo kuch nahi pani khatam ho gaya hai..main bahar ja rahi hun bharne.

Talli still sleepy dozed off again.

Gulaal turned around and said to Kesar

G: "tu bahar corridor wali window pe aa wohin baat karungi"

Gulaal moved out of the room and came at the window at the corridor.Kesar was already there waiting impatiently for her.

G: "haan ab jaldi bata kya baat hai..Koi aa jayega .",

Gulaal said and shecontinuously kept checking if someone else was there or not.

K: " wo main yahan nahi keh sakta .tum bahar aao aur mere saath chalo",he insisted

G:"Kesar tu pagal hai kya?ghar ja.kal subah baat karenge."

K: "nahi abhi bahar aao warna,"Kesar threatened her and smiled sheepishly.

G: warna kya? tamasha mat kar Kesar .main nahi aungi.Aur waise bhi Gate pe lock hai..aur watchman bhi hai..Usne dekh liya to.He will not allow anyone to meet me at this hour.ja kesar tamasha mat kar.

Kesar looked at her with determined eyes..and said.

K: tamasha..?tamasha to ab tak hua bhi nahi Gulaal ,agar tum nahi ayi to main shor machaunga aur sab ko jaga dunga.aur raat bhar yahi baitha rahunga.Dekho its getting cold also ,agar mujhe kuch ho gaya to tum hogi iski zimmedar.Aur watchman ki to aisi ki taisi.mujhe tumse milne se rok de.aisi himmat kisi k baap mein bhi nahi hai.tum bhul rahi ho ki tum meri official wife ho.isliye kaun mujhe rokega tumse milne se.Ab sidhi tarah se bahar ati ho k main terrace pe chadhkar darwaza todkar andar aa jaun,kesar said authoratatitvely and in a serious tone.

aaye haaye yeh dekhne k liye meri aaknhein taras gaayi kesar to angry hookar kitna sona lagta hai

Gulaal trembled in anticipation of this horrible possibility.

Kesar continued

K: aur ise dhamki ya mazak samajhne ki bhul mat karna .you know me.,

yaa everyone know u😆

He gave a freaking look at Gulaal.

Gulaal very well knew Kesar and his stubborn attitude.She knew that it was not easy to get away ..So she begged him.

G: ok ok .main har gayi.tu bada hi ziddi hai bas .tu pls ab kuch mat kar.main ati hun .par main aungi kaise?, She asked in a defeated tone

Kesar gave a winning smile and said to her

K: "wo tumhare mess k piche wale door ka latch kharab hai..wahan se aa jao"

isko kaise pata gulaal se kahana pull his ears ladkiyon k hostel k information waah beta

Gulaal was amazed at this piece of information?

K: "kya sochne lagi jaldi bahar aao."

bin tere sanam mar mitenge hum

aa meri zindagi

Gulaal snapped back from her thoughts and followed kesar's instructions.

Finally they both stood facing each other in the hostel lawn.

Gulaal was irritated a bit and said," le chal ab bata kya baat hai..?tune ghadi dekhi hai .ye koi waqt hai baat karne ka.tujhe maza ata hai na mujhe pareshaan karne mein.

ana hi pada sajna

zalim hai dil k lagi

"

Kesar smiled triumphantly and there was a mischeivious grin on his face.

G: " kya hua ab aise hi pagalon jaise muskurata hi rahega ya kuch kahega bhi."

aur kuch karega bhi😳

Kesar came close to her and held her hand and started walking away pulling her with him.Gulaal was almost dragged .She resisted and said , " ye tum kahan ..kya.."

Kesar turned around and there was a twinkle in his eyes .He said softly.. " you trust me na..so come with me"

yeh trust kah kar k kya kar raha hai

Gulaal looked into his eyes?and was a little lost..and she walked behind kesar holding his hands.

