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Posted: 14 years ago

Next chappiii jaldi jaldi jaldi...!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07


She came near her bed and saw there were lots of exotic and lavish sarees lying in her bed'the beautiful rich and gorgeous sarees covered her bed completely'there were varity of sarees some in embrodied patterened some sequined some shimmered'in all possible color of earth'blue green pink red white indgo violet purple orange yellow'..every color can anyone think of''..gulaal looked at the sarees with surprise'.as she moved across she saw some exquiselty beautiful necklaces were also present in her bed'..the collection included diamond necklaces, ruby necklaces, emerald necklaces gold necklace and pearl necklaces'.gulaal was surprised and puzzled..she looked at those lovely necklaces with utter amusement'and then amidst the beautiful necklace'.there lied.her diamond necklace accompanied by some white lilies and a letter'.she took the necklace and instanlty recognised it'it was the same necklace she had mortgaged for kesar'.she fondly looked at the necklace a thank u note was tagged with it'. and then she pick up the white lilies smelled it'..she knew these gifts were send by kesar'she smiled and anxiously looked at the letter opened it and read it

Gulaal

kuch tohfe (gifts) hain tumahare liye'malum hai yeh sab tumhare layak nahi hai par phir bhi ho sake to inhe kabool (accept) kar lena'.gulaal in genhne mein; in rango mein woo jaadu nahi hai k tumhe khubsoorat bana sake par tum inme mein se kis ek rang ko chun(chose) kar uuse behad khubsoorat bana dogi'.gulaal mein chahta hun aaj tum apne ander simate hue har rang ko azaad kardo'.bas itni si guzarish hai'.manogi????


Oh just lubbed it.🤗.this is what I call Arti Ishhtyle😎..bole to tu meri umeedon..pe khari utri...It s indeed unique.👏..Paapi atmaon k armaano pe paani😆


gulaal noded her head "ji daiba" and she said "shaam ko koi ek saari pehne thi mein yeh pehungi"

daiba looked at the saffrom saari and said "bahoot pyaari saare hai tumpar bahoot sundar lagagi" and she continued "yeh kesariya aur laal rang kitne pyaare haina gulaal' 'gulaal yaani laal rang''.aur kesariya rang yaani kesar'yeh rang ek dusare k purak(synonyms) hai'.ek dusare k bina adhure aur ek dusore ko poore karte hain'kesar gulaal ko rang deta hai aur gulaal kesar ko uske jeevan ka arth (meaning) deti hai"

so true diaba said he was the color of her life and she was his reason for existence

Ye diaba..to bahut hi intelligent nikli yaar I loved how you've shaped up her character..simply an intelligent ,mature woman..with rational thinking..and a source of love and affection for Gulaal


Gulaal started dressing up she wore her safrron saree'she looked herself in the mirror she looked at her beautiful feature and studied the charming grace that this colour imparted her..strange all those years she hated saffron colour'she never have any liking for this colour but today she wanted to look her best in this color'.she was looking like a angel'she then started wearing diaba's jewellery

Oh to finally kesariya rang Gulaal ko bha hi gaya.😉.Remember vassy ne jab gullu ko saffron saree pehene ko kaha..to she said that she hates saffron colour..to which vassy said wo kesar tumhe apne rang se pyaar karna sikha dega...brilliant storytelling arti⭐️...tu choti choti baton ko bilkul bhi ignore nahi karti.👏.👏..Oh kya baat hai..gullu ko apne rang mein rang hi diya😳




Kesar walked in her room gulaal was sitting infront of the dressing table..kesar just carelessly walked in and he was stunned to see her'..gulaal looked back she was dressed up as a bride'.

Kesar couldn't believe himself'.his heart skip to beat'he knew gulaal was dressing up but he didn't knew she was dressing as a bride'.his bride'his bride was infront of him'in saffron saree with light embelishments and light ruby set and maangtikka'her hairs were open and rested on her shoulders

He stared her'.he was mesmerized'completely smitten'he forgot the world around him''it was just her'..gulaal turned back and met his gaze fixed upon her'.and a strange feeling took possession of her and warm blood mounted to her face and gave a rich glow to her fair complexion'and in shyness she hung her head head down'and then after a sec raise her eyes and stood up she slowly walked towards him'.and mere inches away she stopped and his heartbeat stopped

Oh that is sooo beautiful.👏.Gullu dressed like a bride..kesu's bride..bande ka heartbeat to stop hona hi tha😆


Kesar was still smitten he forgot the reason he came there he was so taken back by her beauty that he stammered "g'gulaal..m..mein'yanha"

Kyun bachuuu...bolti bandh🤣


Gulaal sat'.kesar looked at the jewelley there was a pair of anklet

Gulaal slightly lifted her saree and kesar saw the beautiful feet soaked in alta'he gently put the anklet on her ankle as her hand touched her ankle'.her skin felt a kindling desire'she took a deep breath and a sweet sigh passed on him'

Kesar then look around he saw there was waistlet..he asked "yeh"

Gulaal replied shyly "y'.yeh waist mein"

Kesar looked at him and his heartbeat accelerated'he put his gentle hand around her waist'and lock the waistlet'while he put his hand his fingers brushed her navel and a srtongest sensation ran down her that electrified both she wanted to walk away she wanted to drew back but the moment was so intense that it took her breath away'she closed her eyes and took a deep breath and a hair lock gently touched her face'..

