Akshan os:holi special Completed

Its 6 month after guddan aj married Something changed between

Akshat’s pv:he was angry at her because she married him by cheating he is a person who lived 15 years of his life lonely he don’t want to marry anyone after his beloved wife antra’s death but his bahu’s want him to marry and they want their saas at that time also he dont want to move on in life but antra’s last letter changed his mind because she want him to marry at that time he met guddan a girl who live her life just like a kid every person in indore tells her she can’t do anything she is going the first person who smashe cake on indore’s famous he don’t know why he want to marry her but she denied and what she did she marry him by cheating he is angry at her but her childish behavior her cuteness her smile everything attached him she is the one who did evey possible things for him and his family she alwys save his family from every danger save him from jail she always try to become a good saas but his bahu’s didn’t like her they alwys creat problem for her somewhere she is successful in winning Lakshmi bahu’s heart when his brother angad try to harm him she is the one who save him how much he suffered in that mental asylum she save him at that moment he understood she is not imperfect like he thought she is the perfect wife he can get slowly he become her friend he made a place in her heart uncle to her jindal saab he dont know why when she call him jindal saab it give some special feeling know bua ji is there she has to suffer bua ji is alwys behind her I just confront bua ji but she stop him and said she manage and today is holi usually past 15 years I never celebrate holi today morning when I was going office she tell me with puppy eyes that please dont go today is holi so I styed home to celebrate holi with everyone maa was very happy when she know iam ready to celibrate holi where is she past 30 minutes i was waiting for her in our bedroom my thoughts where broken when she came

Guddan:jindal Saab...ap tyaar nahi hua abi thak mei apki kapada nikaltha hu are bapre...kithna kam tha buaji hame jane hi nahi derahi thi mei bulgaya tha apka kapada bahar rakne mei

Aj:it’s ok guddan yahm baito kuch der tum takh gaya hoga na

Akshat make her sit in bed and give her water she just lay in his lap he cresses her hair after sometime they changed their dress and came to hall everybody was busy in celebration

Bua ji:are lalla guddan agaya tumlog chalo rang lagalo ek dusare ko

Durga saru smirked because they know aj don’t like colors

Dadi and Lakshmi scared but what they saw make them happy and shocked aj was applying red color on guddan face

Aj:happy holi guddan she become happy she to apply color on him

Guddan:happy holi jindal saab

They where dancing enjoying holi

To be continued...............

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Everybody enjoying holi kishore came lessi and everyone drank its without knowing the constants its have contained bang in it after sometime Lakshmi and vardan kishore and dugra doing some crazy things saru was cringing dadi asked her what happened she tell want to meet rahul dadi dont understand what happened to her children’s they where doing random things (dadi bua ji doesn’t drink lessi )

At poolside aj guddan in tally toon

Guddu:jindal saab jindal saab ..........uncle......

Aj:just shut up guddan tumne muje uncle bulaya tumhe mei uncle dikthi hu ithna fit and perfect mei

Guddu:ha ha....is umar mei apko uncle nahi tho kya bulaugi

Aj:meri ithni bhi umar nahi hu iam only 40.......

Guddu:jindal saab 40 kam umar hai Is unar mei apki kamar peet sabse mei bahuth dard hogi na

Aj:guddaaan....

Guddu:are bapre ithna gussa sehath keliye acha nahi hai

After sometime its almost night they where sitting on bench and watching sky

Guddu:jindal saab

Aj:hmmm

Guddu:hame sab do do dim rahi hai jindal saab

Aj:muje bhi

Guddu:jindal saab asman mei thare dekrahi hu usmei meri maa or antra ji hogi na

Aj:vo sabse chamakthe huye do thare haina vo antra or tumhara maa hai

Guddu:Hamara hameesha ka sapna tha hamara pathi ke saath aisa chadni raat mei chand ko dekna vo ajj pura hua

Guddu tightly hug aj aj shivered because after 15 year some one is very close to him and that a young girl but his feelings overpowered his mind he also hug guddan and started to kiss her lips he made her lay down and started kiss her all body guddan also want to become his so she give him all rights and removed his and her all clothes he is shymlessly starting her breasts he dont what happened to his mind somewhere he lost his mind just listening his heart he bit her ***le she moan jindal saaab....ahhhh...deere kariye

Aj:iam sorry guddan if I hurt you

Guddu:no jindal saab you will never hurt me i trust you

Aj:I will sooth all you pain trust me....don’t stop i just want to remove my all pain and burdens which I have carrying past 15 years ajj sab kuch mittne do

Guddu:muje bhi apki ban na hai jindal saab sirf apki guddan

They enjoy all night just like there is no tomorrow (an unhe enjoy karne dethe hai haum 😜)

Next morning durga lakshmi and saru was drinking neembu pani

Durga:patha nahi yeh kis ne kiya sar bahuth dard horahi hai

Saru:are durga ji math hi bol meri tho sar abhi gum rahi hai vaise hamara maharani hai kahan ab uda nahi

Lakshmi:sasu ma or aj bhi hamare saath lassi peyatha na kahane vo log

Buaji and dadi came

Buaji:sharam nahi arahi hai tum logo ko kya kar rahi thi bag peekar ha poora media mei achuka hai indore ki masoor chef ki bahu or biwi bang peekar nach rahi thi sharam se mare hamra sar juk gaya....