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Ye tu ..ye tu mujhe kahan le aya.."Gulaal was skeptical..as it was pitch dark and she stood there without even a clue about what was happeningShe was hardly able to see anything when suddenly she felta hand with a handerchief covering her nose and mouth.

what yeh kya kar raha hai baath nahi liya kya😳

Gulaal was afraid and taken aback.She said shaking and trembling in fear..

G: kesar kahin tu ..mujhse mukti pane k liye mujhe yahan marne to nahi laya ?matlab kal tu itna naraz tha?

gulaal u r galool tu ekdum paagal hai..what a thought😆

Kesar burst laughing..

K: hey bhagwaan is nautanki ka main kya karun..tum lagta hai movies jyada dekhti ho ?Are ye isliye diya taki tum apni nose cover kar sako?are yahan itne jale (spider webs) aur dhool(dust hai) tumhari tabiyat kharab ho gayi to..chinkti phirogi..aur meri afat..ho jayegi?Just cover your nose.,Kesar commanded.

kesar ne asthma k book pee li hai he can be asthamatic doctor

Gulaal was amused at her assumption and fear .they were standing in a small dark staircase ?Almost ready to crumble..

G: par kesar ye to college ki purani building hai na..yahan to koi nahi ata hai na..tum yahan kyun lekar aye mujhe..kya baat hai..," Gulaal threw questions at him like pots and pans.

ok

Kesar sighed.. " maine kaha tha na tum bahut jyada sochti aur bolti ho..ab chup chap chalo mere saath..

And they both climbed the stairs together..

And Finally they reached a small porch like area which was well lit due to the streetlight rays falling on it.

Gulaal was still confused and looked at Kesar and saidin a loud voice, " Ye ..yahan kya hai..tumujhe kahan?"Gulaal's statement was not interrrupted as Kesar placed his hand on her mouth and said..

K : Thoda dhire bolo?

They both looked at each other for a brief moment..Both were close to each other.their closeness doubled their pulses and they could hear each other's heartbeat.Kesar suddenly withdrew his hand and held her shoulders and turned her away from him to make her see the other side..

Gulaal was shocked ,mesmerised and felt that she had seen heaven? "Oh wow ..That's so beautiful..lovely..main..tu ..ye..ye kitna sundar hai..

Kesar's eyes twinkled as he saw Gulaal so happy.The view was indeed beautiful.The sleepy hills of mussorie twinkling with the glow of lightbulbs was faintly visible from this terrace of the old building

oh i love the night scene from the hill station mujhe mera home town yaad aa raha hai though waha dark rehta tha bat jitni bhi light thi it was captivitating i so love it

Gulaal exclaimed still engrossed in the beauty of the view " Its beautiful Kesar?"

K: hai na??

And they both said together " Just like heaven"..

its blissful

Kesar again held her hand and pulled her towards a huge water tank on the terrace which was raised from the floor of the terrace with a space enough to allow ppl to sit under it..Kesar crawled and sat inside and beckoned Gulaal to come inside..

wanha snake ho sakta hai ya phir cockroac ya phir lizzie

Gulaal hesitantly complied and sat beside him?

Kesar started the conversation?

K: pata hai Gulaal ye humare friends ki secret Hideout hai..maine pehli baar cigarrette yahin pini shuru ki thi.We used to sit here for hours and Gossip,hai na ye kamal ki jagah.?,He asked Gulaal

kunal k saath😆 woo bhi terrace tank k neeche haila chiii

G: O to ye tera badmaashi ka adda tha.Waise sach kahun mujhe ye jagah bahut pasand ayi.She smiled,"Ye kya hai..?Tea?",Gulaal asked Kesar as she saw him pouring out some liquid in two small paper cups which he took out from a bag already lying there.

Kesar gave her an amused look and replied? " .Tea? ...nahi re buddhu ye Buransh ka juice hai?Bhul gayi ghar mein fridge mein padi thi ye bottle?Bhulakkad"

banrush juice u love banrush so much

G: "par hum kya celebrate kar rahe hain.?",Gulaal asked curiously.

