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dushyant "gulaal apne baare mein bhi dhyaan dena shuru karu"

gulaal didn't speak

dushyant said "mein tumse kuch baat karna chahta hun"......Ohh pls Arti don't do this to us....I wish he will never tell that to her...😍

"Unknowingly two ppl have heard the comversation kesar and gulaal

All their happiness evaporated???they didn't said a word as they didn't want to hurt anyone they quietly went to their room

Gulaal remain silent as she was accoustomed to such tuants and humiliation but kesar was deeply hurt with such sort of talk??."

This scene z so emotional. 🥺

BTW U gave real justify for our JK...😃

Originally posted by: chweetu

Very..nice chappie Arti...😳loved h u bring d widow concept..😊

Originally posted by: truedecent

pakau 😳 😭 na arti aisa na kaho 😭 yes yes yes i want u to continue n i m sure all want this, n arti yar kya suspense pe chora chapter... i m like 😲 ab kya hoga, yar ur chapters r superb arti, plz dont loose interest in the show, see maansi hurt na so abhi talli ko jhelna parega hamen 😕 per then gullu vl see changed kesar n vl realize her mistake, me so so hope that 😃

n i loved this chapter also arti 🤗 inna acha u wrote, i feel like this all is real n really gulaal n kesar k saath this all happening 😳 aaa wooo, should i say some thing 😳?? wooo, wooo, chapter 13 kab ayega 😃

kiran ...mujhse talli aur chandamama aur sweet kesar nahi jhela jaa raha i was attracted becoz of push pull tension between the two...now there is no push pull and no emotions from gulaal yanha par saare emtions came from kesar gulaal is iceberg...pehle kitchen sambhalti thi now kesar does it...i dont feel like watching anymore...thanks for comment

Originally posted by: Geeshani

Thanks Arti...🤗

Wow another emotional chapter...

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dushyant "gulaal apne baare mein bhi dhyaan dena shuru karu"

gulaal didn't speak

dushyant said "mein tumse kuch baat karna chahta hun"......Ohh pls Arti don't do this to us....I wish he will never tell that to her...😍

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"Unknowingly two ppl have heard the comversation kesar and gulaal

All their happiness evaporated???they didn't said a word as they didn't want to hurt anyone they quietly went to their room

Gulaal remain silent as she was accoustomed to such tuants and humiliation but kesar was deeply hurt with such sort of talk??."

This scene z so emotional. 🥺

BTW U gave real justify for our JK...😃

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Now I'm eagerly waiting for ur next chapter...

Originally posted by: arti07

kiran ...mujhse talli aur chandamama aur sweet kesar nahi jhela jaa raha i was attracted becoz of push pull tension between the two...now there is no push pull and no emotions from gulaal yanha par saare emtions came from kesar gulaal is iceberg...pehle kitchen sambhalti thi now kesar does it...i dont feel like watching anymore...thanks for comment😳

Originally posted by: bioinfo

aayre aa gayi arti dhamakedar chappi ke saath, good job yaara,last ki line ne to excitement aur badha di and pls continue writing if u want then take more time i know creativity is a spontaneous flow so take ur own time aur hum log aise hi tujhe spam bhej ke pareshan karte hain aur karte rahenge😆

Originally posted by: sukriti19a

ARTI ... plz dont give up writing... U got such a good skill... n remember u promised me that u will come up with passionate scenes of Kesar n gulaal...

Take ur time ... but dont quit...