Durga lakshmi and saru scared

Durga bua ji vo...hum...hame nahi patha...

Bua ji :chup ek dum chup kah hai tumlogo ki saas usi se puchthe hai aisa sanskar diya usne apni bahuon ko

Dadi:didi galthi hogaya maaf kariye inhe mei guddan ko bulathi hu

Lakshmi :dadi par sasu ma kapre par nahi hai

Bua ji dood kar lekar auo tum logo ki saas ko ajj use muje bath karna hai

Lakshmi saru durga and dadi serching guddan

Saru:kaha hai yen guddan ab hame marvaugi kya is bua ji hathon she lagtha hai dar kar apni gar gay but next second what she so make her numb

Saru: duraga diiiiii lakshmi diiiii jaldi ayiye ......

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Aj and guddan sleeping with hugging each other their body was covered by blanket and their cloths are scattered saru’s scream make then wake up aj and guddan shocked because of theirs position guddan just hug him scared

Durga Lakshmi saru and dadi just look at them numbly bua ji came beacuse of saru’s scream she what she was make her angry and numb

Aj just hug guddan to protect her from all eyes

Bua ji:lalla guddan jald se jald neeche chalo sab mere auo......

Everybody left aj give guddan her cloths he also change his dress guddan try to get up

Guddu:auchhh mamaa....its paining

Aj dont know what to he just lift her in arms and carried her to their room he dont what to tell her he just go to bathroom guddan feels she think he is regreting what happened between them they came downstairs after bath

Everyone was in hall

Bua ji:agaya tum log tum logo ki karna mei ki vajah se mera sar juk chunks hai

Guddu:bua ji vo hum......

Bua ji: muje kuch nahi suna hai ek tho tumhari bahu’s sara society ki samne mera sar sharam se jukaya or ab tumlog

Guddu kya kiya vo log

Bua ji just so aj and guddan videoclip of bahu’s doing random things because of bang

Guddu:maaf kariye bua ji....

Bua ji:saas ji seekugi na tumne kya kiya apni pati ke saath band kamare mei nahi kar saktha yeh sab

Aj:bua ji jo gaya so hogay ab is baath ko yahi katham kariye kyuki ismei kisi ki Bhi galthi nahi hai par agr ap inhe saza dena chahthi ho tho muje bhi dedo kyuki meine bhi bang peeya tha

After lot of discussion bua ji ended that topic

At kitchen

Saru:kaha tha na meine durga do or Lakshmi di vo guddan aj ko apni jal pasaugi ab pas gaya na aj

Lakshmi:yeh tho acha hua na aj saasu ma ko apni biwi man rahi hu

Durga:tum pagan hogaya hu kya aj guddan jaisa galthiyon ki dukan ko biwi kyun mano ji I ki beech hogaya vo ek galthi hai samji

At akshan room

Aj was doing his job guddan came with she feel sad when aj ignore her she lye down on bed and started to cry silently aj feels really he just came to her and hug her tightly

Guddu:jindal saab kya app hamra ek hona regret kar rahi hai kya mei ithni buri hu kya

Aj:nahi guddan tum buri nahi yeh sab meri galthi hai meine tumhara fyda udaya muje karo

Guddu nahi jindal saab aisa math bolo jo hogaya usmei kisi ki galthi nhi hai

Aj:tho bul jao sab dont cry

They sleeping hugging each other days passed aj want to spend time with guddan he can’t live without her one day bua ji was humiliating guddan and she faints and came hear and lift her in his arm and call doctor aj was so much angry he shouted at bua ji

Durga:aj app buaji se is tharah bath kaise kar saktha hai vo guddan.....