K: maine kaha tha na tum bolti bahut jyada ho?Pehle mujhe congratulate karo?

G: kis baat k liye..

K: wo mujhe na..Kunal k Dad k hotel mein stir fry station pe chef ki job mili hai..Specially for dinner service...

Gulaal was surprised and happy..

G: par tu job..karega..teri padhai disturb?

K: Oh hello Miss Gulaal in wonderland ..main tumhari tarah mujhe kitabein nahi ratni padti..Well my so called degree requires skill ,so I think isse better kya mauka milega mujhe practise karne ka?

chef kesar topi waala

G: wow Kesar I am so happy for you.Congrats.Tu khana sach mein bahut acha banata ha.I think..you will be great?,said Gulaal ecstatically while taking a sip of the sweet juice ofBuransh?

K: wo ye tumhare Liye?,

Kesar shyly extended a box towards her..

Gulaal took it hesitantly and opened it..

G: Oh wow Imli?Tujhe yaad hai mujhe Imli pasand hai..?

raat mein imli😆

Gulaal exclaimed.Her joy knew no bounds as she quickly took an imli .She was about to relish it but Kesar hit her hand and snatched the imli and the box back from her.

Gulaal became upset and complained with child like innocence , " tu ne wapas kyun le li ,tu mere liye laya tha na..ja main tujhse baat nahi karti.

nautanki

Kesar smiled and said, " nautanki..chin isliye li k abhi itni raat ko khatti imli khaogi to tumhari tabiyat kharab ho jayegi..bhul gayi ..u have asthma..ye sari tumhare liye hi hai.par promise me k sirf din mein hi khaogi aur roz sirf ek..sari ek saath gatak mat jana..samjhi.."

i told u isne thesis likhi hai asthama par

Gulaal was amused and touched at the same time.Someone cared for her so much and she left no stone unturned to hurt him..She felt guilty..

K: Kya hua ..kya sochne lagi..

G: kuch nahi..par tu ye laya kahn se?

K: wo piche jungle mein hai na imli ka ped wohin se

G:tu itni raat ko ped par chadha..itni raat ko ped par nahi chadhte..kehte hain chudail pakad leti hai..,Gulaal said and started laughing..as Kesar kept on looking at her fondly?

haan chaittu chudail wanhi rehti hai kesar par chad jaati to shursh ka kya hota 😆

Gulaal was in a mischeivious mood..she continued? "Tujhe yaad hai bachpan mein bhi tu sara dinyahan se wahan jump karta rehta tha..aur wo imli bhi todta tha..Tu kitna badmaash aur ziddi tha..sara din mere age piche chakkar lagana..Jab maine cyclese school jana shuru kiya..to tujhe bhi cycle pe jana tha?Tere legs bhi nahi pahunchte the paddle par?phir bhiuchak uchak kar tu mere aur vasant k piche piche ata tha..,Gulaal smiled naughtily.. " Bas sara dinGulaal ye..Gulaal wo?mera dimag kaharab ho jata tha..,and she laughed..

Kesar was lost in his childhood memories and blurted out softly.. " aaj bhi kuch nahi badla Gulaal"

G: kya kaha tune..?

Kesar hesitantly changed the topic and saidin a complaining tone, "Haan aur tum aur Vasant bha?mujhe humesha akela chhodkar chale jate the..

vasant ko goli maaro😡

Gulaal sighed as she lied down on her back.. " Kesar bachpan ke din bhi kitne ache the na..Koi fikr nahi,koi tension nahi..Apni zara bhi chinta nahi thi..Mummy papa jo the sari baton ka khayal rakhne k liye..par ab.."

Kesar shyly said, " Kyun ab kya badal gaya abhi bhi hain na sab tumhara khayal rakhne k liye..Mummy papa,PBMB ,Rewa..aur..aur ab main bhi to hun..,

sirf tu hi hai

Gulaal was touched..Her eyes were brimming with tears..

