OS - It Happened One Night

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datqurlx3

@datqurlx3

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

wow that was just awesommmeee

i cant even explain it :)

you're very talented!

please keep writing more

i wish something like this happened in gulaal

i would die lol :)

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Lennie

@Lennie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

I liked it😊

Will be nice to see some sort of scenes like that...

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kelly

@kelly12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

omg it was amazing...i hope this happens ahhh that would be awesome..thanks for making my day ;)

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Shelly I second Yuks, I knew they would love your OS. Great work.

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Binita

@...Binny...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Thoroughly enjoyed reading it.. Excellent work ...😊

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Star

@starasdf

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Heyy

Great OS (: I wish something like this would happen in the real show, maybe not thier first night but some thing along these lines.

Its an open ending to the OS, you could continue and maybe make it a SS? cause it would be intresting to see Gulaal's reaction and what happens at the mandap (:

Star⭐️

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MARCELLE

@MARCELLE

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Absolutely brilliant piece of work...hope and pray the right people are reading your os and hopefully we get to see similar scenes in Gulal!!!..Breathless...thats how I feel!!

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limi

@limi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

gud one...really good but it seems ths wedding will take place...but just cant wait to know what kaser git in his mind

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KesariBlueMoon

@KesariBlueMoon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Very nice alternate story to the serial, I thought it was great reading. I doubt that they will air anything like this though...:)

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@ShellJA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: *Reemz*
I could so imagine this happening that it makes me sad :( I really want an intimate and emotional scene like this but...

Great read!!!👏

Thanks! I don't know why they have trouble with intimacy...Kesar so needs some hugs and so does Gulaa.

Love reading your posts too!