YOU ARE MINE.....AKSHAN FF (CHAPTER 32 updated pg 69) - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akshananju

sahi kaha kajal 2-3 din wait karna toh hum se naa ho payega😆

Shi kha as filhal max writer gayab hai forum se

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Shi kha as filhal max writer gayab hai forum se

haan yaar Shona,Tanu aur cherry sab gayab😒
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I will also suggest the same which anju did😛

🤗🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akshananju

haan yaar Shona,Tanu aur cherry sab gayab😒

Cherry and tanu to fir v forum mein hai shona avni pooja angelsanvika ye log bilkul gayab ho gye hai

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Cherry and tanu to fir v forum mein hai shona avni pooja angelsanvika ye log bilkul gayab ho gye hai

angelsanvika toh kabse gayab hai 😣
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update

Love it

Cont soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Nice update

Love it

Cont soon

thank u ....will cont soon😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hlo everyone.....sunday bina akshan k ...quite tough.....and aaj mere bestie ka bday b h to socha ki aap sbko treat du..by updating two parts of the ts....well maine iss ts ko ss mei convert krne ka socha h...coz ts with an epilogue likhna mushkil h....so without further this thats.....here we go!!😃

Chapter2...lil funny ahead😉

Guddan tu thik h..meri bachi.??"asked dadi who knew something had happened between these two. Tge blush on guddans cheek was a huge proof that they were hiding something.

"Haan dadi..hum bilkul thik h " Said guddan

"Thik h"..said dadi...before turning to akshat .

" Lalla tu ja office tu keh rha tha na aaj imp meeting h ...mai hu ghr pr guddan k saath..."

"Maa... main??" Dadi was almost in situation of bursting out in laughter coz of the comical expressions on his face...hmmm....seemed that her most laayak beta was in another world..

"Lalla tu hi h na....jaa tu tuje kaam h ...guddan ko bed rest kaha h ..tuje nhi...jahan tk muje yaad h.." Said she in a stern voice.

" Ji ..maa"

(Akshat left...guddan and dadi talk...Akshat in car)

Akshats pov..

"Akshat jindal..ye kya kiya...tumne .... Guddan ko kiss kiya tune....dimaag ghaas chrne gya tha kya aapka jindal saab...pta nhi vo kaisa feel kr rhi hogi .. Ab usse baat kaise karu...kahin wo mujse divorce le le...nhi aisa nhi ho skta ."

Pov ends.

(Aj reaches restaurant....angad is already waiting for him there)

"Angad kya hua meeting ka?" Akshat was thankful that atleast now he could distract his mind towrds meeting...but it seemed that fate had something else written..

"Bhai...wo ..app vo.." Angad had no idea what to think of the slight lipstick mark on akshats lips..

"Kyaa angad...saaf saaf kaho".. Akshat was not getting it that why angad was trying to control his laugh...did he knew what happened between him and guddan...no!! he was his brother and would never dare to spy on him..

"Bhai aapne hmare saath goa mei holi nhi kheli thi na..."

"Haan ...kyu??"

"Acha...ab samajh aaya .."

"Kya samjh aaya ...angad?"

"Isliye aap aaj holi khel kr aaye h"

"Holi.??.tu pagal ho gya h angad"akshat was seriuosly considering angad to take to hospital for check up..

"Mai pagal nhi hua...apke chehre pr lga h gulabi rang"..saying so..angad handed his handkerchief to him..and started behaving as innocent to think of lipstick mark as holi colour..

Aj grabbed the handkerchief and swiped his face. Damn!! Guddans lipstick was still there. For the first time he wished earth to swallow him. Wait he had still the same face when he met maa...that means...No!! Maa couldnt hv seen the mark...gosh!! He felt like dying now!

"Bhai muje chlna chahiye" Saying this he literally ran away from there...he very well knew what to when...as he knew his bhai...after all akshat jindal was his bhai and boss here...the most unexpected guy.

(Akshat kept himself engaged in meeting ..wholeday long with angad helping him ...and he thinking about guddan)

"Hello"

"Hello...maa mai lalla..."

"Lalla..tu to..vo meeting mei tha na...kya hua?"

"Maa maine bss ye jaan ne kiye call kia tha ki guddan kaisi h?"

"To tu khud usse kyo nhi puch leta?"

" Vo doc ne usko strain lene k liye mna kia h na"

"Hmmm..guddan thik h tu chinta mtt kr"

(After that dadi went to guddans room)

"Dadi vo.."

"Haan kya hua beta..??"

"Dadi vo hme puchna tha ki jindal saab kaise h..mtlb thik ti h na...unhone apko kuch btaya ?"

"Tu khud hi kyo nhi puch keti?"

"Dadi vo...vo..agr maine unko call ki to fir vo mere liye tention lene lagenge na isliye"

"Acha...haan lalla thik h...uska call aya tha...thik h vo"

Dadi was sure that something had happened between them...akshat had lipstick mark...she had huge blush..they werent looking each other..they might have crossed the line...which they were definately trying to build up...

(Dadi was doing something..when again her fone ranged)

"Haan bol lalla"

"Maa main na 2 din ke lihe bahar jaa rha hu...delhi...kaam h waha to aap plz guddan ka kahayal rkhiye ga..."

"Thik h"

Well in these two days ...... She wondered how many times her fone ranged just to ask for guddan wellness ....she was fed up from him and guddan she also kept on asking about him instead of calling each other they had made dadi there intermidiate...she had to do something...else she would not be able to her work..

"Lalla tu ab khud hi puch le usse muje nhi pta..." With this she kept the fone..

Akshat had no idea what to do..he hasnt talked to guddan past two days ...which was killing him..and there was one beautiful guddan who always left with wanting him every morning...and now even dadi was not helping..

"Chl beta akshat...kb tk bhagega guddan se...bat kr hi le usse"..

NEXT:CHAPTER 3...AND AHEM AHEM☺️

Edited by Viditian1 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#29

Akshat bechara🤣🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 6 years ago
#30

🤣ye sach mein funny tha🤣bechari dadi v frustrate ho gyi inse🤣

Next part v aaj hi milega na😃as aur wait krna hamse nhi ho paa rha plz😒

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