She got up and said " Wo..Wo Tu bahut acha hai Kesar..main tujhsekal ke liye maafi mangna chahti hun?Kya karun..Mujhe samajh nahi ata k main kis baat pe itni naraz hun..Isliye k Vasant mujhe yun shaadi k mandap pe chhodkar chala gaya. Ya .isliye..ki mere sare sapne bikhar gaye..ya isliye k mujhe ek unchahe bandhan mein bandh diya gaya..ya isliye k tu mera itna khayal rakhta hai?pata nahi Kesar k mujhe kyun itni shikayat hai apni zindagi se?mujhe kuch bhi samjh nahi ata..," Tears Rolled down her cheeks as she poured out her delimma and grief in front of Kesar..

so sweet

Kesar felt sad on seeing her crying?He tried to console her, " isme itna rone ki kya baat hai..I told you na that you Think a lot..Sometimes its better to leave things as they are?

Lekin ek baat tumne jo kahi wo mujhe bahut hurt hui.."

G: kaun si baat

K: yahin ki ..mana tumhari nazaron mein humare bich koi rishta nahi tha..par ye baat bilkul galat hai .ki koi rishta nahi ho sakta..

oh sweeter

G: matlab..," Gulaal was confused

K: matlab ye ki humein humare rishtey ko koi naam to dena chahiye..Can't we be friends Gulaal.?,Kesar Asked her with his .imploring voice

Gulaal was overwhelmed,she felt nice..but said naughtily? " Dosti wo bhi tujhse?"..She giggled.. " sochna padega..humme kuch bhi common nahi hai?teri meri dosti thodi si mushkil hai..",she laughed

hmm ladka ladki kabhi dost nahi ho sakte😳 evil smile😃

Kesar looked at her fondly ,took her hand in his hand and said? " dost wo nahi hota..who share common interests..A real friend is the one on whom you can rely upon and who is always there for you. And Gulaal I promise that I shall always be there for you"Kesar said with deep love in his eyes..

Gulaal's heart was touched by this kind gesture ,But she heistantly withdrew her hands ,got up and said..chal ab bahut der ho gayi hai..

so sweet

And both of them walked down the stairs crossing the college campus towards Gulaal's hostel?

P.S.?"The best kind of friend is the one you could sit on a porch, swing with, never saying a word and then walk away feeling that that was the best conversation you've had."

Originally posted by: nneeiill

o my sajani i lub you for giving two quick chapters

hey bache I lubb you too for your pyara sa comment

I loved them like hell

bole to hell matlab😆

Talking about 19th chapter..each and every scene u wrote were really unpredictable

Kesar is so gone case...he did all the prep and then came to hostel

ya see na he is a totally gone case..raat ko ped pe chadha imli todi,fridge se bottle collect ki,hostel ka boundary wall jump..kiya..all this to patao biwi

ab majaal thi k vo bine use liye le jaata ..am in lub with ur kesuda..he rocks...

yes he says to gullu also..that "mujhe tumse milne se koi rok de..kisi k baap mein bhi wo dum nahi hai😆

just as in our show..kesar is multi layered na

at one time he can be so impatient n aggressive and as soon as gulaal gives in he becomes such a sweet heart..

thanx ....😳

and 20 chappi was plain bful..loved the night walk..the bike ride...

and Kesar is so much yearning for gullu..and gullu rani busy playing in baarish...kya kare uska😆

Gullu to pagal hai uska kuch nahi ho sakta😆

fir se tune high point pe latka diya😡...

tune phir mujhpe gussa kiya😭😭

coz of this i get so impatient sajni

have patience..😳.bache🤗

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Part 20

When love strikes

They walked slowly towards Gulaal's hostel..Gulaal's heart was experiencing a strange peace and satisfaction.She felt relaxed ,calm and rejuvenated..Kesar walked with her silently and kept on giving glances at Gulaal.His heart brimmed with Joy when he saw a strange smile on Her face..

