AkshAn OS: Effort

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Jindal House


It's been 1 month since Akshat's court hearing regarding Antara's death & Akshat bought Angad home. All family members were still little angry with Guddan as she helped Vikram except Dadi. Guddan was taking care of Angad & his health was improving day by day. Ahshat was happy with Angad's health but he continued ignoring Guddan as he was still upset with her betrayal. They were staying in same room but Akshat never used to talk to Guddan if it's not necessary. Guddan was trying to mend her relationship with Akshat, every morning she used to bring coffee for Akshat but he always left without drinking. Then the night before Guddan's birthday came. Guddan gave Angad his medicine & started going towards her room.


G(in mind): Kal humra janamdin hai aur haar saal hum mandir jate hai par kal kaise jayein Angad ji ko akela chod ke.. kal Sunday hai ek kam kartein hai hum Jindal Saab ko thodi der Angad ji ka khayal rakhne ko bolenge haan..


Just as she was about to enter her room she heard Akshat talking on phone.


AJ:Haan kal meeting fixed kardijiye mein ajunga yeh contract bohat important hai


Guddan face falls hearing about his meeting. She entered the room took her clothes went to change in washroom. As soon as Guddan went to washroom, Akshat wrapped up his work & slept on his side. It was his daily routine as he doesn't want to talk to Guddan. As Guddan came Akshat was already asleep. As Guddan was about to sleep her phone started ringing, she quickly took her phone & went in balcony. It was Revati. Akshat was awake so he tried to hear their conversation.


G(whispering): Chutki kya hua itni raat ko call kiya?


R: Happy birthday Di..


Guddan then realized it was already midnight.


R: Mein kal apke liye cake leke ayungi


G(whispering):Thank u but bilkul nehi aur iske barein mein kisiko bhi pata nehi chalna chahiye aur aana bhi maat


R: Par di


G(whispering): Chutki tujhe humari kasam


R: Thik hai Di.. Good night


G: Good night


Akshat couldn't hear anything other than Revati's name, as Guddan entered & slept on her side. Akshat acted like he was sleeping.


AJ(in mind): Itni raat ko Revati ne call kyu tha


Next Day


Guddan woke up & usual done her morning chores. She brought coffee for Akshat but as usual he left without a word. Guddan sighed.


G: Happy birthday to me


As Guddan wanted to go to mandir first that's why she didn't had her breakfast. She entered the kitchen & was doing her work when mistakenly she dropped a plate. Durga got angry.


D:Jab tumse kuch ho nehi pata toh koshish kyun karti ho Guddan


G: Durga ji galati se


D: Sab galati se hi toh hota hai.. galatise hi toh tumne AJ pey shak kiya aur unhe jail bhej diya hai na


Guddan was on the verge of crying but she controlled herself, without a word she cleaned the mess & continued her work. It was already evening when she completed her work, in between she just had a word with her parents who wished her on her birthday. She was giving medicines to Angad when Dadi came.


Da: Angad dawai le li?


A: Ji maa bhabhi ki koi baat mein nehi talta


G: Dadi kya aap thodi der Angad ji ke saath reh sakti hai hume mandir jana hai


Da: Haan haan tu jaa mein hu lekin achanak


G: Woh aisehi aaj maan kiya isilye bash


Da: Haan haan tu jaa


Guddan smiled & left quickly. After around one hour Dadi went to her room for rest & Angad was in his room. He got up & went to terrace for some fresh air. As he was walking around all of a sudden his foot slipped. He was about to fall in pool when Akshat holded him just in time.


AJ: Angad tu thik toh haina? Aur tu yahan kya kar raha hai Maine kahan tha na Guddan ke bina kahin nehi janeko.. kahan hai woh?


A: Haan bhai mein bilkul thik hun.. woh akela aisehi baitha tha socha thodi hawa khalun aur bhabhi mandir gayi hai atehi hogi


Just then Guddan entered with prasad.


G: Arey Angad ji aap yahan chaliye yeh lijiye prasad


Angad took prasad from her. She also offered Akshat, he also took without a word. Angad left & Guddan was also leaving but Akshat stopped her by holding her wrist tightly. As he was angry his grip was also tight which hurted Guddan.


AJ: Jab responsibilities samahali nehi jati toh leti kyun ho.. agar mein thodi si aur der karta toh Angad pani mein girjata aur usse chot lagsakti thi..


G: Jindal Saab humari baat


AJ: Agar kahin jana ho mujhe batakar jana mein Angad ka tab khayal rakhunga.. agar tumhari laa parwayi ki wajah se Angad ko kuch bhi hua mujhse bura koi nehi hoga Guddan


Saying this he jerked her hand & left from there. Guddan was already in tears due to Akshat's cold behavior, she caressed her wrist & went to her room. She went near her mother's portrait & started crying.


