old FF till chapter 19 - Page 95

Originally posted by: Geeshani

Aagai chapi atthara

Hindi shair mujhe nahi aatha

Chappi unnees jaldi laana

Nahi tho hum tumahri band bajaunga...🤣

Originally posted by: scarletthara

Yippie... mera dil khush ho gaya after reading chapter 18... Thank u Arti for the PM... subah subah din ki achchi suruaat huyi meri,... I am just hopeing ki CVs tumhare FF se kuch seekh le and copy karen... then we would get to see some interesting scenes with Manasi and Neil also...

How I can imagine the two in your FF... laughing and then crying.. and holding each other... goood one Arti... 😃

Originally posted by: -Srushti-

Owww...Yashu that is soo sweet of you...and here is somebody who is not liking my shayaris '*looks at bhajiyawali😡*...ya do come there...generally I just post there and dont reply to all comments..but if you come .we will have a blast😳😳😳

call me i will literally blast your post...

Originally posted by: vinolya

Super Hurray this time !!!!! * relaxed * OMG, I finished reading all the CHs in a go.. 13, 14, 15, 16, 17 and 18... ... I can't believe myself.. 😳

@ Aarti, Sorry for the late comments yaar. But then your FF keeps my interest and I just cant keep myself away from this page. I always look forward to it. Just a bit late in reading and commenting... sorry again. To be very honest I read all the chapters. Just go back and check the number of likes, it has increased by a number and yeah thats me and I did it 😊 .

Yaar, how do you prepare yourself to write such brilliant and beautiful FF.. Iam totally amazed. I loved all the chapters that I read now. I loved the way how you related river Ganga and a woman's life in ch - 16... the description you gave for that was awesome. And also the bubbles.. it made me so emotional. The beach scene was totally superb. In ch -17, loved the Kes - Gul moments and the interpretation of all colors with the name " Gulaal "... gosh... that was fantastic !!

Ch - 18 was again superbly written. Loved the emotional scene between Kes - Gul... Very well described. Superb and lovely write up. Your FF is getting more interesting.

Keep it up yaar.. looking forward to many more.

Originally posted by: Keithuu

Aarti...this is ur best chappie...
Really beautiful...thanx yaar for takin me to dreamland...
now kuch der baad sp pe gulaal shuru hoga...aur main dharti pe waapas...
Too good...waitin for next...😊

Originally posted by: kreas

@Arti
Lagta hai ajj Arti ne subah subah sapne me Orbit ka add dekh liya tha aur phir Orbit ka experiment kar dala...Jaise Add me datt twinkle kar rahe the thik usi tarah Gulaal aur Kesar ke eyes twinkle kar rahe hai tere FF me...!!!!Nic experiment...keep it up...!!!!!!😃
Mindblowing yaar tum to yaha bhi kesuda ko joru ka gulam bana dia...!!!!👍🏼
"Ho raha hai"mujhe bhi kuch kuch ho raha hai...!!!!![B-}}]
Phir se double decker, not happening...humari Rewa kitni sweet hai isi liye to kabab me haddi nai bani...!!!!!!!so sweet na...!!!!!
Wedding funda is mindblowing...!!!!
Chappiii is mindblowing 2 3 4...n so on...!!!!!itni baar mindblowing kaun likhega...!!!!!!
N last a question for u...Kaha se lati ho itne sare mindblowing ideas...??????🤔

Originally posted by: bioinfo

OMG what is this🤣@geesh- dear itna cute sher maine aaj tak nahi padha🤣

@piyu- gesshu ghatiya shayar of themillennium title jeeet gayi,,,

OMG geeshu.😲..ye kya hai...😆.Ye to out of this world hai👏

Chaitu.😉.ye title Geeshu ka hi hai*bows down and salutes geeshu*😆

Originally posted by: nneeiill

I could not control my self and read it in between my open book exam...

ok now am dead...somebody put me in coffin...
arti u dont know how much i loved this chapter...thank you for giving such joy of reading yaar
u gave me the kesr-gulaal hug.. OMG i wanna cry out of happiness...😭
my heart beat went like 1000 times faster...

loved loved all the kesar dialogues..like srush says "can i have him "

ho raha hai...that was too good..can i have a snapshot of KG hug ..i wanna see it now..


arti..love you yaar for such beautiful chapters...
just can wait for the next one

hey bhagwaan where do u get ideas of such fabtastic mindblowing shayyari...hey bhawaan dont u roll on the chair reading ur shayaaris...