OS - It Happened One Night - Page 4

Originally posted by: queenyuks

And you thought people wouldn't like this *shakes my head at you*
You need to stop being so modest

Yuks

Originally posted by: sbp1971

Shelly I second Yuks, I knew they would love your OS. Great work.

Yuks and Shilpa, You two are really funny. Thanks for your support!

Originally posted by: sukriti19a

wah.. i luved ur imagination...r u a reader of mills n boons...

Got to be honest...yes once upon a time yes! My secret pleasure!

Originally posted by: datqurlx3

wow that was just awesommmeee

i cant even explain it :)

you're very talented!

please keep writing more

i wish something like this happened in gulaal

i would die lol :)

Thanks for you kind works...sometimes we want the CVs to take the story to the next level but they seem to be incapable of deeper emotions!

Originally posted by: Lennie

I liked it😊

Will be nice to see some sort of scenes like that...

@Lennie - I will take this as a great compliment as it is coming from you. I am a huge fan of your daily analysis of the show. It is not the same without reading your perspective.

Thanks! Shelly

Originally posted by: kelly12

omg it was amazing...i hope this happens ahhh that would be awesome..thanks for making my day ;)

😃 You're welcome!

Originally posted by: arti07

loved your os !⭐️

Thank you...I am glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: Binny1247

Thoroughly enjoyed reading it.. Excellent work ...😊

Thanks for the kind words...it was a pleasure getting into the heads of Gulaal and Kesar to write this OS.

Originally posted by: starasdf

Heyy

Great OS (: I wish something like this would happen in the real show, maybe not thier first night but some thing along these lines.

Its an open ending to the OS, you could continue and maybe make it a SS? cause it would be intresting to see Gulaal's reaction and what happens at the mandap (:

Star⭐️

Thanks Star...hmmm you have me thinking...how will Gulaal react after spending the night with Kesar...he is ecstatic but what about her...

i will see what I can do...maybe there is a part 2!

Originally posted by: MARCELLE

Absolutely brilliant piece of work...hope and pray the right people are reading your os and hopefully we get to see similar scenes in Gulal!!!..Breathless...thats how I feel!!

If the right people are reading then they have my permission to use this scene in their show...It would be a great compliment!

Originally posted by: limi

gud one...really good but it seems ths wedding will take place...but just cant wait to know what kaser git in his mind

I don't think the wedding is going to take place! i am glad you liked the OS.