G: Hume pata hai maa humari galati ki wajah se sab humse aise behave kar rahe hai par atleast humare janamdin wale din toh hume baksh dete


Saying this she went to her side of bed laid down & cried alot. Due to crying she fell asleep. On the other hand Akshat was in his study & started thinking about the way he talked to Guddan. Just then Dadi came & went near him.


Da: Lalla yeh tune thik nehi kiya bechari Guddan ko dant diya mujhe Angad ne sab kuch bataya hai.. arey woh toh mujhse puch kar mandir gayi thi.. manti tu usse gussa hai ki usne tujhse jhoot bola par yeh bhi toh sach hai na ki woh agar nehi hoti tu thodi aaj ahan hota ya Angad ki halat sudharti.. tu aur Durga bahu jab dekho uspe gussa karte rehta hai.. aaj bhi tum dono faltu mein uspe gussa kiyana.. yeh Sahi nehi kiya tune lalla


Akshat started at her. Dadi left.


AJ(in mind): Mujhe itne gusse mein Guddan se baat karna nehi chahiye tha woh toh thi bhi nehi wahan usse Sorry bolna chahiye mujhe


As he got up from his seat a file fell from his table & all papers came out from it. He bowed down & started picking up all papers when his eyes fall on his & Guddan's marriage certificate. He got up looked at it & noticed Guddan's birth date & was shocked.


AJ:Yeh toh aaj ka date hai iska matlab aaj Guddan ka birthday hai


Akshat then realized that's why Revati called Guddan in midnight to wish her & the reason of her for going to temple. Akshat closed his eyes as he was feeling guilty that he scolded her on her birthday when he knew before her marriage Kaushalaya never celebrated her birthday.


AJ:Yeh maine kya kardiya


Akshat quickly went to room & saw Guddan sleeping. He went near her & was sad. Guddan face was red due to crying & it was visible. He noticed her red wrist & breathed heavily.


AJ(in mind):Guddan ne itna kuch kiya aur maine uske issh khas din ko bigad diya.. nehi abhi din khatam nahi hua hai


Akshat left the room.


After Sometime


Guddan woke up as she was hungry. She looked around but Akshat was nowhere. She went to washroom & washed her face, when she came out she noticed a cake was kept. She went near it & smiled. She noticed Happy Birthday was written on the cake.


G: Arey yeh toh strawberry cake hai humara favorite par yahan kaise aya


AJ:Maine banaya hai


Guddan turned towards him. He came near her.


AJ: Happy Birthday Guddan.. aur tumne mujhe bataya kyun nehi ki aaj tumhara birthday hai


G:Woh woh


Akshat & Guddan together said.


AJ&G: Sorry


AJ: Tum Sorry kyun bolrahi ho


G: Woh hum mandir chalegaye Angad ji ko akela chodke isilye ainda aisa nehi karengen


AJ: Guddan tumhari koi galati nehi hai ulta Sorry toh mujhe bolna chahiye gusse mein kitna bhala bura boldiya


Ahshat took Guddan hands & caressed her wrist.


AJ: Dard hua hoga na


G: Nehi Jindal Saab aisa nehi hai


Guddan took her hand back & looked at the cake.


G: Aur iski kya zaroorat thi


AJ: Zaroorat thi Guddan.. tumne mere liye issh parivar jo kuch kiya uske badle itna sa toh mein karhi sakta hun.. abb cake kato


Guddan took the knife & cuts the cake. Both fed each other.


G: Thank you Jindal Saab


Akshat just smiled.


Next Day


As usual Guddan bought coffee for Akshat & expected again he will leave without drinking it but as soon as she came, he took the coffee from her drank it. Guddan was shocked.


AJ:Next 10g chini kam dalna


Saying this he left & Guddan smiled that her little effort was finally working.

The End


Finally completed.. I know I write too much big os but what to do.. Ekbar type start karti hun toh rukti hi nehi.. Hope you guys like it.. Sorry for grammatical mistakes..

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Shona1991 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Are yeh to bAhot mast tha....

Aur jitna long os utna he padhne me maza so don't worry jitna lamba likhna he likh sakti ho.....

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Hey one request can you plz update your all stories in our os index thread??

It will be very helpful to everyone....

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Long os ke bare mein dont worry ham sab ko long parhne mein hi maza ata hai

It was amazing

Keep writing👍🏼

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Arey wah itna acha os likha hai

Continue writing aise bade bade os

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Long os ki koi tension nhi h

Use padne me bht maza aata hai

And it's awesome

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Awesome OS Payal😘😘😘.. I actually want to see AJ celebrating Guddan's B'day on-screen.. how cute it will be to watch

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