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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: arti07

hey raam yeh kya ho gaya yanha bhi bhavna 😳 anyways mujhe batao how to update the topic i have finished my second chapeter yanha upload to kar dungi par post ko kasie edit karu?????


artiii is here 🤗 u can post it on a separate post here in this topic only, n u can add the page number (whr u have updated) in the topic name, ya phir u can add the page number in ur very first post of this topic...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: arti07


hey raam yeh kya ho gaya yanha bhi bhavna 😳 anyways mujhe batao how to update the topic i have finished my second chapeter yanha upload to kar dungi par post ko kasie edit karu?????


Ohhh Arti u r here with ur 2nd chapter...🥳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: truedecent


artiii is here 🤗 u can post it on a separate post here in this topic only, n u can add the page number (whr u have updated) in the topic name, ya phir u can add the page number in ur very first post of this topic...

arey topic mein update kaise kare topic edit kaise hota hai????
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yuppiii...here comes arti with chapter 2...!!!!!
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Originally posted by: arti07

arey topic mein update kaise kare topic edit kaise hota hai????

Geesha Knows she edits her thread topic..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: arti07


arey topic mein update kaise kare topic edit kaise hota hai????

just edit ur first post...then u can edit topic title...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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chapter 2

vasant and gulaal spents a lovely evening that day ??gulaal was happy and cheerful and vasant was staring her quietly

vasant asked "tum khush hona "

gulaal laying her head on his shoulder" yes jab tum mere pass ho to mujhe duniya k saari khushi mil jaati hai "

vsant softly said "agar mein naa bhi hoon to bhi tum hamesha yunhi khush raha karo ?..tum khush rahogi to vasant k muskaan bane rahegi

gulaal looked in his eyes and said "par tum kyu nahi hoge hum hamesha saath rehenge aur khush rahenge haina"

vasant said "yes"

aftersometime vasant drops her at home and gulaal bids adieu vasant calls her back he comes out of car and says " gulaal don't worry mein ek ya do din mein humari shaadi k baat panba se kar lunga"

vasant comes home he rings the bell?. door opens and kesar greets him with the splash of color ???he put color on vasantbha and says " happy holi

vasant who is now drained in colors looked at kesar and say " arey kesuda yeh kya abhi tak kapde nahi badle aur rang bhi laga hua hai "

"haan yeh jab se aaya hai tab se zid karke beitha hai ki jabtak vasantbha ko rang nahi lagunga tab tak change nahi kaurnga tambse bhoot bana ghoom raha hai intervene panba

kesar says " aur nahi to kya meri holi vasantbha ko rang lagaye bina meri holi kaise puri hoti "

vasantbha looks at him and says "par mein tumhe kanha rang lagau yanah to kanhi jagah nahi bachi "

kesar said "kanhi par bhi laga do apka rang alag hi dikhega "

vasant put color of his face and said "happy holi chalo ab jaake bath le lo aur jaldi khana kahne aa jao bahut bhuk lagi hain "

kesar leaves and vasantbha wishes holi to every member of the family after sometime everyone sits for dinner

vasant asks ramanbha "aapka kaam kaise chal raha hai "

ramanbha "acha chal raha hai "

sudhabhabhi says " par itna acha nahi k hume duniya k saaro aish aur aaram mil sake afterall yeh sirf ek writer hai "

sudhabhabhi taunts definetly hurts ramanbha but he doesn't react

vasant is little uncomfortable but he tries to lighten the atmosphere and say "toh kya hua I wish mujhe ramanbha jaisa talent mil jaata aur mein unke jagah aa jaate yeh shabdo se jaadu kar dete hai "

sudha replied and "I wish raman tumhari jagah hote "

vasant really upset with this decide to keep quiet

panba and rewa serves the food in the plate

kesar come and start eating from vasant's plate?..

panba scolds kesar "yeh kya kesar hamesha tujhe mein thalli laga k deti hun par tu hamesha vasant k thalli mein khana khaata hai

kesar " mein kya karu aap vasantbha k thalli mein jyaada pyaar daalti isliye khana usme jyada tasty hota hai

vasntbha smiles he knows that kesar will never giveup his habit of eating food from his plate and his habit gives immense pleasure to vasant

he starts feeding kesar with his own hands and kesar enjoys this childlike treatment from vasant

rewa says " haan vasant bha khilayi aapne hi bigaad k rakha hai is nalayak ko ab dekhiye kiski nahi sunta "

kesar "tujhe kyu jalan ho rahi double-decker "

rewa "dekho vasant bha mujhe double-decker kah raha hai "

kesar ' haan to jo hai wohi to kahunga na "

vasantbha intervene "acha jhagda nahi le rewa tum bhi khao "he offers a bite to rewa ?..rewa eats and teases kesar and kesar teases her in return

panba who is witnessing all this comversation is happy to see the bond and love her children shares she remembers how her world was shattered eight years ago wen motaba died all of sudden leaving three children behind him to take car?e panba was all alone and then vasant at the age of 20 step forward to help panba he became mature and responsible in such tender age he promised panba that he will be her strength her courage he will look after his brother and sister he will be the motabha of family and till date he kept his promise?..after motaba sad dismissal he took over the charge of the company his hard work his determination took the company to new height of success and respect?..today vasant is not only a good son good bother but a good human being he is respectful man in the society his goodness and humble nature is acknowledged and appreciated by everyone?vasant has a special bond with everyone but his bond with kesar is beyond words for kesar vasant is his whole world he is his guide his teacher his friend his companion?..and for vasant his soul lies in kesar he has brought him up in like a father his happiness brings smile in his face his dreams brings life to vasant imagination ???