Kesar stoop up'.kesar was looking at her'his eyes were fixed on her'a man was looking his bride there was a longiness and deep desire for her..he moved to close to her careful not to touch her''but he was so close that they can feel the warm breath on each other'..he looked at her hairlock and his finger drifted the hairlock over her cheek moved lightly down her hairline to the velvet curve behind her ear'.his fingertip touched her and the sensation vibrated through her skin she closed her eyes and at the instant she closed her eyes he stared her.. he paused'his nerves shirked and his heartbeat thudded in his ears''unable to resist himself he then floated his warm finger slowly down the curve of her neck '.and gulaal was completely taken by a the ice was breaking under the heat of raw passion and kindling desire..he then floated her fingertip to her collarbone and under the raw sentivity she waited with her impateint heartbeat and tensed muscles and a helpless fascination for the next touch'

It was deep piercing moment that grew to the extent that both ceased to avoid it

Kesar closed his eyes brought his face near to her and in the swept of emotion she felt closeness to him'kesar and gulaal were too close''that he felt her breath on his chin.

Oh ho..paapi atmaon ki to wah bhai wah ho gayi..bole to tamatarmukhi ho gaye sab k sab...now they will want more chii...Dekh arti tu dhire dhire musibat mol le rahi hai...🤣

On a serious note arti..yOU've beautifully described the passionate moment...😳

Sunny said "kesar chachu aur chachi chaliye neeche"

Kesar said in puzzled state "haan chalo sunny"

Elo ji😛..sunny ko bhi abhi aana tha

And then gulaal and kesar regained themeselves'and they quitely came ot of the room'..they were walking together but quietly and hesistantly..a storm had just passed by and they felt its intensity

Bole to ek tufaan guzara.😉.ab khamoshi...but kya ek agle storm se pehle ki shaanti hai😕

Talli carried him to dance floor she wanted to dance but he forgot his dance steps he hardly danced he couldn't keep his eyes away from her'and gulaal was silent she didn't have the courage to look at him he just kept looking back staring at her finding his quest his desire his passion in her eyes and she just hung her head down

Tu is Talli ko bhaga kyun nahi rahi...😡.Oh ho ab kya hoga next.😕.can't wait..Jaldi likh..😳

O meri chotu govinda..cum Yash chopra..🤗.Tera style unique hai👍🏼...tu bole do ekdum bindaas likhti hai,,,⭐️,,This is very interesting and soulful...Keep up the good work...👏

.Tere FF ki main hun diwani🤪

Jaldi se chappi la...😍

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Posted: 14 years ago
o my dear aarti...
Thanx for the wishes...
pata hai...jab tune yeh chappie update kiya,main tab bhi so rahi thi...thats y late...
Tu ne mujhe bhi breathless choda with this chappi...saare armaan poore hue...😳
haay...our kesuda itna besharam kyun nahi hai yaar...har baar chances miss karta hai...chii...now main tho uss serial ke baare mein baat bhi nahi karna chahti...😭
maine news nahi padha,...forum pe aate hi yahan aa gayi...but sabke reactions padhke mujhe bohot darr lag raha hai...i'll read it now,...preparing myself for another heartattack...😲
yaar...superb chappi yaar...bataane ki zarurat hai???next next next...😳
Tune mujhe bindaas bday gift diya hai yaar...thanku thanku thanku...luv u...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great as always. It was a special GK chapter. kahun tho kya kahun , I really wanted Gulaal to sing a song like Dil Kho gaya-( sing is king) or something similar to it on Rewas sangeet or on some similar occassion. Just a wish, just said it like that.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ohooo...ab saare armaan tere ff se poore karne hain. AB toh 9PM se zyaada, tere ff update ka intezaar rehta hai. Kya massst chapter tha! I loved the passionate scene. I am tooo excited...aage kya hoga???
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kalika.j

@arti07, Thank you for this beautifull romantic episode. I was silent reader from the 1st episode. Superb arti. lekin ye talli ko dhoda door rakhna please.

thanks dear ! loved u spoke to me😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
by the way well written chapter, cant wait for next one👏 @rimjhim thanks for reading thanks for pic..though i love neil in shirt also😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
What a romantic chapter...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

by the way well written chapter, cant wait for next one👏 @rimjhim thanks for reading thanks for pic..though i love neil in shirt also😉

ur welcome😊. and im glad your not going, or i would have missed reading your ff.
when will the next chapter come, i cant wait😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: JZephyr

Arti - I almost seem to find every time the CVs let go of a chance to be GK-chiii you give us yet another movement forward on their track 😆


Oh I wish there was a picture to see what Gulaal looked like, cause just there, captured in the words of the chapter she sounded like one sight like no other!

And chalo, at least DB is going to be well on team GK, when the moment comes. Thank you for that! I was a little worried about Gulaal's reaction after she snaps out, but fortunately she's only conscious and shy atm ... has she momentarily forgotten about the break this DV promise?! It certainly seems like it! Kesar's love elevates her to another world and she almost breaks her shackles from the existing life!

ya jzee if cv doesnt give me chii moment i will write in my FF...we are all praying some nice kes-gul moment...and i always loved diaba initally cv protrayed her character very well...she was the first person who actually realised gulaal's pain and agony wen she said u need green bangles...i loved her instantly..
thanks jzee !

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