yeh dil sun raha hai

tere dil k sada

And they finally reached the gate..of the Hostel..Kesar looked at Gulaal and then Checked the time in his watch.It was 3:30 am.

hey bhagwan raat bhar jagte ...din bhar sote hain yel log vampiires hain

He sighed and said with a heavy heart, " Ok Gulaal Good nite"

half an hour baad good morning karna aur dhruv star bhi dekh lena good for marriage😳😳

Kesar took out the keys of his bike from his pocket and started walking towards the parking?he was startled by the soft voice of Gulaal

G: kahan ja raha hai Kesar , tune hi to kaha tah ki tu mujhe ghar le jane aya hai..aur ab mujhe akele chhod ke ja raha hai..."

oye hoye imli se pat gaayi

Kesar couldn't believe what his ears heard Just now?His heartbeat rose as he came running back towards her and looked at her in surprise.

Gulaal smiled? " Aise kya dekh raha hai chal ab"

Kesar was breathless .She had the same intoxicating smile as he had seen on her face in the camp..

He just said " Haan chalo"

And they both walked towards Kesars Bike..

Kesar Looked at Gulaal and said shyly, " Thanx Gulaal ,apni narazgi bhulkar Ghar chalne Ke liye.."

Gulaal again smiled naughtily and said " Wo tu mujhe apna dost bhi kehta hai..aur thanx bhi..wo kehte hain na Dosti mein no sorry no thank you"

sorry aur thanku se rishte bante hai par majboot tab hote hain jab hume inke jararut naa pade

Kesar started laughing and said " Tum bhi na?.ekdum nautanki..Puri filmy ..ekdum 70 mm ke bade screen ki tarah?ab chalo"

aur tu???

Gulaal blushed and started Hitting Kesar? " Tujhe na ..tujhe main kisi din jaan se maar dungi..tera khoon mere hathon hi hoga..samjha?"

omg yeh koi subtle hint to nahi haina...plz kesar ko mat marna😭😭😭

Kesar looked at her fondly and thought " haan wo to pakka hai..janta hun ek din aisa zarur hoga."

maar gayi😭 piyu aisa mat karna😭

Kesar kick started his bike and Gulaal sat behind him..and hesitantly put her hand on his shoulder.The touch tickled Kesar. It was not the first time she sat like this or touched him..But it was something different today..Thought Kesar as they drove towards Patel Villa . " If he could just hug her once more,if only?."Kesar's thoughts about his desire to hug her never left him for a second .

lovely thought aisa khayal roz ana chahiye😃

His thought process came to an abrupt end when they reached thepatel Villa..The both started walking towardsthe house .It had started raining?by now and Kesar rushed towards the porch..But Gulaal kept on standing there and enjoying the rain?

rain scene confession scene hai kya😳😳😳

Gulaal had a strange fascination for rains..Monsoons always filled her heart with pleasure and even though she had asthma..still never left any opportunity..to enjoy the tiny droplets that made the whole earth blossom with pleasure and prosperity.

lovely description piyu

Kesar was looking at her?with his eyes wide open..The soft drizzle enhanced her beauty and complimented her charm..Kesar was awestruck as if he had just seen an angel?Glowing at her maxima?whose flawless beauty?made him mad..

mad oye hoye yeh kya karne waala hai

He stood there speechless and motionless as if time had stopped.Gulaal saw him standing there and watching her.She smiled and waved her hand and signaled him to come ?

" How could he say no?to her"..Kesar who hated rains walked towards Her..his eyes did not blink for a second..coz he did not want to miss the sight of Gulaal who was enjoying the rains?.