panba was lost in her thoughts suddenly kesar says naughtly panba aap rewa k shaadi jaldi kyu nahi karwa deti hum ka tak is double decker ko jhelenge

panba replies" nahi pehle vasant k shaadi hogi phir rewa k aur phir tera number aayega

kesar said aap bottom se shuruat kar sakti hain I don't mind

panba says chup kar badmaash tapping on kesar head

vasant smiles remembering gulaal and his promise to gulaal

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next morning vasant comes for breakfast and ask for kesar

rewa says " who to kab ka nikal gaya aj college fest hain na...ab to janab ko hot guy banana k chance mila hai...jaante hai na uske dancing aur singing k kitni demand rehti hai

vasant smiles

gulaal on the other hand is getting ready for the hospital mirya and tammy her room partner and college students comes and says "aaj koi program mat rakhna aaj college fest hai aur tum humare saath aa rahi ho "

gulaal say " par mein wanha jaa kar kya karungi "

mirya "jab chalogi to pata chal jayega aur haa koi bahana nahi chalega "

gulaal says thek hai

in evening gulaal gets ready for the fest she calls vasant and says "vasant mujhe meri frns college fest k liye le jaa rahi hai tum bhi chalo naa"

vasant madam humari umar ab bahut jaldi school function attend karne k aa rahi hai aur tum college fest k baat kar rahi ho

gulaal "umar tumhari hogi aur mein jaa rahi hun mat aao mein kis handsome hunk k sath flirting karungi "

vasant says in cheerful manner " try koi bhaav nahi de waala and then say handsome hunk se yaad aya mera kesar bhi aaj wanha hoga "

gulaal interrupts " kesar??jab kesarji hai to pura college bus uski baat karega naa

vasant "u bet"

here in college fest the audience goes frenzy everybody shouts kesar kesar ...kesar comes in the stage and burns the stage with is rocking performance...everyone thoroughly enjoys his performance

gulaal and his friend are on the way mirya is talking to her friend in the fest through cell phone she say "u have missed the most fundoo performance "

kesar finishes his dance and bows and takes leave but crowd started shouting we want more we want more we want more

kesar "more?? what do u want"

crowd shout we want song

kesar ask his frn to hand him guitar

his frn gave him guitar and kesar starts playing the tune and there is pindrop silence

mirya call her friend ?her friend say " put the phone in speaker and listen the boy is playing marvelous tune "

mirya puts the phone in speaker mode and gulaal hears kesar playing the tune piyu maari

and then he sings the song

"piyu maari o piyaari

kyu suku dik paaye naa

tarase zameen man ki

saawan barsao naa

ho tu mara zindada

tu chain re

ho mare chain re"

piyu maari o piyari

gulaal hears it and is deeply touched this song is mesmerizing and heart touching she is wondering what has actually touched her the tune or the voice

she says to her friend " kitna khubsoorat geet hai seedhe dil tak pahunchta hai aisa lagta hai jaise dil ko chu liya hai is awaaz ne "

kesar while playing the song is in deep thoughts some blurred images colors comes in his mind but he cant figure out what it is ??..

he finishes the song and takes leave

in car mirya and tammy are discussing about the guy who has sang the song "soch jisne yeh gana gaya hoga who kitna acha hoga yaar tammy hume is ladke ko dhundhna hoga "

gulaal " u started again ?"..

mirya tere lovestory form ho gayi hai ab hume bhi to chance lene de

gulaal doesn't say anything as she wanted to lost herself in the tune in the voice and in the song

kesar comes out and in the parking he meets his two best buddies sonu and Vicky

Vicky says" dude humne youtube pe tumahara performance load kar diya hai and u know its superhit

Sonu ' aur tumhe pata hai 2000 girls ne tumhe online propose kiya hai

Kesar :" sirf 2000 jab 20000 ho tab batana ok "

Vicky says naughtly" tu kabhi nahi sudherega stud huh"

Kesar in brattish attitude"that's me "

Vicky says "chal hit the pub yaar beer peete hain"

Kesar handle him his sport car's key and say mujhe apne bike k key de mein bike se aauga

Kesar takes the key and sit on the bike he puts helmet

Meanwhile gulaal enters the fest her frn are parking the car she slowly walks suddenly her duppatta get stucks in kesar's bike

Kesar is still wearing the helmet he see the duppatta and look forward gulaal is standing infront of him struggling to free her duppatta stuck in the handle of the bike...

Kesar tries to help but gulaal refuses" mein kar lungi in hestitation"

Kesar smiles naughtly and rest his hand on his pocket and calmly watches gulaal struggling with her duppatta

After few attempts gulaal gave up she looks at him and say yeh stuck ho gaya hai and then avoid looking into his eyes

Kesar who was looking at her without any hesitation replies koi baat nahi ladikyon ko duppata fasane k purani bimari hai aur hum ladko ko duppata chudane k purani aadat ...hota hai

And he help her free her duppatta gave back to her and bid adieu

Gulaal who is still holding her duppatta seing a him riding away she was standing quietly looking in the direction he has gone

Edited by arti07 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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eh lo. all i get from arty barty is a mere

I LOVE YOU.

😡

edit - on second thoughts.. i shall forgive you cos the second chapter is AWESOME!👏😳
Edited by sharneil92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Arti Missed you so much where were you? Nice to see you again.

Love your quote.

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