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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vinolya

Aarti,

Jaldi vapas aajao with the next chapter, yahaan par sabka heartbreak ho raha hai.. btw, I will have to read from ch - 6.. 😳...
Where is Siree, Geesh and Kiran ... 😔



Me..me..me..here vinolya..dear.🤗.will catch u..guys..n Artii..😡..soon...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago



Omg...itne mote mote ansu...mujhse nai dekhe jate...


naiii...!!!!


Arti😡tum kaha ho...!!!!!
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Chapter 9

Gulaal and vasant were talking about kesar while kesar and his friend had arranged a motocross

Motocross is a form of motorcycle sport racing held on enclosed off road circuits the grounds were set..flag waved and the bike race started and kesar leaded all the way he was about to cross the finish line but his bide skid in between he completed his race but fell on the finsih line and his hand and elbow hurted badly.his friends came running towards him they saw blood coming out of his hand..vicky and sonu were tensed

Vicky said to sonu "lets take him to the hospital he needs medical care"

Vicky and sonu took him to modi hospital one of his friend rishi also accompanied them?.kesar sonu vicky and rishi were waiting in the doctor's cabin...kesar looked around and saw the name plate on the table gulaal's name was written on it

Kesar and vicky looked at each other...kesar was worried as he didn't wanted to any family member know about his participation in motorcross

Kesar said to vicky "chal bhaagte hai "

And then rushed towads the door... Gulaal was standing outside she was talking to a nurse as kesar headed towards the door gulaal came inside and they almost touched each other they were surprised to see each other...she was confused... kesar was nervous... then she saw the injury...she was scared...she took kesar hand in her hand looked at his hand and asked "kya hua"

Rishi who didn't knew gulaal was his bhabhi said "wo bike se gir gaya"

Gulaal took kesar in the cabin and nursed him

She gently wiped the blood with the cotton and put the bandage around his hand kesar was silent he was feeling awkward..

While putting the bandage around his hand she asked "kaise gir gaye "

Rishi replied " wo hum motorcross race kar rahe the"

Kesar angrily looked at rishi and vicky and sonu were trying him to stop??they stamped his feet...rishi said "yeh kya kar raha hai"

gulaal looked at his friends and vicky and sonu stood stilent

Gulaal asked" yeh motorcross kya hota hai"

rishi said " motocross bike race hoti hai yanha par road par bike nahi chalna hota...aap road k aas pass pathreele raaste par jungle mountain par chala sakte hain... par road par nahi...jo pehle race finish karega jeetega"

Gulaal rolled her eyes and sarcastly said " acha "

Kesar wanted rishi to shut his mouth but rishi didn't understood

He said "bahut dangerous game hai par acha hua... hum jeet gaye"

Gulaal replied "haan jeetna important hai phir chahe 206 bones tut kar 412 kyu naa ho jaaye...right"

Kesar was silently listening to her in embarrassment...

Gulaal put the bandage gave some medicine and started walking out of the cabin

Rishi asked "apki fees"

Gulaal didn't said anything and left

After she left vicky and sonu started scolding rishi "kyu kisne kaha tha bak bak karne ko..."

Rishi asked " kyu kya hua"

Vicky said "hua yeh k yeh kesar k bhabhi hai aur tumne jo bhi baka hai who iski bhabhi kesar k family waalo lo batayengi"

Rishi "oh no ab kya hoga"

Kesar speaked "ab...ab meri peetayi hogi...bike k keys nahi milegi... do mahine k pocketmoney band... aur ek mahine tak ghar mein rehna hoga...sab teri wajah se thanks" and he smacked him

Kesar was tensed panba and vasantbha didn't approve his participation in motorcross...he had promised panba not to take part in motocross but he couldn't keep his promise as he loved adventure and speed

Kesar returned home and saw vasantbha sitting in the sofa he tried to walk away

Vasant saw and him and stopped him said "kesar"

Kesar stopped , he was scared he slowly walked towards him

As he came near Vasantbha said "chot kaise hai kesu theek hai na"

Kesar stammered "w.w wo mein "

Vasant said "mujhe pata hai gulaal ne bataya tu bike se jaa raha tha aur ek herd samne aa gaya unhe bachane k liye fisal gaya haina"

Kesar looked at him in disbelief

Vasant hugged him and said "koi baat nahi jaa kar aaram kar"

Kesr takes a deep breath he looked inside and searched gulaal...she was standing outside the kitchen door kesar slowly walked inside and while passing he looked at gulaal with reverence and awe his eyes talked to her and thanked her...gulaal standing there smiled back

At night gulaal was in her room she gave a medicine to vasant...but vasant refused to take

Gulaal said "yeh kya vasant aap dawai kyu nahi le rahe aap ko jaldi thek nahi hona kya"

Vasant said "nahi bahut kawdi hain mujhe nahi peene"

Gulaal was insisting and vasant was refusing

Gulaal said " aap nahi peyenge"

Vasant said "nahi"

"Yeh aisi nahi peyenge" said kesar from behind with the knock at the door

Vasant saw kesar and called him in

Kesar looked at her and said "dijeye mein dawai pilata hun"

And then he moved towards vasant...he closed his nose and opened his mouth and made him drunk that medicine

Vasant replied kesar "yeh kya"

Kesar gave the medicine back

Gulaal smiled and said "acha way hai dawai pilana ka apne pateint par jarur try karungi"

Kesar said "haan bachpan mein vasantbha ne mujhpar bahut try kiya hai"

Vasant was smiling

Gulaal continued "chalo acha hai kam se kam vasant tumhare kehna to maante hain meri to bilkul nahi sunte bilkul carelees hain"

