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chweetu

@chweetu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Wow..Arthi..amazing chappie..😛loved it..n loved h u brought vasanth issue..to make kes-gul each other's support..😳bas us dance class ko math bhoolna..😛😉we want more dance(dream) sequences..😃😛

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Bioinfo_Chaitu

@Bioinfo_Chaitu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

aarti aarti meri prasar bharati kya chappi likha hai boss i loved it special mention-------

He looked at her and avoided the eye contact and went to his room silently…gulaal followed him and silently stood outside the room…kesar was in tears……for him it was failure of his dream he was shattered…..on the first failure of his expectation he was disappointed,,,his fist failure tormented him he put his hand on his face and cried silently…gulaal stood their but she didn't came near as she didn't want to embarrass him but her heart cired along with him…she was with him but remained distant….she stood there until kesar fall asleep

and another one is------

Kesar heard and he was exremely happy he said "sure sir we will try our level best"

and then everyone left…kesar looked at the door he saw his vasantbha was smiling and clapping at his success kesar was in tears he wiped his tear and saw vasantbha was not there and he saw gulaal…gulaal standing there and smiling at his success……kesar was astonished he came outside searched for her..he came out of the hospital and saw gulaal was coming out of the taxi…kesar was confused…

Gulaal looked at him and said "kya hua"

Kesar said "kuch nahi wo tum abhi wanha thi yanha…"

Gulaal said confoundly" kya kah rahe ho"

Kesar said "kuch nahi tum yanha kaise"

Gulaal said "bas tumhe congrats kahne aayi thi tumhe order mil gaya na"

Kesar asked in astonishment "tumhe kaise pata"

Gulaal said "bas pata hai…"

Kesar then said "haan order mil gaya bas ab fatafat supply karde to sab theek ho jayega"

Gulaal looked at him and smiled kesar said "gulaal tumhe lagta hai mein vasantbha k dreams pure kar paunga"

Gulaal looked back and said "mujhe yakeen hain tum mere aur vasant dono k sapne poore karoge"….

To see kesar a sucessful and responsible person was no longer only vasant dream but now it was gulaal's dream too….even she didn't knew how kesar had made his place in her dream…he made his entrance in her dream in the least extravagant form and now he was the most important part of her consciousness

Kesar heard it quietly he was silent and speechless…he was just wondering y did he saw gulaal in the presentation room

very nice chappi dear

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Incense

@Incense

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: chweetu
Wow..Arthi..amazing chappie..😛loved it..n loved h u brought vasanth issue..to make kes-gul each other's support..😳bas us dance class ko math bhoolna..😛😉we want more dance(dream) sequences..😃😛

ya i know...i wanted to show all the dimension of love in the story.its about guiding ones love...showing right direction like a guiding star in the dark road. of gloominess and disappointment...u know wen kesar came back in the show and panba motaba gulaal use to talk about making him a responsible person as vasant i thought probably kesar being a educated son of sarpanch will do some extraordinary work...like bringing new technology in his factory and running it more sucessfully or opening more schools and hospitals in talsagra... and gulaal will stand beside him...and he will be a sucessful man...but it didnt happen ...so thought to make a chappiee on it ...

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chweetu

@chweetu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: arti07

ya i know...i wanted to show all the dimension of love in the story.its about guiding ones love...showing right direction like a guiding star in the dark road. of gloominess and disappointment...u know wen kesar came back in the show and panba motaba gulaal use to talk about making him a responsible person as vasant i thought probably kesar being a educated son of sarpanch will do some extraordinary work...like bringing new technology in his factory and running it more sucessfully or opening more schools and hospitals in talsagra... and gulaal will stand beside him...and he will be a sucessful man...but it didnt happen ...so thought to make a chappiee on it ...

Ya..that might be more merrier to watch...😛but CV's are upto showing d immaturity in kesuda..😕n yeah..this is a nice angle arti...gulaal guiding kesar..n he is standing upto her expectations.😳n yeah a matured n understanding love story..needs this..😃reminds me of abhi n simi..being each other's support..😳

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Incense

@Incense

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Posted: 14 years ago

#95

thanks chaitu for liking !😳

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Incense

@Incense

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: chweetu

Ya..that might be more merrier to watch...😛but CV's are upto showing d immaturity in kesuda..😕n yeah..this is a nice angle arti...gulaal guiding kesar..n he is standing upto her expectations.😳n yeah a matured n understanding love story..needs this..😃reminds me of abhi n simi..being each other's support..😳

u r right siree at times a feel kesar has nothing to do in the world except roaming around gulaal...u know his parents were deeply hurt with this truth they were sitting in dark and kesar was just concerned about gulaal...i know he loves gulaal dearly but what about his parent...doesnt they deserve some love and affection from him...and kesar had undergone the pain for 10 years he understand the depth of pain his parent are going but still he left them alone it was rewa who brought food for them .i didnt like it at all and even wen rewa was crying he was concerned about gulaal ok show ur concern but kindly understand the pain of other family members..i know he is good husband but that doesnt completes his personality i wanted cv to show them as as responsible son caring brother a mature person a responsible person towards his society...i know i m demanding more

and abhi and simi were in love my ff is the journey of two strangers towards each other...

Edited by arti07 - 14 years ago

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Gman

@Gman

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Posted: 14 years ago

#97

Aarti thank you for emotional bonding chapter, will wait for next chappie.

Happy Friendship day to you all from me.

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EXOL

@EXOL

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+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#98

hi arti

wow again an awesome chappi

u know what i love about ur FFs its always so unpredictable..

u come up with twists which I dont even think about

it was very creative the way u put up kesar's decision to start the company again

it all shows how much u r involved with the characters u have created...

good job😳

and

Happy Friendship Day !!!

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Sree

@Katyayani_devi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#99

hi arti ya me too think of showing kesar becoming responsible person after he returns n all but cv has other plans n nice post , nice post keep up the good work. 😊 happy friendship day 2 u n 2 all guyz. 😊

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without-fathom

@without-fathom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#100

You notch the subtlety so well Arti - when Gulaal told him to imagine a person he loves and believes in, I remembered the chotta Kesu and Gulaal scene of fighting the fear of darkness, and thought he would imagine Gulaal - like he had taken her name in the show - but I was pleasantly surprised to see him imagine Vasant... and then the way Vasant merged in to Gulaal in the end - what a pretty symbolism of going from the person who groomed whom into a responsible young boy to the person who is now serving his greatest inspiration and motivation to succeed upon his grooming!

Lovely chapter! I hope you're feeling better ...!

JZee

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