Aj:bus durga bahu app logo ki problema kya hai use vo har koshiah kar rahi hai ek achi saas bane keliye fir ap log use achi behavior kyun nahi kar saktha yeh bath math bulna vo ap logo ki saas hai😡

Doctor came

Aj:kya hua Doctor guddan ko bathayiye kuch hua this nahi na

Doctor:me jindal ap muje bolne dugi thab bolugi na gaparayiye math congrats mr jindal apki biwi ma bane vala hai bache or ma ki dyaan rakna mei chalthi hu

Aj and everyone shocked

Saru:durga di ab yeh dekna baki the gayatha ham babhi bane vala hai jis umar mei hume ma bantha us umr mei......yeh aj ithni umar hogaya fir bhi javani nahi gaya jis umar mei inhe dada bana tha yeh tho papa bane ki thayari mei hai......ab logo ko kya jawab dugi hum

Durga:chup saru....

Everyone gathered inside aj guddan bedroom

Guddan was sitting in her bed nervously she is going to be mother she just so aj is jindal saab will be happy her thoughts where broken when dadi and bua ji give her blessings

Dadi:lalla dekho tumhara biwi kya kish kabari diya hame yahn auo

Bua ji:aj tumhari har galthi maf karthe hai hum guddan tumne hame ithni kushi ji diya jo ka hi antra nahi diya lalla auo baito apni biwi ke paas vahan kyun kadi hai but aj just leave from their everybody shocked saru smirked Lakshmi dadi and bua ji become sad guddan just started to cry dadi hug her

Guddu:kyun kar rahi hai jindal saab aisa kya kush nahi hai dadi meri maa bane se vo el bar hamere baby ko milne chali gayi she cried hard

Bua ji dadi lakshmi try to console her first time durga feel realy bad for her she hate guddan but its not guddan’s fault its aj fault also know she is expecting their baby he is doing this duraga just came to guddan and I hug her guddan shocked

Durga:dont worry guddan aj augi vo samjaugi tum chinda math karo stress math lo baby keliye acha nahi hai.....

Everyone trying to chear her mood........

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Aj:yeh meine kya kiya aisa ji chali aya guddan ko kithna bura laga hoga ismei uski kya galthi hai meri mei hi in sab ki zimidar huna guddan ko maafi puchna hai aj came home expect guddan everyone was in hall dadi and bua ji saw aj Bua ji was angry aj but what she saw melted her heart aj was standing with lot of toys dress some men came with and started to decorate all house

Buaji:lalla yeh sab...

Dadi:kahan thi tum bechara guddan ro ro kar so gaya

Aj:maa pehle shock mei thi par ab poora indore janugi akshat jindal ka baby and vala hai mei ajj rath ek party rajah hai sab ko bulaya hai guddan ko ma papa ko bhi ap sab bhi Tatar hojauo

Durga:par aj guddan saasu kithna dar gaya apko patha jaldi jakar unhe bathyiye ki app kithna kish hu varna vo galth samjugi

Lakshmi:ha aj jayiye

At that time kishore vardan came

They :kya hua yeh gar decorate kyun kar rahi hai koyi function hai kya

Dadi:smiles zaroor tumdono ki choti vai ya behen and ki kushi hai yeh

Kishore vardan shocked

Durga Lakshmi smiled

Lakshmi:babyboo isliye apse mei kehrahi thi toda muje bhi time deo deka ab muje apni devar ka sewa karna padega

Everyone smiles but saru become angry

Kishor:are va ab tho hame bahuth shooing karna padega hamara chota behen keliye gains vardan

Vardan:ha bai rahul se bhi kehthi hu kush kabari use jaldi ane keliye bolthi hu

Durga:apko kaise patha behen hogi Jaya patha hamare kiy koyi Chota dewar hu gains lakshmi

Lakshmi:bilcul durga di.....they where fighting discussing about their future cuties

Dadi:yeh kanhaa yahi tharah meri parivar ko kush rakna

At akshan room guddan was sleeping her face have dried tears mark aj came and hug her she woke up

Guddu:jindal saab ap agaya hum tho dar gaya tha was yeh soch kar ki

Aj:mei gussa hu???nahi guddan mei shock hogayi thi par mei bahuth kush hu hamara baby arahi hai aj cresses her stomach to feel his baby ajj poora indore janugi ki mei apni baby’s job kithna pyaar karthi hu tumhe patha hai ek papa bane ka feeling kaise hotha hai pehli bar mehasoos kar rahi hu mei thank you gudda for giving me this gift know ready hojauo party keliye

Guddan was wearing saree aj came behind her her fill her mang with sindoor and tied mangalsootra around her neck

At downstairs

Everybody was waiting for then aj announce his happiness to all of them every one clapped they dance bushman and kaushalya gave blessings to guddan revati hug her she was on cloud nine but her happiness died when

First Lady:akshat jindal ko sharm bhi nahi hai jis umar mei inhe dada bana tha is umar mei yeh papa ban rahi hu