Kesar in low voice said "wiase vasantbha yeh bhi careless hain " pointing to gulaal?.apko paata hain inhone subah se khana nahi khaya hai...jab se hospital se aayi hain kaam kar rhai hain"

Gulaal looked towards kesar she was surprised to hear this...all these days kesar was very rude to her...she was supirsed and moved...kesar has noticed she didn't took the meal

So was vasant...he said to gulaal "kyu gulaal tumne khana nahi khaya"

Gulaal said "kha lungi abhi itna kaam hai apki masage oil se massage bhi to karni hai"

Kesar said to gulaal very softly "yeh mujhe dejiye mein massage kar deta hun aap khana kha lijeye"

Gulaal gave the massage oil and said haan kha lungi"

kesar went inside the kitchen and came back with food

he gave it to gulaal and insisted abhi khana hoga

she filled with joy and happiness with the kind gesture...it was first time he was talking to her..his eyes were shining with fondness...she took the plate and he took the massage oil

kesar put some oil in th palm and and he gently massaged vasant leg... kesar and gulaal were sitting besides each other kesar was giving massage vasant leg and gulaal was taking her dinner guietly

vasant who was present as connecting link between both of them contendently said" "kesar acha laga jo tune gulaal k liye concern show kiya. Mein to hamesha kaam mein busy rehta hun aur gulaal wo sirf dusaro k baare mein sochti hai apna khayal hi nahi hai."

Gulaal said in between "vasant"

But vasant continued "kesar aaj se gulaal ki jimedaari teri hui...jab mein naa hun to iska khayal rakhna...rakhega naa"

Kesar smiled and said "bilkul"

And then looked at gulaal and smiled.

In day or two. vasant regained his health he could walk properly without the stick he even returned back to his work and resume his office work. Everything was fine.in morning panba came to vasant's room and said "vasant ab kaise lag raha hai"

Vasant said "haa baa ab to bilkul theek hun"

Panba said "agar bilkul thek ho gaye ho to kuch din k liye gulaal k saath kahin bahar ghum aayo"

Vasant blushed and said "panba bahut kaam hai"

Panba said "haan kaam to hota hi rehega par abhi jao aur todhi bahut zindagi bhi jee lo..gulaal ko acha lagega"

She smiled and said "mujhe bata dena tum dono ko kahan jaana hai me booking kar dungi"

Vasant in very low voice said "ji baa"

Aftersometime gulaal came in her room.she saw vasant waiting for her...she came near and asked "kya hua apko office nahi jana"

Vasant took her in his arms and said "nahi hume official permission mil gayi hain apke saath time spend karne ki"

Gulaal asked" matlb"

Vasant said naughtly" matlab yeh ki panba hume honeymoon k liye bhej rahi hain"

Gulaal was exited "sach"

Vasant smiled" hmm badi khush lag rahi hain madam?.acha batao kanha jaana chahugi paris greece newzealand"

Gulaal interrupted "goa ,bahut pyaar plae hai mujhe wanha k beach sunset bahut ache lagte hain hum wanhi jaayenge"

Vasant said "thek hai hum goa chalenge mein baa se kah dunga"

Gulaal said "par by road chalenge apni car se.mazaa aayega"

Vasant said "haan baba jaise tum thek samjho"

And then they hugged each other

Everything was arranged panba reserved a one of the best beach cottage for the newly wed and gulaal packed the luggage for her honeymoon she was happy and exited

Next morning vasant and gulaal got ready to leave for their honeymoon

Panba rewa and kesar came to bid adieu... gulaal and vasant touched panba feet and seeked her blessing rewa was talking to gulaal

meanwhile kesar hugged vasant and said in his ear vasantbha" panba 15 days k liye bhej rahi hain aap one month baad anna?. Mein panba se kha dunga goa mein spaceship dekhe gaye hain aur government road seal karke aliens dhondh rahi hain"

vasant replied back in his ear " sirf ek mahina mei 2 months k soch raha hun tu kah dena santaclauz aur elf bhi dekhe gaye hain"

kesar smiled and said "sudhar rahe ho vasantbha"

vasant then took a leave and headed towards the car..

gulaal also parted and reached to the car door...kesar came near and opened the car door gulaal looked at him kesar said in soft voice" take care"

and then said "I will miss " took a pause and said "both of you "

gulaal smiled...gulaal sat inside the car..vasant and gulaal waived their hand and car left the premises

Edited by arti07 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
guyz i really wrote this chapter in haste me still toggling between test assignment projects...plz bear shallu n chetaili usme elf bhi hai.🤗...i know i will never sudherofy...hum tobhai jaise hai waise rahenge 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
yeah chapter 9...I love u Ariti...
Now i'm going to read...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

guyz i really wrote this chapter in haste me still toggling between test assignment projects...plz bear shallu n chetaili usme elf bhi hai.🤗...i know i will never sudherofy...hum tobhai jaise hai waise rahenge 😉

Good luck for ur assignmaent and project...Do ur best...
Edited by Geeshani - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very nice...So atlast kesar & gulal have become friends.Awaiting for chapter 10
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very..nice chappie..Arti..acha tareeka..hai..dono ko milaneka...😳...n very interesting..I know what gonna happen to Vasanthba...😆😆..n elf...🤣..you have made my day..Arti....n all d best..for ur project n exams..do well...
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Posted: 14 years ago
In which chapter they will met an accident?.....Now I wanna see chapter 10...

"kesar aaj se gulaal ki jimedaari teri hui...jab mein naa hun to iska khayal rakhna...rakhega naa"...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very nice arti... now vasantbha.. out of pic vey soon... and then KG... wow..but dushyant ka kya hua... where is the villian..

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