If I could have just one wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday
to the sound of your breath on my neck,
the warmth of your lips on my cheek,
the touch of your fingers on my skin,
and the feel of your heart beating with mine...
Knowing that I could never find that feeling
with anyone other than you

Originally posted by: arti07

lovely chapii piyu. terrace tank scne reminded me three mistakes of my life...though .i always hated the terrance tankscene of three mistake of my life i was like waht the hell he is teacher and what he is doing but this is absolutely fantastic bas mujhe dar lag raha tha kanhi cockraoch naa nikal aata waise aana chahiye tha hume hug mil jaata 😳

thanx meri chotu Govinda..😳.Is it similar..OMG never read Three mistakes.😲.Actually frankly speaking..Not a huge Chetan bhagat fan😆 but loved his Five point someone..😳..

now going to next chapii

lubb you and your bada wala comment😳

Originally posted by: vinolya

Hai Piu.. Loved reading all the chapters... hmmm... last 7 chappies. 😃

Hi Vino..🤗

haila you read all 7 chappis in one go

thanx for liking them🤗

Oh my gosh... am totally Kesarified after readingthese chapters...Why wouldnt I be ???... LOL. Iam loving this Kesar so much... 😳

Ya see Vino...we all are kesarified and saffronised😆

I must say Piu.. you have got wide knowledge about different places / locations and poems ofcourse. I at times wonder how do you manage to describe about different places so beautifully... the more I admire the way you describe those places the more I feel like visiting them. And regarding poems I know those are one of your favorites.

Oh Vino.😲.Its nothing but simply the fact that I've spent a lot of time in utttarakhand..and poems..I just lubb them..Thanx for such flattering compliments...And yes the poems and shayaris are my favourates...See kunnu bandar is inspired by me😆

Kunal... the very name makes me go... 🤣... but thenI love his shayaris... those are written by you right ???

No yaar shayaris..😲churofied from my fav collections😆

Coming to Kesar and Gulaal, I love the way you are bringing them close to each other.I loved the whole camp description, just too good. And Kesar's inner turmoil was beautifully depicted.. I loved reading it. This Kesar is so good, I just love him. Ohh Gulaal herself said that she wanted togo with him... that was so sweet of her. Hmmm... and the rain part wasbeautiful bole tho ekdum zabardasth tha..👍🏼

Thanx vino.😳.I am glad you liked the way the story is taken forward

thanx so much🤗

Bole to me all dancing shancing now

Great going Piu... 👏.. Keep up the great work. 😳

thanx 😳...vino lubb you🤗

Now looking forward to your next chapter. 😃

chappi will be updated soon😳

Originally posted by: arti07

lovely chotu chapii and now i m looking forward for that hug again nect bada waala chapii chahiye and needless to say superb chapii

thanx arti..😳.Lubb you and your bada wala comment..me always desperately waiting for them😳

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Sorry for delay again Piu - but here I am😊

Why sorry....Hi Jzee😳

Chapter 19 - Oh ab jakar dosti hui hai?!😲Yaar ye ab tak kya kare the?!😆Okay seriously, I can understand Kesar's plight! Bichara guy has to resort to taking 'formal' dosti ke vaade this time, to make sure Gullu doesn't do another palti and revert back to being a bull head! Good idea Kesu - now remember to rub it in everytime she is trying to duck or chicken out...

hAAN YAAR AB TAK THEY WERE ONLY FLYING KITES..😆.Yes Kesu is now eager and desperate..Yes now he would encash every opportunity to flirt with Biwi😉

Chapter 20 - Okay the rain scene will probably bring about palpable 'tension' between them, so Kesar had better be all geared up to throw the dosti wala arrow at Gulaal before she plays the turtle game again! And this time, if she gives him a cold treatment, Kesar better take his own bhav and not come around! Although knowing him - sigh - he's such a softie!😒ps: Random thought! If Kesar just blurted he loves her, now, in the rain, will we get another thapad marathon as from the show?!😲

Yes yes tabhi to dosti wal angle introduce kiya..Dosti ki aad mein..Kesu will flirt with her...Na yaar Jzee ..no slapathon..in my FF poor Kesu..original serial mein kitna pita sabse aur to aur Gullu ne to record tod diya

Thank you for double treat yesterday and update S.O.O.N.😎

Thanx for your comments.🤗..

.Will update soon as a little free nowadays😆