2 lady:ab kya bolu ji sharam nam ki koyi chews hi nahi inmei

3 lady :ab aj ki loom arahi hai ab yeh bete or buhu’s ki kya haal hogi is gar mei koyi jagah hi nahi hogi

Guddan stared to cry Durga:apko hamari bare mei sochne ki zaroorath nahi hum sab hameesha ek saath kush rahugi rishty sirf loom se nahi hotha use bad kar hai

Aj:use pehle mei kuch bolo nikal jao meri gar we every one who gone aj make guddan to sit on sofa Lakshmi give guddan to drink water

Guddan:jindal saab kya hamara baby ki ane se rishty badal jaugi

Aj:nahi guddan hamara family sab sebest hai hum sab hameesha saath rahugi hamra baby ki ane se kuch bhi katham nahi hogi

Kishore vardan:ha guddan maa hum sab hameesha pyaar we ek saath rahugi ab aprona bane karo or jaldi hame hamara chota behen dedo

Durga Lakshmi:aisa kaise hame hamra devar dedo dadi and buaji smiled

Buaji:Dekha yaham sab kithna pyaar kartha hai tumhara ane vala bache ko ab tum sirf tumhara sihath ka dyaan rak

Durga:hum gains hamra saasu ma ke dyaan was rakne.......

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Guddan was 7 month pregnant aj and all family pampering her like princess.....aj go for a meeting in dalhi for 2 days guddan miss him badly he also miss her they understand they can’t live without each other

Guddan:jindal saab ko ane do phir ham unhe bolugi ki kithna pyaar a karthi hai hum unhe

Aj:mrs guddan arahi hu mei tumhe kehne keliye ki kithna pyaar karthi hu mei tumhe

Aj came home dadi and bahu’welcome him guddan came running to meet her jindal saab aj saw guddan and tells sab allah guddan....saru smirked evily because she poure tail in staircase...guddan foot slips she cried......jindal saaab.........

Aj and other shocked aj run towards her he is crying holding her big tummy ha maaa....

Aj:kuch nahi hoga guddan mei hua na.....durga shocked when she saw guddan was lying in pool of blood durga:aj time kam hai jald sasu ma ko hospital lekar Ina hai dadi pry:hai bag van meri guddan ki rakna karna

In car kishore driving guddan was laying aj lap

Aj :kuch nahi hoga guddan age band math karna .....

Guddan:jin...dal..saa...b..ham...ra..ba..by.....

Aj:kuch nahi hoga hamra baby ko.......

guddan:ha...mara...ba...by...ko....bachata.....

Aj:guddan kuch math bolo hum abhi hospital pahuchaugi..

Guddu:ji...na..dal..saa...b..hum...ap...ko...kuch....keh...na...cha...ithni...hai....I.......lo...be...you...

She lost her consciousness aj scream:I LOVE YOU TOO Guddan.........gudaaan....

At hospital

Doctor:me jindal mrs jindal ki halath bahuth karab hai khoon bahuth behgaya hai hame I ka operation jaldi karna pandaga

Aj:tho karoona Doctor...der kyun...

Doctor:use pehle apko yeh form fill karna hoga

Durga:yeh kya hai doctor

Doctor:apko baby ya ma ek ko Choon na hai

Everyone shocked

Dadi:doctor hame hamra guddu vapas dedijiye......

Aj:muje mera guddan we bad kar kuch nahi use bachaleejiye he sign the paper

Doctor:hum poora koshish karugi dono ko bachane ki sab bagwan ki hath mei hai pry karo...

Lakshmi:aj...sasuma vo baby ke bina kaise jeeyugi apko this patha hai unhone abhi we bay ki room bhi set kiya....

Aj:meri guddan ki kismath apni nacho se dur Reyna liya hogi lakshmi bahu....he sit in chair thinking about guddu’s memmory....operation successful doctor came

Doctor:mr jindal apni biwi bilcul teek hai unhe rest ki zaroorath hai gabarane ki koyi bath nahi.....

Aj:thank you doctor......or baby......

Doctor:don’t worry me jindal ap sab ki dua kam aya baby bhi safe hai apko baby girl hua hai

At room

Guddan lying in bed weakly her one hand holding their baby he just hug guddan give her a peek on head and start love you ....

Guddu smiles:jindal saab hamara baby ...inhe utayiye aj use apni god mei udatha hai and kiss his baby

Aj:guddan hamra pyaar ki nishani he just hug his family close his heart

Everyone came and they all are busy in exachaging baby in one hand to another guddan aj smiles know their family completed

After one month

Saru was arrested try to kill guddan rahul came to meet his maa and behen aj want him marry a good girls soon he found love in sharanya she become guddan’s new bahu they all lived happily in jb.......